Date: 06/06/13 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
dark but so beautiful...
Date: 06/20/12 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was definitely dark and dramatic. :)
I like the idea of numb and how you wrappeed the whole fic around the idea - around the wish - to be numb. It leraves m,e buzzled to think how someone can, could hate their own child like that, but life is mysterious like that.
Author's Response: hehe, thank you very much - thats definitely what i was going for! :)xx
Date: 06/18/12 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I think it's twisted and painfully realistic:) I don't usually like POV, but this one is kinda good :~) It also makes me to wonder where the hell Bill's family is and what cause Jorg to act like this in the first place..sigh.
Author's Response: hehe, thanks, my mind is twisted place :) and i'm not really sure where bill's family is, maybe he doesn't have one. if this was a longer story i'm sure tom would come along and save the day or something, but that isn't what this story is about. as for jorg, i guess he's just an alcoholic douchebag. thanks again, my first reviewer! :)xx