Date: 12/06/11 07:32 pm Title: Intro
this sounds like a good story cant wait to read :)
Date: 09/15/08 08:43 am Title: Intro
Oh this one looks fun to read. Poor Tom thought, for some odd reason people in these fics always want to save his dreads. But your reason for Tom getting them shaved is the best I have seen so far. Well I am off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: awww thanks for reading, this was my first fiction ever, I didn't have a beta reader so It's possibly filled with Grammar mistakes but I loved the story ^__^
Date: 01/18/08 02:13 pm Title: Intro
okay so this has to be one of the best inros i have ever read!
Author's Response: Aww thanks' and It happen to be one of the saddest I ever wrote XD
Date: 09/19/07 07:26 am Title: Chapter 8 The Final words
Amazing. There are tears in my eyes. I'm so glad he won the case. This story is very beautiful, compliments! I'm half glad (and half not) that it's finished.. I'm happy because finally he won is case and they made justice, but I'm sad because I loved it soo much and now I won't read it anymore :( Anyway, well written, I liked how you put the descriptions and the feelings. Compliments again :) Ps. is Tom out of the clinic now and the fucking demon's gone?
Author's Response: yes, Tom can go home within a month, his progress is amazing...rnAnd the demon is gone, Bill's body died, so he coult not live in it anymore.....rnrnThanks for reading and liking it, your a doll <3
Date: 09/16/07 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 7 Tom's story
I left this story at the third chapter, but today I felt like continue reading this (maybe coz it was day? lol) and.. yeah, I like it. It's weird, I know, and sometimes scary, but I can't help but want more! Poor Tom, such a beautiful guy ruined like this.. it's just not fair :( please more soon I wanna know how the judge reacts!
Date: 09/12/07 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 6 Tom is needed
Hey there. this story is really good. it definitely keeps you reading to the very last word. its very unique - not something i could've thought up myself but a great piece of writing. well done. looking forward to reading more soon.
xxx
Date: 09/11/07 11:58 am Title: Chapter 6 Tom is needed
Tom makes me go AWWWWWWWWW.
More soon!
Date: 09/11/07 01:26 am Title: Chapter 5 Bill in control
AHHHHH omg u have to keep writing i NEED to find put what happens!!!!!!!!!!1
Date: 09/07/07 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 The first day of court
woah gawd this is creepy
i have a feeling this will give me nightmares.
this part was cute .
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want to see him” Tom stood up and walked up to Bill his room, when he entered, there was no blood, the wall’s where clean and all bill’s stuff was clean. Then he looked over to Bill his bed, there was his little brother all scratched up, trembling and shaking.
Tom ran up to Bill, sat on the bed and holed his brother tight to his chest, he stroke his long Black hair and shove the hair out of his beautiful face that was now all scratched up.
He opened his eyes and 2 brown and terrified eyes looked at him, Tom shad a tear and it feld onto Bill’s cheek.
Date: 09/07/07 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 Helping hand
aww poor Tomi.
i'd wanna' hold him 2. lol
*dirty thoughts*
Date: 08/28/07 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 3 The first day of court
Defiantly looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 08/28/07 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 The first day of court
your story is uber scarry but i cant stop reading it. I love the skill you have with writing. keep it up with the juicyness. :)
Date: 08/28/07 07:27 am Title: Intro
This is really original, I like it very much, can't wait to read more!
Date: 08/28/07 03:42 am Title: Chapter 3 The first day of court
of course we're looking forward!!! I am atleast..and its ok.. i love scart stuff :)
I love your story...poor Bill *sniff*
Author's Response: Thank's hunny ^^
Date: 08/27/07 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 Helping hand
AHH MORE.
Date: 08/27/07 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 The beginning
ahhhh gawd scary
Date: 08/27/07 03:21 pm Title: Intro
ahgg no poor tomi.
why did he had to be the phsyco one!
poopies
lol. well .. oh well. *goes to next chapter*
Date: 08/27/07 11:54 am Title: Chapter 2 Helping hand
I really love your story. Its rather scarry but it keeps me wanting more each time i finish a chapter.
Date: 08/23/07 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1 The beginning
this is actually pretty neat i've seen the exorcism of emily rose and i hav to say it was bad but this makes it exciting, lol :)