Date: 11/28/12 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
SWEETTTTTTT ahhhhhhhhh really cute! I can't stop smilling!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was the point!! :D
Date: 06/15/12 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this was cute, so yes, definitely potential to write fluff. Just as long as you remember to avoid what i often see: over-dramatric, unrealistically girly twin-reaction. They are guys after all. But not a problem here, oh no. Just a general advice. I liked the idea: Tokyo change. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll write more fluff then :)
Date: 06/14/12 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! Nice idea for a change.
Author's Response: I know, right? Thank you
Date: 06/13/12 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
an u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: I will. In a few days I'll post a sequel. Thank you! I'm glad you like it and I hope you enjoy the sequel
Date: 06/12/12 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg, that was sooooooo cute. :) It made me smile so much, lol. Now I feel like a fool. Hahaha. When Tom says "I want to be everything to you because you already are everything to me.”, that is the sweetest thing in the whole wide world! I liked this fic, and actually I really like that you write such cute classic twincest. I would work on your grammar though, and try to make your fics a bit longer and more realistic, but I still enjoy reading them. Thanks for writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for having the trouble to read all my stories and to review them! I'm going to ask you again: would you like to be my beta reader? I dont know how that works... Should we exchange e mails or something? Anyway, let me know in anotjer review or something. Thank you again for the good criticism
Date: 06/12/12 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Short, sweet and to the point. I really enjoyed this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you ejoyed it. Thanks :)
Date: 06/12/12 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
short and sweet , loved it .
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/12/12 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
IŽd love a sequel to this.
In the same fluffy manner.
But still smutty at the same time.
Author's Response: okay! I will start working on it. Thanks for the review!