Date: 12/03/12 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I am dying waiting for more!
Date: 11/18/12 07:47 am Title: Chapter 16
my favorite story i am following right now ahhhh im so excited to see where you take this!!!
Date: 11/16/12 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
they're falling for eachother...i can understand why it would be confusing to both of them...
Date: 11/16/12 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Some new kind of horny that he hadn’t been before. HAHAHA, laughed so hard! Out loud! I hardly ever laugh out loud, oh, mygod. It was AWESOME, goose bumps, I love how Tom is cuddling with Bill and how Bill's innocence and poor brainwashed mindset is trying to break free and understand all of this.. Oh, LOVE IT!
Date: 11/16/12 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
ommmmggg i was like is he gonna rim billl O_O
i was sure bill would freak ar the suggestion.
Date: 11/16/12 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this so much! I'm impatiently awaiting an update :)
Date: 11/16/12 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
(((o(*'3*)o))) *dances like Bill in the Jumbie video* Loooooooooovvvve It!
Date: 11/16/12 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
BEAUTIFUL. *_*
But really, seeing that you have updated this baby here made me happy. :)
You better not leave us hanging here, doll. You know we're all waiting for more. ;) /cuddles
Date: 11/16/12 11:45 am Title: Chapter 16
"Some new kind of horny that he hadn't been before"-- that had me chuckling. Silly Tom, not understanding his own feelings. I'm sure he will in future chapters. I wanted to review and tell you that I think you are writing this (honestly, unlikely) scenario of two such different people coming togeher, in a very plausible way. Bill's softening from religious fanatic to a guy who might admit he's gay, is paced well and pretty believable. an't wait for more.
Date: 11/16/12 03:30 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww, Tom's never felt this kind of horny before because its his heart that's horny! Poor guy, he's in for quite the surprise. I'm glad you finally had Tom aknowledge that he's not quite into this just because Bill's a hot challenge of a piece of ass. I was just thinking his self blindness was starting to drag a bit.
I really loved their conversations in this chapter. They were all so incredibly well written and segued together perfectly. From &ill's stubborn self hate, through the beautiful blow job (willst I ever say that again?) And to Bill trying to comprehend not everyone is homophobic.
Tom seems to be making some great progress in his development. Not trying to coerce Bill into reciprocation just seemed...really profound for him, despite his personal rationalization.
Fantastic work. I am so anxious and excited to see more! Keep up the super work! *huggles*
Date: 11/15/12 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
nice chapter!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/15/12 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH MY!!!!!!!! kjsadhajsdha Beautiful I'm dying this feelings sdlksajasdk
butterflies everywhere *----*
muahahahha Tom is falling unaware of it!!! but is falling hahaha beautiful love
sigh sigh *u*!!!!!!!!!!!
ahhahahha I'm smiling like an idiot hahaha
sad, hot, cute chapter just perfect!!! really love it
dying fckin dying for more!!!!!!*---*
thank you so much!!!
Date: 11/15/12 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
"Some new kind of horny that he hadn’t been before." SURE TOM, KEEP SAYING THAT TO YOURSELF
Totally loved this chapter! In fact, I totally love every chapter of this story! ;-) And I can't wait for more!
Date: 11/15/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing chapter! Tom is falling for Bill big time! Please update soon, I need to know what happens next....
Date: 11/15/12 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
This is amazing!
Date: 11/15/12 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aw i love Bill a lot in this fiction :)
Date: 11/15/12 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG. This was the cutest chapter ever. I totally love how Tom is trying to deny the feelings he's developing for Bill. And Bill is so sweetly innocent, even when he's getting a blowjob, the way he keeps covering his face with his hands and say 'oh, my'. Loved it all. Thank you.
Date: 11/15/12 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yayyyy Tom's ice heart is melting!!!
Date: 11/15/12 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow, that was amazing and somehow Tom wasn't act like asshole and hell, that Bill's innocence ^.^