Date: 07/23/12 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Of some strange rason I forgot to review after read this chapter the first time, sorry for that. I really like this story, it is getting crepier and crepier for each part, but you take it so slow, let us adjust to it to and I really like that. I feel so sorry for Georg here, I wish Bill had talked to him, he must trust him, I mean, he really seems to love him, but maybe you don't talk to even the person you are paired with in a place like that, maybe it is something you grown up with, never trust anyone? And I hope you feel better now, it hurts a lot, I have had some too his spring, I really feel for you, and hey, now I "know" who you are! :)
Author's Response: It's okay that you didn't review right away. :) And yes, I am trying to take things slow, that way the reader can absorb everything! And in this world, pairings are a hit and miss kind of thing. Sometimes, it works out, sometimes it doesn't. I think this chapter will explain why the twins are so suspicious about everything, and Georg has had a normal life, until now. (I posted the next chapter, hope you like it!) And yay! I know I should've kept the same name on LJ and stuff, but dang. Sometimes, I feel like I need to switch it up a bit, lol. My teeth are nice and neat now! (My jaw still hurts ;/ But that's okay!) *huggles you*
Date: 07/18/12 01:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, poor twins! Poor Georg! *pets them all* You’re really building up the tension here. I have no idea what’s going to happen next, but I’m very worried for all of them! I feel so bad for Georg because he doesn’t know what’s going on, so all he can see is Bill pulling away and acting strange. What an awful time for him to go through this. *pets them all again*
I really hope you’re recovering okay from your dental surgery, love. *pets you, too* Feel better soon!
Author's Response: *pets you* Love, your reviews make my day! *huggles you* I posted the next chapter, hope you like it! And I am feeling better, today was an okay day.
Date: 07/16/12 10:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god. I don't even know how Georg is going to react. I don't know anything!!!! But I feel so bad for all of them, because whatever it is that Tom has to say, it's not going to be good.
I shall try and remain a little hopeful though. DON'T BREAK MY HEART! :3
Author's Response: NOOOOOO! Jules is not going to break your heart, k? Nothing too terribly bad. I MISS YOUR FACE! (PS, I posted the next chapter! Enjoy!)
Date: 07/16/12 10:39 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG, WHAT IS GOING ON?? AHHHHHHHHHHH THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER. IMMA CLICK RIGHT ON IT!!!
Darling, I LOVE this!! -is so excited-
Date: 07/16/12 10:32 am Title: Chapter 2
This is so captivating, intriguing and now I have to move forward to the next one because I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!
Why is Bill so scared? What happened to Tom? How far along is Georg pregnant?!
Just let me click on the next one.
Date: 07/14/12 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel so sorry for Georg. It must be so upsetting for him thinking that Bill isn't pleased about their babies. And Bill is clearly very unhappy having to keep things from his pair. I'm dying to hear Tom's side of things since we've only really heard from him through Bill's flashbacks. Hope your dental surgery went well and that you're recovered now.
Author's Response: Well, I posted the next chapter that might answer a few of your questions, k? Tom had a few interesting things to say. My dental surgery went okay, things are all better. I got a bit delayed last week, and went to a concert to hang out with a band, and got sidetracked! :( Forgive me? *huggles you* Thank you for the review!
Date: 07/13/12 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hmm...my fan fic senses are tingling. I have a suspicion that Tom is gonna tell them something that NONE of them are suppose to know.
Author's Response: Yep. You are right! *hands you edible glitter cookies* I posted the next chapter, hope you like it! *huggles you* Thank you for the review!
Date: 07/13/12 12:52 am Title: Chapter 4
EEK! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! I MUST KNNNNOOOOWWWW!!!
I'm so happy that you updated XD thank you for being wonderful
Author's Response: I POSTED! AND I THINK I SHOULD THANK YOU FOR BEING YOU, FIRST OFF, AND SECONDLY, THANK YOU FOR BEING AWESOME! LASTLY, THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING! *huggles you*
Date: 07/13/12 12:11 am Title: Chapter 4
left me hanging , great story
Author's Response: *huggles you* I'm sorry to leave you hanging! Don't be angry with the Jules, k? I am glad that you are liking it, and I posted again, so hopefully, you are still with me! Thank you for taking the time to review! It makes my day, k?
Date: 07/02/12 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Interesting, very interesting... Conspiracies, conspiracies, paranoia and confusion. Haha, I'm enjoying this. :)
Keep it coming!
Author's Response: LOL, I am working on it, love. I do have another chapter posted, hopefully to your liking. *huggles you* I cannot stress this enough: Thank you for your review.
Date: 07/02/12 06:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, wow! Seems all Tom's predictions are coming true. Wonder where - or who - he got his information from in the first place. It's sad that Bill is now spooked about Georg having twins so he can't be happy about becoming a parent. I wonder if Georg will notice Bill's worried attitude. I feel sorry for poor Georg, in love with his pair and pregnant and now it looks like there's trouble ahead. And I nearly forgot the whole 'missing' thing...seriously spooky stuff. Will we soon get to meet Tom properly and not just in flashbacks? Once again, great with how you've created this world. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, without giving anything away, I will let you know: Some of your questions will be answered in the next chapter, which I have posted. I really love that this is keeping you on your toes, so to speak, and your reviews are keeping me on mine. :) Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart for reviewing my story. *huggles you*
Date: 07/01/12 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3
AHA! I knew it! The government is always evil! AAAAAALWAAAAAAAAAYS!!!!!!!
Also, is Gustav appearing in this story?
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, the government is ALWAYS evil. And yes, Gustav is appearing later on. :) *huggles you* Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/30/12 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooh! Very good! But wait...where is Tom? I know in the story you had him working in letters, but where is he NOW?
Author's Response: Well, I cannot say anything at this time about his whereabouts, but! I will say that he does make an appearance at the next chapter, which I have posted. *huggles you* I really appreciate the review. :D
Date: 06/29/12 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow, this is really making me worried for Georg and the babies and Bill and Tom. You're really building up the tension here!
But, I have to say I’m glad I’m (probably) not going to be around in 2998 because I can’t live without coffee. I don't even drink that much, but I love it when I want it. So, I feel Bill's pain.
It's very interesting that the government teaches history and has museums, like we are prehistoric beasts or something. The missing list really, really creeps me out. And as far as the twins go (big congratulations to Georg and Bill, by the way), you have me really sweating for these guys. D:
Author's Response: Well. I mean, I am trying to build up the tension. And I am glad too, that I am not around in The Great Ban, as my vices are cigarettes and coffee. As you may or may not be able to tell, I am slightly paranoid about the government, and this is how I imagine everything to be, honestly. I think, in the future, history will be taught much like that. But also, I got to thinking about the history that I learned, and how much of what was left out, and so on, and so forth. As in, what ARE they really teaching us? I think prime example (from RL) was the race riots here. I remember my Mom reading my history book going, "That's not what happened!!" and it just kind of grew from there.(I've harbored this paranoia for quite some time...) The school (government) was only teaching us what THEY wanted us to know, only dancing over certain events like, "this happened on x and x day," and that was it, they failed to mention that while x and x was going on, y and z happened. And I just know that one day, my daughter is going to come home with her history book, and the same is going to happen with me, and as much as I don't like it, that sort of stuff happens. And besides, in 3001, let's face it, we WILL be prehistoric beasts. As for the missing list, it does play an important role here, so don't forget about it. As for the sweating, I am sorry! :O *huggles you* Sorry for the ramble, but I posted the next chapter, hope you like it!
Date: 06/29/12 07:15 am Title: Chapter 3
This is getting better and better. I love the characters you have given them, and I'm afraid Tom was right about a lot of things. Now I wonder how Georg feels about it all, even if this isn't anything Bill and he has talked about (I get the feeling that they haven't talked about how Bill feels and why?) he must understand that something is really, really wrong with his pair.
Looking forward to the rest of this story! Do you know how long it will be? It feels like one of those giant stories, or atleast the plot gives room for it :)
Author's Response: Well, I am really glad that you are liking this! I did post the next chapter, which will answer some of your questions! (I hope you do like it!) And as for the rest of the story,it is going to be a giant story, but I am not sure how long it is going to be. I do intend it to be quite a bit longer, I have a lot to say! ;) This whole thing is a WIP, unfortunately, but I have other plans for this story later. I have a few unfinished WIP's on this site- which kills me to think about, but you know how it is sometimes, you lose your muse or whatnot. I can assure you, that this will be finished, and there should be a posting every week, unless something is vitally wrong with me,(which is why I have this screen name! I am not in the best of health.)like last week. I broke two teeth, and found out some other, not so pleasant health news. IDK if you follow me on other sites, like facebook or twitter or LJ, but I am Tragic Jules on FB, @julesisthebest on Twitter, and of course, tsoa_fer_totes on LJ. Point of me telling you that is, I will always keep everyone up to date on everything on those sites, and you are always welcome to tag along! *huggles you tightly*
Date: 06/28/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
1. Georg's probably freaking.
2. Can't wait to see Tom in the picture!
3. Bill, I can tell, is ready to gtfo.
4. Jules is awesome.
Author's Response: 1.) I love Lizard. rn2.) I know, I know, keep writing more.rn3.) Gustav has misplaced his tongs, do you know where they are?rn4.) The next chapter is up. You should go read it.
Date: 06/26/12 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting take on Bill's side. Idk, I still find this kind of world sad, can't help it. Hopeless somehow. But, in the end, people adapt to everything if they have to. And what comes to Bill and Geprg, I'm not sure what to thiunk of them. They are really cutre couple, but how happy Bill really is based on this chapter? Oh, and I miss Tom. :)
Author's Response: I can assure you that Bill and Georg are happy with each other. As for Bill's happiness, I have continued his thoughts in Chapter Three. And no worries, Tom's gonna come around...*huggles you*
Date: 06/25/12 09:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this i really, really good! I love how you write them and how diferet they seems to view some things. I wonder why Bill seems to disslike the thought of having children so strongly, is it maybe what he was put through as a child that makes him feel this way? And I love that Bill was paird with the guy he thought was cute, I guess that is as close as you come to do it out of love in your universe. They are really sweet together, and I love that you made Georg the "bottom" and the house pari in this story. Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: I am so glad that you like it! I posted Chapter Three, which is from Bill's POV, still. I do believe that you will get your answer then. Georg and Bill are as about as close to real love in the Static world as it gets, you are correct on that theory. I do hope you continue to stick around, thanks for taking the time to review! *huggles you*
Date: 06/22/12 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't think I tell you often enough how much I love you. ^_^ But I do, and I love this fic so far! Georg has no idea what he's in for... hehe.
Author's Response: And I love you.
Date: 06/22/12 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
The future certainly sounds boring, if Bill’s job is anything to judge by. I love all the little foreboding hints that maybe things aren't all perfect and happy. It really worries me that someone’s timetable can change and they have no idea what to expect, like the guy who worked with Bill who “disappeared.” Scary!
I really love how you have Bill grasping his neck or collar when he feels trapped and can’t breathe. It’s such a vivid visual, along with him absentmindedly tracing numbers on Georg’s chest. I adore how you give each character such quirks and individuality. It really makes them come alive! And it was really, really cute that Georg was the man Bill had checked out on the street!
But, wow, it is very creepy about the government studying the twins all their lives. I’m really, really worried for them and Georg about what could happen. Oh, you’re building this up so gooooood! I can’t wait for more!
Author's Response: I think it'd be boring in the Static Universe, too, with the government hanging about all the time. As for everything else, besides my stunning visuals ;) JK, I think I may have touched base with in Chapter Three- which I posted, I am interested to see what you think then! *huggles you* Thank you, Zeph for having faith in the Jules.