Date: 01/01/25 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
so
cute
i love this little story
Date: 06/13/12 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1
omfg, sobbing.
Author's Response: Ahaha I hope those are tears of joy! They end up together!
Date: 06/12/12 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ummm, Michael Jackson has a song called "You Are My Life"... is that what inspired u? That's what came to mind for me.
Anyways, this was super sweet. It needs a bit of improvement on the grammar, but I liked it nonetheless. Bill is funny cuz he's so blind at the end- Tom is obviously talking about him. Although, I can totally understand how much it would hurt if Tom was saying all of that and it wasn't Bill in the end. :( I loved your characters, so cute. So yeah, good job. Just remember to have a beta check your grammar next time. :)
Author's Response: Thank you again fof reading my stories. I don't know that so it wasn't my inspiration, but I'll check it out. Thanks again!
Date: 06/11/12 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really sweet!
Author's Response: You think so? That was the point! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 06/11/12 04:57 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thank you!