Date: 05/01/13 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
will you continue this?
Date: 08/24/12 02:20 am Title: Chapter 5
i really do love where this story is going :P even if tom does infuriate me when it comes to the whole ria thing... (just because he wants to appear straight, doesn't mean he has to date a bitch. telling her that he thinks she's a bitch, is a good enough reason not to date her, doesn't mean people will think you're gay)
as i finished this chapter, i thought of asking you if maybe you agreed that you need a beta, but then i read you had one for parts of this chapter! i really don't want to be mean to bekah or anything, but... i don't think she did an awefully good job :S all i'm trying to say is, i love the story and think it's a shame that spelling and gramatical errors should get in the way...
really hope you don't take this the wrong way!
Date: 08/23/12 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow :-) well without any trouble that would be too perfect but i have no idea that Bill's mom will see them...good that was after not during their ecstasy haha omg, i can't wait for next :)
Date: 08/23/12 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMFG! The last bit made me laugh so fucking much! xD Poor Bill's mum. She'll be scarred for life. Another awesome chapter, as usual. :)
Date: 08/23/12 11:33 am Title: Chapter 5
HAHA omg orkar inte Steffie. Best chapter ever.
Date: 08/23/12 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I don't want to sound mean but the grammar was very bad and the smut scene wasn't very good.
I love the story, just not this chapter.:
5/10
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Date: 08/23/12 11:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Sexy times! Hehe. Uh oh, lol. Awkward!
Date: 08/23/12 10:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! On to the next =)
Date: 08/23/12 10:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Omg thats awsme -dies,on floor laphing-
Date: 08/23/12 09:46 am Title: Chapter 4
MEN VAFAN STEFFIE, BILL KOMMER KOMMA IN NÄR DE HAR SEX ON THA DESK, ELLER HUR!!?! OMG POOR BILLA.
Author's Response:
Hahahaa vi får se vad som händer ;D
Date: 08/22/12 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn that's whorish of her :/
Date: 08/22/12 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awe omg. I'm starting to feel sorry for Tomi now. He has to hide who he really is :'C Awesome chapter, as usual! can't wait for moooreee:D
Date: 08/22/12 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
i want billa and tomi smut >.>
Date: 08/22/12 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yes, we want moooore! :-)
Date: 07/27/12 11:39 am Title: Chapter 3
I liiiikee it!!! I'm really curious about what's going to happen, so...... Update soon? *puppy eyes*
Date: 07/19/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm, interesting. I'm glad I gave it a shot. Ria is a stupid bitch, first of all she does all that Kstupid girly shit' and secondly Tom clearly did not approve of her 'joking' about Bill, so why would she go cuddling up to him ten minutes later?! Then again, I never did get why people (girls especially) can't seem to pick up oncomfortable vibes...
This is pretty good so far, I look forward to seeing where you take it...oh but one thing, when you are talking about music, its spelled bass, not base. I know its kinda weird. But yea, homonyms are one of my pet peeves...sorry.
Date: 07/18/12 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh Andreas can get over it. He isn't even that good looking anyway. He's just jellin'.
I was hoping Bill and Tom would have sex, now I'm kind of disappointed. :c
10/10
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Date: 07/18/12 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
The banner looks awesome by th way! :P
Date: 07/18/12 07:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Update soooooon, loved the chapter!
Date: 07/18/12 04:04 am Title: Chapter 3
This is a very exciting story. I am looking forward to the sequel.