Date: 07/12/12 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
bad tomi!!! although can you really blame him? i really hope it all works out...i can see how happy simone is...
Date: 07/12/12 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I could practically feel the awkwardness of that dinner in front of my iPod screen, and I mean that positively. Judging from Gordon's reaction, I bet he's going to try to fix Tom in future chapters.
And....I'm the 500th reader!!! Great job!!!!!!
Date: 07/12/12 12:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Your summary sparked my interest and these first two chapters have certainly kept it. Ah, I can only imagine the issues that will come up from this co-habitation. You can't expect a 'worldly' teenager to suddenly behave drastically different. And, it is a bad idea to move in with someone and bring your child when their is no relationship between your partner and your kid. Not to mention Gordon's views on homosexuality! You should think with your head and not your pants Simone *shakes head*
But, shy unexperienced Bill is sexy. And hot, experienced Tom is sexy.
Date: 07/09/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is such an interesting storyline and your writing is quite good. I admit to having a hard time reading a story about Bill without picturing his Kohl outlined eyes and glossed lips:( but I am certainly anxious for the next chapter.
Date: 07/09/12 12:52 am Title: Chapter 2
So...Gordon's a teacher, but he doesn't allow Bill to go to the school he teaches at? Wow...over doing it much??
This is a pretty promising beginning. I look forward to seeing where this goes and how things unfold.
Date: 07/09/12 12:51 am Title: Chapter 2
So...Gordon's a teacher, but he doesn't allow Bill to go to the school he teaches at? Wow...over doing it much??
This is a pretty promising beginning. I look forward to seeing where this goes and how things unfold.
Date: 07/07/12 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
this sounds like a really good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/07/12 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nice story! I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 07/07/12 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2
This would be so hard for me if I were Tom. He's too breathtaking to just look at everyday. *groan* I'm so sorry, Tom! lol I really do feel your pain!
Date: 07/06/12 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
HAAA GOTCHA, TOM! I laughed so hard picturing how Tom would look like with eyes wandering over Bill's body and that twitch in his boxers he had to hide XDD Tom's 'thing' would react that fast! haha, ch 3 pwease? :P
Date: 07/06/12 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha I'm curious to know what Bill is thinking in this scene, what he's thinking about Tom :) Maybe we'll get to see that in the next chapter? Anyways, I still love it as much and I find Tom's train of thoughts very entertaining ;)
Date: 07/06/12 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh you know he's thinking about it and probably gonna be fantasizing about it too. This is going to be interesting VERY interesting.
Date: 07/06/12 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lol. Tom cracks me up. He's so naughty xD
Date: 07/06/12 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg, i was smiling for a whole time and even after i read that :) damn, i can't wait for next chapter....hmmm, i think it's gonna be so interesting ^.^
Date: 07/06/12 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Tom you naughty naughty! i can't help but not liking gordon in this, i don't know why.
But still, great chapter :P
Date: 07/06/12 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wouldn't be able to keep my hands off of him either. Tomi was reading my mind. Nice job!!! More, please!!!
Date: 07/06/12 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
That will be interesting:-) Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/06/12 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO xD perv Tomi :D more plz? n.n
Date: 07/05/12 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Update soon, this story is interesting! :-)
Date: 07/05/12 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, i couldn't imagine Tom doing "that" with other guys besides Bill, i dunno why XD can't wait for the 2nd chapter! xx