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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: YaoiBubbleKnickKnacks Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow...this has officially become my favorite story! Please write some more!

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

hahahahaha Dear Lord poor Bill hahaha or maybe Bill is going to have Tom doing some Bible interpretations hahahaha OMG i fckin love this fic!!!! really amazing and original

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Well, I think this whole room sharing thing is all a ruse to 'straighten' Tom out, by setting a good example and not giving him the dpace to sneak boys up to his room. But, I think it just may drastically backdfire on Gordon.

I am curious about what scripture Bill and Gusti were studying. It wasn't the bit about homosexuality was it? *winknudge*

You know, I reread this, and I am stunned that Simone and Gordon get along well enough to date, let alone get married, with as different as they are. And to be proposing and moving in together in 2 months, before they have even TOLD Tom she was DATING anyone, is just ridiculous, and self centered on Sim's part knowing how uncomfortable Gordona and Tom would be with eacothers lifestyles. Situations like this are why divorce rates are so high I suppose.

I really loved this chapter, and the whole story. I can't wait to see more! Will any of the chapters be from Bill's pov?

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thank alot for this chapter,it really made my day :) (which was horrible by the way)

And im pretty sure it won't be too long before Bill gets down on all four ;)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

I have faith that Tom will have Bill panting like a dog before long lol. Or at least i'm hoping. And I love Ms Maril, she's awesome :) She and I wrote a fic together, The Newcomer....just sayin' lol.

Reviewer: inamorata Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Absolutely. Tom is magical.

Reviewer: allie_mariexoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

Getting good (:
Love this story ; keep up the good work !

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/12 06:28 am Title: Chapter 3

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: JoshRamseyRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/12 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh my is bill thinking something... I wonder if Bill is the same way and hiding it..

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/12 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad that Simone backed Tom up and encouraged him to tell Gordon he was gay. Rather surprised that Gordon didn't react more strongly if he's as much of a religious fanatic as he seems to be, unless he's biding his time and thinks he'll be able to 'cure' Tom as some Christians think they can with homosexuals with Christian counselling and prayer. I'm wondering just what Bill is thinking, whether he's disgusted or whether he's secretly had homosexual leanings and is intrigued but can't meet Tom's eyes. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Another good chapter.

Reviewer: nyxleigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/13/12 06:40 am Title: Chapter 3

I hate moments like this ;_;...I'm so uncomfortable and I'm scared of how Bill is going to treat Tom since he's glaring at him now.

Reviewer: dillblaxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/12 03:06 am Title: Chapter 3

Keep going, Eli! I always hold a laugh while reading your story, I don't know why. If I'm like that, than this story must be that awesome XD 4th chapter please!

Reviewer: rreloaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/12 01:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Woooooo. Great chapter

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/12 12:02 am Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh piercing glare!Bill sexy, even if it is full of homophobic self debasing hate. Great chapter. But I did find Tom to be a little overly inappropriate in response to Gordon's reaction. Nothing Gordon said was overtly rude or deragatory... I can't wait to see more! I am definitely excited to see a bit more Bill and Tom interaction!

Reviewer: kikobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/12 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hate overly religious people like this. They really infuriate me. I can almost guarantee Gordon will talk Simone into believing that being gay isn't okay and they'll push tom to the point where he'll have to leave.

I can't wait for more!

10/10
*****

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/12 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lol, wow.. That's, erm, extremely selfish and stupid of Simone to even consider marrying a guy who's against gay people, having a homosexual child herself. What the hell was she thinking? And to have them move in?? After two months of knowing Gordon? It's like she's not thinking of Tom at all. And the real clencher is that she makes *Tom* admit it to Gordon, when she should be looking out for her kid and tell him herself.

I'm sorry, that just... really gets me :/

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/12 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, Toms news of being gay went better than I expected lol. I wonder tho, what Bill's stare means. Disapproval? Surprise? Intrigue? Disgust? Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/12 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ooh this is going to be interesting in the future chapters. Something tells me Bill is not going to make him feel welcomed when Tom and his mom move in.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/12 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

well at least it wasn't a big blowout...it's progress...and of course bill's a stunner to tom...

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