Date: 08/13/12 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story!!Can`t wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/13/12 04:22 am Title: Chapter 7
man i get the feeling simone is gonna ask tom to change for gordon...
Date: 08/12/12 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
I got down to the bottom of this chapter, ready to click 'next' but then nearly cried when i saw there was no next chapter! T_T I love this fanfic! Haha gordon reminds me of my mom. I get why bill is so shy and narrow minded though, i mean i used to be just like that lol. I don't like how simone's acting though, i mean she was so supportive of her son...i think she's pulling too much of a 180. i mean i expected her to kind of try and get gordon and tom to compromise their conversations pre-move, not completely take gordon's side like she's done so far. Otherwise, though, i love this fanfic!
Date: 08/12/12 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay it's featured, you really deserve it ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't get it though, there are so many great fics that are WAY better than this one.. But I'm very grateful, even though I don't get it XD
Date: 08/11/12 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Mm, as a suggestion, when using pronouns regarding God, you really should capitalize the 'h'. As in, Because God made my brain and He wants me to like girls.
But anyways, I enjoyed reading this aftermath.
Author's Response: Oh, I'll fix that as soon as I've got time. Thanks!
Date: 08/11/12 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
LOL I wonder if Bill's gay.. or just trying to figure out if he is straight or gay LOL good story though can't wait for more
Date: 08/11/12 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ohhhh I get so angry by these christian's opinions!! Arrrrgh.. But I'm digging Tom's reaction, and his interaction with Bill. MORE PLEASEE!!
Date: 08/11/12 06:25 am Title: Chapter 7
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/11/12 12:57 am Title: Chapter 7
omg, it's like it's my birthday...I seriously wished on the way home that this would be updated, I was so in the mood for it xD yayyyy. *goes back up to read* aaaaaaaaaaaah, come on, Tom, it's so obvious that Bill's gay xD poor Bill's "straight braint" hahaha. dude, why is the chapter so short? lol, want moreeeeeeeeeee :P how fast do you normally update, by the way? I recently came aboard, so I don't know your pattern :)
Author's Response: Seriously? XD I'm so glad you are liking my story so far! I usually update like twice a week, depends on how much time I've got on my hands. Thank you so much for reading, I hope you'll come back for more n__n
Date: 08/10/12 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
Story gets more interesting every chapter
Date: 08/10/12 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Heh straight brain. Awesome!
Date: 08/10/12 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lol I love how Tom makes Bill so umcomfortable.
Date: 08/10/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
As I said on Twitter, I planned on leaving a review! :3 I haven't
quite left a one yet, but I have read all of the posted chapters!
So this is a '7 chapters in one review' sort-of thing. n_n
I really enjoy the dynamic characters in this story! I was actually
shocked at Tom's outburst in the last chapter, but I guess he had to
defend himself sooner or later, and he does seem like a character that's
willing to be free with himself regardless of others. As for Bill;
He's captured my interest! In most fics, he's the 'obvious gay' one
while Tom is the 'straight-acting' boy. Bill's startled reactions and
innocence are beyond endearing - Though, I think I'm catching on to why
he always ends up having to run away from Tom when sexual subjects are
brought up. (But I'll keep that to myself; That way, if I'm wrong, I
won't feel stupid for sharing! xD) And as for Gordon, I'm curious as
to whether his angry actions will come up again though, so I'll have
to wait for that, and Simone's first talk with Tom after what happened
last chapter. Dun dun duuuuuun. xD
I just wanted to let you know I'm really intrigued, and enjoy the
direction this fic is taking shown by the mere first seven chapters.
(Not to mention, I'm waiting for the point where Bill realizes
something about himself.. Oh la la, hahaa.) :D
Can't wait for the next update, and the banner is lovely!
Xx Sammy
Author's Response: PURPLE REVIEEEW!!rnasdfgdsd I just had to reply to this, it just made me smile from ear to ear. I'm so glad that you're intrigued by my story and that you think it's got promise. And I think you're right about Bill, he just needs a little (or make that a big) push from Tom in the right direction ;-) Give him time, he'll come around XD Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely review. You seem really sweet n___n rnrn- KussMichJetzt
Date: 08/10/12 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
It's a shame that Gordon is the way he is... and that dark sides is no good...i hope he at least mentions it to his mom...
Date: 08/10/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
God, I am liking Gordon less and less. Which is bad, cuz I normally like Gordon, and tend rro be ultra lenient on his misgivings. But not this time. He has no right to talk to Tom like that, especially not without all three of them (Tom,Simone and Gordon) sat down and had a conversation about rules and discipline. Btw, where did Simone go during church? I don't get the feeling she was there, and apparently she wasn't home when Tom got there...
Gordon just...rammed into Bill? Without an apology? My god, what is wrong with that man?! Bill didn't do anything. Unless he really is an abusive asshat. Which I don't doubt after this. Maybe he suspects Bill is gay? I dunno....
But I really enjoyed Bill and Tom's convo in this one. Poor flustered Bill, but I think Tom mightve actually made some headway this time.
I'm really curious what Simone's reaction is going to be when she finds stuff out..
Wonderful chapter! I love how this story is so controversial, and capable of getting me riled up. Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like Gordon is usually the good guy in most fics and that it's Jörg who's always the crazy one XD But not this time. (I think) you'll be seeing more of Gordon's dark side in the following chapters. Simone was just out and about, doing some errands or whatever, she was not at the church service. Tom will talk to her soon. rnrnI guess it is kind of controversial, I think I might have offended some people with the way Tom was acting in church and his opinion of the Bible. But that's just the way his character is in this story. rnrnI'm glad you're following this story, your reviews always make me smile! I just can't wait for you to read what's coming soon, when Bill finally gives in to Tom. I mean, he's so pure and innocent and then he meets Tom who's.. You know, Tom. That's bound to get interesting, right? XD rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing! n_n
Date: 08/10/12 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bill you.beautiful sinner I think you just lie to your stepbrother hehehe xD great cap I love how Tom make his point of view clear to Gordon and to Bill!!! XD thanks thanks for share your fic is really great read it!!!
Date: 08/10/12 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love this story!! Bill is too cute when he is so shy. I wonder how long he will manage to hide his curiosity. I think he secretly admires Tom for his way of living, even if he doesn't want to admit it to himself. :) Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Date: 08/10/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
I do believe Tom is starting to open Bill's eyes to what is going and making him question what he's being taught.
Date: 08/10/12 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
I totally agree with how Tom described the science thing, but I see it a bit more like a "right" or "wrong" signal in your brain telling you of you like boys or girls. Please update soon!!!!