Date: 06/16/12 10:20 am Title: Four
I would keep reading if you want to continue, the way they finally met was lovely
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your support! I'm working on the new chapter!
Date: 06/15/12 12:38 am Title: Four
I've often thought about writing a story like this (Bill dreaming of a girl and then meeting her) so I'm really interested to see where you take this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had this story in mind for a very long time, but this is the first time I actually considered writing it and showing it online. Hope to not disappoint you!
Date: 06/14/12 10:38 pm Title: Four
Oh my! This keeps getting more interesting by the chapter. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your story and how excited I get whenever I see that you updated a new chapter. I love the way that this story flows so easily and I just love the story-plot. I really can't wait to figure out what's up with this mystery girl of Bill's :D I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter update :D
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! I intend on twisting the story a little more by every chapter I add. Hehe. What do you think of this girl? Do you keep your fingers crossed for her or for Sabrina?
Date: 06/14/12 09:08 pm Title: Four
wonder what he witt tell sabrina...
well update soooon please :)
the chapter was very nice :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, not even Bill knows what's he going to tell Sabrina. What do you think of this girl? Does she worth the bother, or Bill is really an ass for treating Sabrina this way?
Date: 06/13/12 07:35 pm Title: Three
Wow! Great chapter! I really enjoyed reading this one. It's getting more in depth and I really like the mystery that you add to this story. I really love this story; you've got me hooked. I have no idea why many people aren't reading this, it really is great. Please do continue writing this. I really would love to see the ending of this :) I hope that you can update the next chapter soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your interest in this! I'm so happy that you liked it and that you continued reading it. I promise the next chapter will be posted soon! :)
Date: 06/13/12 05:41 pm Title: Three
cant wait for moooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Date: 06/13/12 05:41 pm Title: Three
cant wait for moooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Date: 06/13/12 05:41 pm Title: Three
cant wait for moooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Date: 06/13/12 05:41 pm Title: Three
cant wait for moooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Author's Response: Yaaay, thank you! :D
rnI will update soon, I promise!
Date: 06/09/12 05:28 pm Title: One
Interesting beginning. I like the amount of mysteriousness that you added :D Just one suggestion: it would be better for the eyes if you leave a space between paragraphs and since you're using quotation marks, you don't have to bold your dialogue.
I can't wait to read more of this :) I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being my first reviewer! I am excited that you liked and hope you will like my next chapter as well! :DrnrnThere is a space between paragraphs, do you mean I should let a space between dialogues as well? I will keep that in mind and be more careful with the next chapter I add. I will also edit the format of this one, if you're saying it's hurting the eyes. :DrnrnThank you, again, very much!rnrn