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Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/12 09:39 am Title: Chapter 9

Gnaaaahhh!!!! Omgomg. Oh. Mah. Gawd. *thrums with supressed energy* SQUUUUUEEEEEEE! *bounces around*

*compposes self* I'm sorry you had to witness that, but now that the fangirling is over...*clears throat* I'm really starting to worry about this church. Before, it was kinda just the Pastor being the pastor, and there's always a few die hards, but Gabriel's reaction really has me worrying about it as a whole, and worried about Gordon's power in the church community. It was also a definite shock that Bill knew him. Very cool info.

I'm wondering if Bill told his dad about this deal Tom tried to make and if Gordon told his son to do it, y'now thinking Bill is straight or too cowed to go against him sexuality wise, or if this is Bill's diiirty little secret.

I just feel so bad for poor confused Bill, he's so obviously trying to convince himself of things... *cuddles*

Wonderful work! I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: adfsghahjk I'm fangirling over the fact that you're fangirling xDrnYes, Gabriel shouldn't have done what he did, I think. We'll see how that plays out. rnI can inform you that Bill did not tell his dad about Tom's little offer, this is Bill thinking for himself. But is it as much him wanting to give Tom a Bible lecture or is it more the fact that he just wants to kiss him? I guess only Bill knows ;-) And yeah, our little virgin boy will soon be going through some serious inner struggle soon. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: maumau Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/12 04:54 am Title: Chapter 2

when Tom coursed...reminded me of every time I coursed in my boyfriends grandparents house... extremely religious people xD

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/12 12:50 am Title: Chapter 9

O_____O awe yeah! I knew curiosity would get him. Tom really will be the devils son if Gordon finds out about this!

Reviewer: KaulitzChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

I loved the beginning xD and the ending....actually....the whole chapter :)

Reviewer: Cheshire x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

This is the fluffiest, cutest thing I have ever set my eyes upon. Keep going!!! I need more >.

Reviewer: Cheshire x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

TOM YOU LEGEND

Reviewer: Cheshire x Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

ASFGFDJIUKSDF SO CUTE ;;>.<

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh, Bill really wants to get Tom a Bible lecture! But what lurks underneath... who knows!

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

*evil laugh* oh this is just too good!! xD

i had sort of hoped that maybe bill knew gabriel, but the fact that they go to the same church just makes it all the better (then again, how else would bill have known him?)

 

i'm literally sitting on the edge of my chair as i read this, it's one of hte more awesome plotlines out there at the moment (at least of what i'm reading)

looking forward to more!!! :D



Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!

Reviewer: moncanis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

asdfghjkl. OMG Bill wants the kiss! asdfghjkl

Reviewer: coco Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 10:29 am Title: Chapter 9

love this story. great original premise (for this site), great dialogue, character development, really funny! and well written. i'd almost given up on this site when i found your story, kudos. it's just excellent

Author's Response: Wow, this is one of the greatest reviews I've received actually. Thanks for reading, I hope I won't disappoint you in the following chapters n_n

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 08:48 am Title: Chapter 9

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: AlexisKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 07:45 am Title: Chapter 9

I can't tell you just how much I hate the Christians here (although maybe it's just a tiny but exaggerated). In fact their attitude towards homosexuality is the reason I am not a Christian. so you struck a giant nerve ;)

But back to the story, I would be very happy to see if Tom succeed in converting Gordon and Bill to "normal". And I can't wait! :)

Reviewer: Annie Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 07:25 am Title: Chapter 9

Holy shit!!
I think deep inside Bill knows he's not like his father, and he's been lying to himself who he really is...
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! ^^

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 12:35 am Title: Chapter 9

You know, I just noticed Bill's side pairing, and I got really, really excited. *wink wink* :)

Author's Response: Well, about that.. I wasn't sure weather I should add that pairing or not, it's sort of hard to explain. You'll just have to wait and see ;-) I love me some Billshido though

Reviewer: JoshRamseyRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG I am shocked! LOL I wonder what it will be like after that happens woo hoo!!!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

bow chicka wow wow!
have i reviewed this story before? i don't think so. oh well, i've been lurking, now i'm reading. can't wait for tom to lead bill down the path of sin.

Reviewer: LonelyHumanoid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

They're on their way to being butt buddies!!! Update fast, please!!!

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Take The Offer! Take The Offer Bill xD!
Yes, so stoked about this story :D I think its great. Alot of people should/are reading this! Keep going.

Author's Response: Oh, he will ;-) Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely review ^_^ xx

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

This should be interesting...i can't wait to see how it turns out...

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