Date: 08/15/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
why the cliff hanger! i love the chapter, amazing. :) please update soon!!! This is an amazing Fanfiction!
Date: 08/15/12 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
AHHHH!!!! i waited two whole days for a cliffhanger?!! lol. i was checking on this and checking in this and i was excited it was here. thanks for the bit of fun. but now i have to do the same thing over again because it's just sooooooo cliffhangery. lol. waaaaahhh xD but anyway, Bill is sooooooooooooooooo gay loll! yayyyyy, kiss time next, and tom's all in bed in his boxers...;)
Author's Response: I'M SOWWWWYYYY D: I know it's mean but it was necessarily XD I will post the next chapter first thing in the morning, I promise! And I'll try my best not to leave you with a cliffhanger in the future, I know how much I hate them myself. I hope you'll enjoy this next chapter, thanks for leaving a review. *hugs*
Date: 08/15/12 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL! :O
I'm trying to remember you apologized for the cliffhanger but my
little fanfic heart can't take such grand suspense! Hahaa.
Oh, this chapter was absolutely wonderful and the twist on who Tom's
night stand was.. Wow. xD When a story is absolutely fantastic, I really
get into it (As if the whole time I'm hiding in a bush or behind a lamp
watching the scene) - And I can't help but get drawn right into
this storyline you've created. I even realized I was holding my
breath a bit at that last part. Bill and Tom might get a little
kissy-kissy and that in itself fascinates me. ;)
I loved this update, dearie, and I'm EAGERLY awaiting the next. *-*
Xx Sammy
Author's Response: HEEEYY YOUUUU *tackles* I'm weally, weally sowwy for the cliffhanger, but it was necessarily Dx But you'll see the outcome of the situation very soon, I'll post the next chappie tomorrow :3 I hope I won't disappoint you! Thanks for reading and for leaving yet another lovely review. *squishes*
Date: 08/15/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
No! Really? Bill is full of surprises, isn¨t he?
Author's Response: You have no idea n_n
Date: 08/15/12 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
kyaaaaaaaaa!!!! >.< omg Bill actually considering the offer *_* things are getting interesting I love it!! :D
Date: 08/15/12 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
*enter the parade* he's melting! Heees meeeeeeelting!
Wow....Bill knows Gabe? Craaazy shiz. And the way Gabe reacted when he saw Bill makes me worry about the rest of the congregation. I mean, the pastor is gonna say that stuff, and there's always a few die hards, but he makes it seem like the whole congregation is like Gordon...
I'm glad Bill had that chat with his mom. I hope she gets through to Gorson, or opens her eyes that she can't live with someone like that when her son is who he is.
I just feel so bad for poor confused Bill, but at least we've made some progress. I wonder if he told Gordon about this?
Wonderful chapter. I am anxious to see more! Keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 08/15/12 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ooooh...Bill's starting to come around I see *In a Mr. Burns type voice* Excellent. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 08/15/12 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Gaah!! Moore, I need mooore!! Great story!
Date: 08/15/12 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG *gasp* Bill!! LOOLOLOLOLLOLOL xD gahh! why did you have to end it right when it gets even B E T T E R ? now you have me all excited and everything :P Great story btw! PLEASE TRY TO POST UP THE REST ASAP! :)
Date: 08/15/12 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
I feel that, if i stop commenting to each of your chapters, you will stop making them... and right now its the last thing i want. Please bring the next one soon PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Yes, that's unfortunately exactly how it is so you better keep those reviews coming! Haha nah, jk :D But I DO apprechiate them a lot and they are what inspires me to write more ^_^ I hope you'll keep following my story, thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/12 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg! Is Bill going through with this?! :D really want next chapter now!!!
Date: 08/15/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
really good well done again
Date: 08/15/12 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
O_O I just died from a heart attack...but I came back, cause I wanna read the next chapter!
Hope that the kiss will lead to other stuff...if you know what I mean *wiggle eyebrows*
Date: 08/15/12 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oooee!! I totally can NOT wait for the next update! Cliffhanger... -.- Love the story
Author's Response: Yuss, sorry about that :3 I'll post the next chapter in the morning, thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/12 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg I wanna facepalm Bill!
Date: 08/15/12 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was a brilliant chapter. You have this way of making conversations sound so real and natural. I do think that Tom is a prize dick actually, quite selfish and mean the way he baits Bill and laughs at him, and so offhand with poor Gabriel. I'm hoping that if - when - he and Bill get together that he falls hard for his stepbrother and learns to be careful of hurting other people's feelings. Although, of course, I can understand him being defensive in such a homophobic environment. Something that hasn't appeared as an issue is that when Simone and Gordon marry Bill and Tom will be related so any romantic or sexual relationhship between them would technically be incest even if they aren't blood relatives. Can't wait for the next chapter. Soon please.
Author's Response: I do? O_O Wow, thank you! You're really in on something with pretty much everything you're saying here. Tom is quite a dick and he doesn't care about the feelings of whomever he's fucking at all. That might of course change when he grows feelings for someone himself ;-) Thanks for reading, stay tuned!
Date: 08/15/12 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this story..... keep writing. Can't wait for the next read.....
Date: 08/15/12 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
OHHHHHHHHHHH SNAP! SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
I'm so excited! I can't wait for the next chapter so hurryyyyy!
10/10
*****
Date: 08/15/12 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
DEAD
ahhhhhhhhhhhh
X'D let me hate you with all my love hahah xD! amazing chapter!!!!!
my poor table earn some punches cause of my feelings for the end
haahahaha GOSH BILL
OMG kdamldkmaldkamsdakdmalkdamd cant believe it oH DEAR LORD the next part must be so f AWESOME cant wait lskamdlasd really let me love you your fic is awesome and congrats again for being featured!! love from Colombia!!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm loving your excitement xD Makes me wanna write more right away! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter ^_^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/12 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
noooo and yeeeees, omg that kiss shall be the epitome of hotness!