Date: 08/15/12 07:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Great. Now I can't look at Bill or Tom anymore xD
Date: 08/15/12 07:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Great. Now I can't look at Bill or Tom anymore xD
Date: 08/15/12 02:40 am Title: Chapter 8
ooooh, how exiting! i absolutely love it!! :D i'm really hoping it'll be bill who walkes in on them! being all like "morning, i forgot.. OH LORD TOM COVER UP!!" hahaha. him already seeming pretty confused with his sexuality and all.. haha xD i feel like it would push gordon too far if he was the one to walk in right now.. like.. he might want to preform an exsorsism or something! :O
but this is totally awesome and i really can't wait or more! also, i'm wondering if maybe even simone might be a bit disappointed in tom for this one, seeing as how gabriel is underage and all that..
Date: 08/14/12 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
This Gabriel has Bill written all over him. I can smell it too...or is that the girls' shaving lotion?
Author's Response: You don't mean you think Gabriel is really Bill, right? A lot of people seem to be under that impression xD I can assure you it's not, but he does have some similarities to him of course. Young, skinny, slightly girly looking. Guess Tom has a type ;-)
Date: 08/14/12 03:54 am Title: Chapter 8
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/14/12 03:38 am Title: Chapter 8
Hahha, i hope it's Gordon. He's going to be freaking pissed off!xD
Date: 08/14/12 02:41 am Title: Chapter 8
It's totally Bill! Can't wait for Tom to find out!
Date: 08/14/12 02:13 am Title: Chapter 8
Congrats on the feature!:-)
Lovely chapter, and I would truly love to see Bill walking in on Tom and the slutty boy's morning gymnastics in bed, lol:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh, and I guess you'll enjoy the next chapter then :)
Date: 08/14/12 12:45 am Title: Chapter 8
jajajaja billlllllllllllllllllll
Date: 08/14/12 12:43 am Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait to read the next chapter! XD
Date: 08/13/12 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I also want to think 'gabriel' is Bill, buuuuuut, why would Bill cut his hair to go out in disguise? And Tom didn't really seem to drink THAT much to not recognise him...so I'm just thinking he chose someone who LOOKS LIKE Bill.
Author's Response: Everyone seems to have a suspicion that Gabriel is really Bill! xD But I can assure you he isn't. Gabriel has short hair and Tom would've recognized his face. But he DOES have a lot of the qualities Bill has though, skinny, young, slightly girly looking... ;-)
Date: 08/13/12 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Its either Bill or Gordon...though I have a sneaky suspicion that Bill is Gabriel...I really do.
Author's Response: You're actually not the only one who had that suspicion xD But Tom would've recognized his face, I can assure you it's not Bill ;) Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Date: 08/13/12 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Lmao, I'm wondering if "Gabriel" is actually Bill in disguise. Black hair? Eyeliner? An angel's name?
Author's Response: Hahahaha, I'm sorry to disappoint you but I can assure you that Gabriel is not Bill in disguise XD Gabriel has short hair and isn't anywhere near as gorgeous as Billy boy ;)
Date: 08/13/12 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
jksaksdaksdashdjasdhasjdhasjdahksdhajsdhasd hahahhaah OMG OMG mm please let it be BILL hhahahaah xD
the chapter was awesome but hope you upload tomorrow kasdjakd xD
and OMG CONGRATULATIONS the fic is Featured hugs from Colombia yu really deserve it your fic is just amazing and controversial
Author's Response: You might be right there ;-) I will upload today to tomorrow since this one was more of a filler than a real chapter. Thank you so much, I still can't believe it got featured O_O
Date: 08/13/12 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hope it's Bill and not Gordon. way more entertainment xD I also love how the kid's name is Gabriel...super Biblical name. xD
Author's Response: About Gabriel's name, it's funny you should mention that.. You'll see xD
Date: 08/13/12 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
My guess is Simone...lol not really. Its really kind of a toss up here.
This chapter was sooooo a filler. I really wish we could've had a little more subtance, but *shrugs* what can ya do? Fillers are necessary sometime. I'm just surprised Gordon didn't tell Simone what happened at the church. Guess he knew better than to go to her about it, especially when he was so obviously in the wrong with her son. I also would've thought Tom could find a moment in a week to talk to her too...but mehh
I look forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry about that but I felt like I couldn't drag this chapter out any longer. I promise the next chapter won't be this boring xD Thanks for your lovely reviews! I will post the next chapter today or tomorrow :)
Date: 08/13/12 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH MYGOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I love the way you write the characters, how Bill is all innocent but deep down kind of interested. And Tom is totally perfect! Also I love how you mix seriousness with hilarious parts, Idk i'm just totally in love with your story :D I caaan't wait for more!
Oh and daaamn Bill sure will have a heart attack. Or maybe they end up having a threesome o-o Please update soon!
Author's Response: asdgdfj thank you so much for this lovely review! I don't know which parts you found funny though,I don't write those parts intentionally, but I guess it's just when I'm in Tom's head they come to me automatically xD Bill will sure be surprised but I can assure you there won't be a threesome. You have to give our little virgin some time to come around ;-) Thanks for reading, stay tuned! rnrnxx
Date: 08/13/12 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
I was wonderin' when they'd meet.. but hell! BILL!!!
Date: 08/13/12 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Somehow the image of Bill working on a construction project makes me concerned. I can't wait for him to walk in on Tom's little surprise ;)
Date: 08/13/12 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ohhhh I have a bad feeling about this !