Date: 08/01/12 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha I laughed when Bill saw Tom's boner under the sheets. If I were Bill, I would've just explained to Tom that Jesus had long hair, and he was trying to emulate his look.
Date: 08/01/12 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, this was an excellent chapter. Methinks Bill is really asking Tom questions because he's confused about his own sexuality, especially as he thinks being gay is a sin. And Tom is at the start of what promises to be a serious obsession with his soon-to-be stepbrother. I hope Bill won't get hurt, despite the religious mania he's a really sweet, kind boy. Glad you had a good holiday. Now you have to keep writing...pretty please.
Date: 08/01/12 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg, Bill is so sweet, so innocent...i wonder how Tom will "break" this? :)
Date: 08/01/12 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm...something tells me that Bill is starting to become attracted to Tom...interesting...very interesting.
Date: 08/01/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG so freaken good and I love the little bits of subtle humour with tom
Date: 08/01/12 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
AHHHHHHH omgomgomgmgomgggg
lol dear lord amazing end!!! just awesome i love Tom and poor Bill hahaha little innocent angel omg im dying to know what is he really thinking about Tom sakdmaskdmas *u*
i wonder what is the story whit the hair laskdmalskd
gosh when Bill said “No one at my church is like you.” my heart just hurt so horrible >.< shame on Bill he is going to regret it hahaha i hope xD
:D thank you so much for the chapter really glad you upload *u* your fic is just awesome!!!
Date: 08/01/12 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bill is so obviously gay. xD
I can't believe he freaked out like that. It was just sad. xD
I loved it! More please!
10/10
*****
Date: 08/01/12 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm soooo happy, I was checking for an uptade everyday :D:D. Bill seems to be harder to get than I thought and it was pretty rude of him when he said that Tom was not normal. I think that he's really confuse with his sexual orientation and his feelings. But Tom will probably fix that.
Date: 07/28/12 05:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Noo, i don't think so. but i know they become in love with each other xD Please update more?
Date: 07/22/12 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Depends on how hard he works...lol maybe Bill like's him secretly :D
Date: 07/18/12 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story sooo much! Only 4 chapters in and it's already one of my favorites :D you are such a good writer and I can't wait for the next chapter! I really hope it's up soon :D
Date: 07/18/12 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think Tom will be able to do it.
And I actually like Gordon, despite him being overly Religious. At least he isn't trying to push off his religion onto Tom, and he doesn't have a problem with him being around Bill. I'm actually surprised Gordon lets Bill have his hair long, and wear the clothes he does if he's as religious as you make him out to be. Oh well!
More please!
10/10
*****
Date: 07/18/12 11:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw, this story brings a smile to my face. Update! :)
Date: 07/18/12 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4
OOO... This is so good!!! I love it!!!
Date: 07/18/12 02:02 am Title: Chapter 4
omh i think im going to love this story -///-
Date: 07/18/12 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4
I DO! Some how though I think Bill is secretly gay and just hides it from Gordon.
Date: 07/17/12 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
of course Bill would have his perfect little ass up in the air right as Tom walked in ;) loving this so far
Date: 07/17/12 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Corrupted!Tom seduces Innocent!Bill. I love how well-written this is, especially since I had my doubts when I first read the summary. I thought it would be a total cliche, but you made Bill and Gordon way more Christian than most stories would, I think. It's pretty interesting and I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 07/17/12 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg, i love that story even more :) and i'm also trying imagine Georg and Andreas looking at Bill when he went to the room....wooohhhoooo....can't wait to read the next chapter :)