Date: 12/26/12 04:32 pm Title: Twins, after all
one of my favourites, love the naughty part of it xp
Author's Response: uhh one of your favorites?? vais ficar dirty como eu! xD
Date: 07/01/12 11:45 pm Title: Twins, after all
this was a good story!
an yes i did vote in OMAs!:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I voted too, like crazy
Date: 07/01/12 07:28 pm Title: Twins, after all
This was very sweet. However, it's was a bit too sugary sweet and too perfect, if u know what I mean. It kills the realism a bit. But it was still a very nice story. I loved the scene in the car the most, when Bill is shy and Tom whispers in his ear, that was my fav. And of course, the sexytimes were good too, even if it was a bit rushed. Their love is so cute. Keep writing twincest!!! I can't wait to read more from you. Just work on making your characters feel more human, and on making your scenes and dialogue etc more realistic. Well done so far. :)
Author's Response:
OMG thank you for your criticism! Really. Thank you for being honest and polite. I'll work on.that, for.sure
Date: 07/01/12 08:43 am Title: Twins, after all
I totally voted for them in the OMAs! Felt so proud when we won! We deserve it!
Author's Response:
We totally deserve it! Aliens rock!!!
Date: 07/01/12 05:43 am Title: Twins, after all
"Of course I do. You are my soul mate, my twin, my lover, my best friend, my entire life. I belong with you. No, I belong to you," what you wrote here its very ture :)
OMG the sex was HOT! AND YA i was votting like crazzy :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! I really liked that line I wrote too. And you liked the sex? Cool! It was the first time I wrote a sex scene so I was a little afraid it kind of sucked... Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading
Date: 07/01/12 03:03 am Title: Twins, after all
I really like this story, thank you for sharing it!
About the OMA...I voted my ass off every free minute I had :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I voted like crazy too