Date: 06/06/13 09:48 am Title: The club
Oh boy. Theo sure has her hands full with these two. I'm curious about how it will all play out.
Date: 05/24/13 09:25 am Title: Books, Pillows and Movies
A smart, nerdy Tom makes an even more attractive Tom xD I love that u made him that way. Also, poor Tom...does he not realize that when it comes to falling in love he has absolutely no say so in when it happens? Lol. He should kno tho, if he's actually questioning it then he most likely is falling for her. But Bill's liking her too I guess? Eeep! Great chapter, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Yea I kind of like the smart Tom too. But I will try to keep his front image as a flirt, because he is one. And yea, he just can’t seem to believe that he is falling in love. Bill is kind of confused too, when it comes to his feelings. He doesn’t know if he should see Theodora as just a friend, or as something more. Thank you very much for your review and for sharing your thoughts , and I hope the next chapter will be out this week. :)
Date: 05/20/13 11:41 am Title: Sleep over
Idk why but I almost expected Bill or Tom to be the one that Patricia ran off with and Thedora would be left in the company of the other. Now that that's all cleared up i'm left wondering which brother Theo will end up with, if either. I was thinking it would be Bill considering the time spent together and stuff but i'm also thinking it could be Tom. Or maybe possibly both? I'm not sure I like that idea too well lol but anything could happen:)
Author's Response: Well I sure didn’t think of that. But it would have been a good idée. I was planning to introduce Theodora to the whole Tokio Hotel band, and I didn’t want Patricia to be involved because I wanted my character to obtain in her journey not only a new love but some independence too. When I started this story, I always thought and imagined that Theodora will eventually end up with Tom. That was the original plot. But it sure looks like she is closer to Bill, rather that with Tom, doesn’t it? But she will definitely end up with just one of them, and not both.
Date: 05/20/13 11:29 am Title: Chapter 3- Gustav and Georg
Wow no wonder Patricia gave her the main room. She wasn't planning on even being there. And didn't Patricia have a boyfriend? Sux to be him lol. I'm really curious about that phone call that Georg got and why everyone seemed so weird about it.
Date: 05/20/13 11:15 am Title: Chapter 2-We need to talk...?
The cabin sounds awesome! I'm curious about what Patricia's deal is.
Date: 05/20/13 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1- An offer I can’t refuse
Hmm...this should be interesting vacation :)
Author's Response: Oh, it will be:)
Date: 05/19/13 03:06 pm Title: Sleep over
cant wait for mooooooore :)
please update soooooooooooon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support, thank you for taking time to review and thank you for reading my story:) I really appreciate it, and I appreciate your entusiasm, especially since it took me soooo long to post this chapter:) I will try to post a new chapter as soon as I can, which will probably be in a few days.
Date: 06/30/12 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 2-We need to talk...?
CLIF HANGER...COME ON!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOOOOON :)
LOOOOOVED THE CHAPTER :)
KEEP UP THE GOOOD WORK :):*
sorry for the capital lettes,when i was tiping i didnt paied attention and when i looked and was capital,i was bored to write them again in small letters :)
sorry again :)
please update soooon :)
Author's Response: I really wanted to put a cliff hanger at the end, so people would be wondering what Patricia wants to tell Theodora, and how will affect her in the future. The next chapter will probably come out next week. Also I really appreciate your support and your enthusiasm and I hope you liked the story so far and you will continue reading it. And no worries about the capital letters!;) :)
Date: 06/30/12 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2-We need to talk...?
wow beautiful house . so why was Patty out all day and wat does she have to tell her . please update soon .
Author's Response: Yes I know. When I writing about Patricia’s house I wanted to create the perfect house that everybody basically dreams of. The next chapter will probably come out next week. Also thank you for your support and I hope you are enjoying my story!:)
Date: 06/29/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1- An offer I can’t refuse
hmmmmmm sounds intresting . can`t wait to see how this story goes .update soon please
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your support! I really appreciate it and I hope you will enjoy my story.