Date: 09/12/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
You are so right; Tom could use a good lesson in subtlety if he really wants to win Bill over. If he just pretended a little to empathise with Bill's point of view I'm sure Bill is innocent enough not to catch on to Tom's game. Instead, Tom's using a sledgehammer to crack a nut when he would do so much better using a softly, softly approach. I'm feeling really sorry for poor Gabriel; the fuck meant nothing to Tom and Tom doesn't even care that he's ruined the poor guy's life. Again, his attitude isn't going to win him any points with Bill. I am so hoping that Tom gets his heart broken or something - he deserves payback of some kind for his couldn't give a damn approach to life. I did think it was really funny, though, that Simone wouldn't back Tom up over his supposed allergy. And the tickling scene was fun too. Bill really is just too naive to realise the effect something like that could have on Tom. Okay, I think I've said enough. As you might tell I am really in to this story. I love it, even though Tom makes me so damned mad. Really looking forward to the next chapter and Bill and Tom sharing that tiny tent.
Date: 09/12/12 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the wonderfull update!!
Date: 09/12/12 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
*giggles* i giggled thru the entire chapter and everyone in the nail salon i was sitting at waiting to have my nails done kept looking at me like I was nutz :D i loved the chapter!
Author's Response: That's funny XD I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/11/12 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
Please, please continue with da chapters!!! I need to know what hapen after!!!!
Date: 09/06/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
I am loving this story so much! Girl, you're doing a great job. I can't wait to read what's next. :)
Date: 09/06/12 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Need a new chapter now! Im glad to see people still write amazing fictions because every good fiction is like from 2 years ago or smth. I love how rebel Tom is and i can smell a first time...haha new chaper soon please x
Date: 09/05/12 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 11
lol , pliz update it hehehe...
Date: 09/05/12 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love this!
Date: 09/05/12 03:36 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm loving this story. Tom is my kind of guy!
Date: 09/04/12 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG!! It's awesome!! Please don't let me hanging here!! D: I really hope you continue it soon (:
Date: 09/03/12 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love Love this i seriously just read this all in one go! I need more! ;p
Date: 09/02/12 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Brilliantly Amazing
Date: 09/02/12 07:12 am Title: Chapter 11
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/01/12 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
EPIC PERFECT OOMGG!!!! i just love it so much
poor Bill i kind of relate to him when i was younger hahahah TuT... but yeah when you start knowing or discovering another points of view your mind starts to understand and accept some things and make your own judgment...
so hope Bill finds some help with Tom ^^ and hope Tom realize he can be a better person and not just think about Bill like some piece of meat that he needs just for pleasure :(
g sorry i get some kind of inspired hahaaha
Thank youuuu!! so much for this chap really awesome cant wait for more!!! :D!!!!!
Date: 09/01/12 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! rock his puritan pants off, Tom! xD ooh, man, yay for angry makeout. maybe Bill should just give in adn get over whining if he really thinks he'll go to hell for that. I mean, what's done is done, right? ;)
Date: 09/01/12 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg omg omg. now they're getting somewhere. Yay for Tom for getting some kisses in. Poor Bill though. He's so confused and frustrated. Nice chapter. :)
Date: 09/01/12 11:06 am Title: Chapter 11
naughty tom. I love it
Date: 09/01/12 09:47 am Title: Chapter 11
Absolutely incredible chapter, I loved it way to much, lol. But then again I am a total sucker for angst, inner turmoil, conflicts between inner believes society and parents etch into you and your true yourself - that stuff is so yammy to read. I wouldn't be mad if you tortured Bill a little (read a lot, lol) longer before he cracks and fully gives in to his desires. His dilema and Tom and Bill's electrifying chemistry is so, so well written in this chapter. Passionate, confused, frustrated, angry and unstoppable kisses are the best:-) ( in fiction at least).
Great work, lady. By looking into your story intro and warnings, I can't wait to see how on earth lovely Bill derails and ends up in hands of Bu (after all that incredibly steamy stuff with Tom). Can't wait to see....
Date: 09/01/12 09:32 am Title: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter!