Date: 01/17/13 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh thats evil! Pure evil to leave this chapter hanging! You have to write more! I like the whole idea of this story but i must say that i don't really like that the religious people are "the bad guys" we all don't hate the gays, i hope you know. But yep great story! I am really waiting to read more! And what will happen to poor bill!! Please update soon!
Date: 01/13/13 04:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh, damn.... You said you we're going to post soon, but it's been 2 weeks.... Please update!
Author's Response: I am SO sorry, gosh. Anyway, updating now ^_^
Date: 01/13/13 12:21 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh Bill *facepalm* what could possibly be wrong with going into a club with a stranger, accepting drinks from saod stranger, continuing to drink said drink when it tastes 'funny', and then following aforementioned stranger into a back room after you've gotten a head ache and are dizzy and can't speak without slurring? Oh I dunno, EVERYTHING!
*clicck heels and repeats* please let Tom see, please let Tom see...
Fantasmagorical chapter. I can't wait to see more
Date: 01/08/13 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
WAAAAAAAAAAA!!! OMG I feel like crying! Finally the moment I have been waiting for! This is amazing.
Date: 01/06/13 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
You meanie. I waitedddd! More, please? I'm not begging any more than that... okay I lied. MOOOOORE, PA-LEEEEASE?
Author's Response: I am SO sorry for taking so long, I hope you're still willing to follow my story :c Updating it today, pinky swear!
Date: 01/06/13 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
please...please...write some more
Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long, updating it now :)
Date: 01/06/13 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg I have to know what happens next
Date: 01/04/13 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
I don't know why my review is showing up as cut off. :/ Either way, I was your 483rd review! *Special* Please update soon. Xx, Sammi.
Date: 01/04/13 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm so genuinely proud of myself for catching up on the fic! I had gotten the update notifications in the email and just haven't had much time in sitting down and reading the new chapters, but today I did and I'm happy! And now totally "WTF'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT?" because of the ending of this chapter. You cruel, cruel author, you. :P (I'm only teasing of course.)
I started reading today from the camping chapters - and I loved the route the story took! Bill's admittance and how he's finally coming to some sort of realization. And Tom's just a sly dog.. Isn't he always. ;) As you placed Bushido in this chapter, I have to be honest - Whether he's a good or bad character in a story, his name anywhere in a fic with Bill usually just brings a negative context (to my mind of course). xD And as you ended this chapter, I can only hope that Tom's some sort of hero in the next IF something were to.. uhm.. go down, you know. XD
I suck at reviews because there's just so much going on in my head. The love for Bill's innocence combined with Tom's tactics and everything.. It's a lot of fanfic adoration to take in.
Date: 01/03/13 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
aaaaah! when do you think the next chapter will be up, hmm? I'm dying xD
Date: 01/03/13 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
Refering to Bushido as "a kind gemtleman" was hilarious and sad at the same time. Poor Bill is totally clueless, isn't he? Can't wait to see what's coming next:-/ God help him.
Date: 01/03/13 08:48 am Title: Chapter 17
whoaa292;cant wait to read the next chaptera281;you are so gooda281;it was my first review btw haha
Date: 01/02/13 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
Uh oh!!! Tht really is the end of the chapter?? I thought my phone had glitched D: neeeeeeed moreee arghhh xD this is what I've been waiting for since chapter...Gabriel.
Date: 01/02/13 02:05 am Title: Chapter 17
o.m.g noooo! Tom better look up or its gonna be bad for Bill! *goes back to check warnings* I cannot wait for next chapter!
Date: 01/01/13 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
I can't f**king believe this is happening to Bill. My stomach went into my throat when I got to the end of the chapter. Poor Bill. By the way, intension is spelled intention. :)
Date: 01/01/13 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
Omg!!!! Totally waiting in suspense for the next chapter
Date: 01/01/13 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 17
no bill!!! don't go with bushido...that's trouble...hopefully tom will catch sight of him and come to his rescue...
Date: 01/01/13 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 17
ohhh nooooooooooo ojalá Tom aparezca antes q a Bill le paso algo malo..... =(
buen capi me encantó please update sooner!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
Date: 01/01/13 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story! Update really soon please!