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Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

I need moooooore. This is such a hot, awkward, sexy hexy story. By far one of the cutest I've read. Poor confused bill :c
And tom being a jerk and not caring about his feelings. Wah. More xD

Reviewer: Midnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

Aaahw, I love this story! Like, it's all about cute Bill and (pretty irritating) douchebag Tom. I love the way you write!

New chappie soon? :D

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

KussMichJetzt you are officially my favorite other!!!
A really good chapter.
Tom is soo mean, wonderful :-)

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 14

Bet it was Gustibear who disturbed them. This is a great chapter. So happy Bill has admitted to having homosexual feelings. He must be terrified of the consequences, though, all mixed in with that curiosity. Tom is starting to wrestle a little with his emotions but is obviously not ready to give up his prick-of-the-year award yet. Can't blame him for pushing Bill into touching him...he has the guy he's been lusting over for ages wanting to explore his sexuality with Tom. How could he resist when he's so worked up already. This is such a good story, I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 08:56 am Title: Chapter 14

i do so love a virginal billa

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 07:47 am Title: Chapter 14

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: DiamondDustK Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 12:04 am Title: Chapter 14

Nice chapter. I was thrilled to receive an update. I'm glad they're making progress and I get why Tom is behaving like such a prick but it is still a bit heartbreaking. I also understand about removing Bushido from the pairings although having some jealousy on Tom's part would be a good thing since a jealous and possessive Tom is fun to read. Anxious to see what's coming next:D

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

LOL "for the love of god" is definitely the worst way to preface "blow me" to Bill, methinks. Haha

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

poor tom...he's just gonna have to wait...i think it's a little harsh though that he doesn't have feelings for bill...especially since he's so confused about it all...

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

oh tom. silly just can't keep quiet tom.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

Tom's kind of a douche, using Bill that way. Especially with how innocent he is. And lying about feeling something for him...I'm not liking this Tom, shame on you. lol, anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh my gawd!! He admitted it!!! Success! *fist pump* That was... so amazing. I'm so proud of him! Admitting it to himmself is the first step, the rest can come later. This was the big hump.

But yea...there Tom goes again pushing that little bit too far, I think I may be able to forgive this one though as he wasn't really in his right mind. Though...is he ever? Now, who the hell interupted them? They must be shot! Lol.

Wonderful chapter. So much progress was made (finally, no offense). And I loved every moment. Keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: Eva_Gaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 14

That's totally my FAVORITE story here. so good! the writing, the plot.. just every bit of this story is absolutely perfect! I need quicker updates or I'll die! You can't leave us for three weeks with this ending, my brain will explode...
I check every day if there is a new chapter and when I see the updates... this Just made my week better.
best chapter so far... I need to read more!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14

Haha, Tom!

Reviewer: xHorizonx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Amazing chapter, one of the best sp far. I like this new side of bill :) I can't wait to see what his dad says when he finds out

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 14

Arrrr I bet its Gustav or that annoying girl. There always someone to interrupt their moment x-(
Good chapter, please update soon, i cant wait for more :) :P

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

omg, that was amazing :)
so finally Bill doesn't play so innocent boy but hell, i would really wanna se that hahahahha
and about Tom he really has to be patient with Bill...and i kinda don't like his little lie.
damn, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Tom acts all tough and douchy because he doesn't do feelings (at least that's what he's telling himself, lol.) And yeah, Bill is starting to break out of his little shell but Tom's chase for his virginity is far from over! I hope you'll stick around for the next chapter, thanks for reading! :3

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
fck fck ahhahaha
oh gosh my feelings poor Tom
hahhahha yu are evil!!!!
hahahhaha
so hot an amazing chapter
i think Tom is trying to keep his player mind really hard and doesn't want to accept he can have true feelings for beautiful, pure, innocent (not so innocent anymore - lol )Bill *-----*
what a traumatizing end oMG TTTTuTTT hahahah can i cry for TOm oh goshh hahaha
thank you so much for this chapter
dying really dying for more *u*!!

i think Tom is going to have more hard times trying to make Bill succumb to the temptation hahah xD
the world or God is going to protect Bill and nothing is going to happen until Tom realize he can love and not just have a moment of pleasure or just meaningless fun with Bill xD or that's my theory for now hahah

Author's Response: Weeell, you're sorta in on something there. Tom is putting on this act that he doesn't do feelings but maybe that's just because the right boy hasn't come along yet ;) Thanks for your lovely review, you know I always apprechiate them :3

Reviewer: checkmycollar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh my god, Tom is an ass x)) loved it!

Reviewer: LonelyHumanoid Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/12 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 14

The wait for this was BEYOND worth it! Great!!! Tomi's making progress.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked it! I promise you there's more smut coming up now that Tom is finally starting to push Bill over to the dark side ^_^ Thanks for reading!

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