Date: 07/11/12 07:10 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
I kept looking at the page hoping it wasn't the end. Oh,oh,oh so cute and so lovely and so well deserved for Tom. I loved the beginning and I loved the ending even more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More is coming! ^_^
Date: 07/11/12 01:57 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
im literally goin to cry. this was soo beautiful. update soon plz :]nd expect a new tumblr follower.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^ <3
Date: 07/11/12 12:06 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
I can't tell you.how much I'm loving this story! It's hard to wait for an update. Thank you for writing, sharing and updating!
Author's Response: Thank you!! More soon!
Date: 07/10/12 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
Pffft. 'The weird foreign exchange student noone knows where from' OMG THEY HAVE A FES! Just like in 'That 70s Show.' That was a delightful small bit of humor in a very serious, and heavy, part of the chapter. Those facts are just appaling. It makes me so upset to know there are THAT many kids KIDS killing themselves because they can't see past here and now. Which brings about a good argument for NOT giving kids antidepressants, seems like suicide skyrocketed after that imo... anyway, were those real cases you used? Or just made up but teasonable sounding?
I loved Bill's reaction to Tom's speech, with the head smacking and threatening to resurrect him to kill him himself. I've had similar conversations with friends myself. Tom's internal geek fit because Bill didn't let go of his hand was funny. I totally had an internal geek fit once when a friend I was crushing on let me pony tail his hair (his bangs kept getting in his way)
The break up scene was exceptionally well executed. It takes a lot to admit you aren't as strong as someone else, and I'm really proud of Bryce for being able to. It was a little sad, even if Tom wasn't too torn up about it.
Holy guacamole Bill...python... I don't know if that's hot, or scary, but either way I loved his reaction to Tom being wary of showing him his room. It was also fantastic finding out Bill's a closet geek. Imo if you've read Harry Potter, then bought a snake you HAVE to name it Nagini, or you weren't a real fan. Lol
I totally do not think truth or dare was lame. Nope, no I do not *shakes head* Nibbles sounds quite cute, and it was just a smidge.mean of Tom not to give Bill heads up that he was a biter, or at least tell him its name was Nibbles. But I do find it suspicious that Bill decided he was tired when it was his turn the 2nd time, when he might be expected to choose truth..
Except for the assembly bit, this chapter was liberally sprinkled with funnyness. I thought the part where they talked about the other being lucky seeing them without their make up or hats was cute, even if I never have liked the term five-head
wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see more. But...why do I have the feeling Tom is going to have another geek fit, and never wash that shirt he leant to Bill again? *raises eyebrow knowingly*
Author's Response: HAHAHA I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS SO MUCH XD *flails*rnOkay, yes the foreign kid was sort of like Fez. We had one at my high school. We always asked the teachers where he was from but they never answered. It wasn't until the end of the year we found out he was from Spain but also spoke fluent french. He would throw us off by speaking both at the same time or whispering to his cousin @__@ His name was Louis and he waited until the end of the year to reveal that he spoke perfect English and we were all idiots XDrn
Date: 07/10/12 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
That's so cute!
I can't wait until the next chapter!
KEEP IT COMING!
10/10
*****
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! More soon!
Date: 07/10/12 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
asjdfdkfkdhd!!!! jfkjfskhjgjkdlaa!!!! kdlkoewkfovmkvnjnj!!!!! ^__^
yep. that about sums up my reaction to this chapter.
Author's Response: XD *squeezles* Thank you bby <3
Date: 07/10/12 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
omfg, this chapter was awesome. I do not regret that i started reading this. You are an awesome writer and i always laugh while reading your stories!
AnD OH, THE NAMES OF THE DOGS *Dies*
Btw, you have to update 'er gab mir ein zweite chance' i'm dying over here girl
Author's Response: XD Oh my god I know @___@ I'm so sorry. I need to go back and edit that one a bit better. As soon as I finish this story my others will be getting tune ups and new chapters! Scouts honor! *was never in the scouts either*
Date: 07/10/12 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
I'm so proud of Tom! Sweet chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 07/10/12 02:12 pm Title: Chapter Four: “I could CLONE HIM Gustav!”
i've been laughing so bad while reading this. God, i love the way you write, it's just so ... idk, awesome.
"Tom blanched. What.
What.
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WHAT."
I literally laughed out loud and my mum came upstairs to see if i'm alright, lol. xD
Author's Response: Oh my gosh XD The same thing happened to me when writing it. Thank you so much! :3
Date: 07/10/12 01:06 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
i loved this chapter, cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 07/10/12 11:56 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
Aww this was a good chapter, sad at the beginning but the end made up for it. Loved it, I giggled at the mouse farting being hurt from space part. Awesome. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D More soon!
Date: 07/10/12 11:20 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
Despite the beginning, I was cracking up while I read this chapter.
"his peers, his tormenters, that weird foreign exchange student , from where no one knew he was from" hahaha omg made me think of Fez from That 70s Show!
"The audience was so quiet now a mouse's fart could be heard from space" i think i cried from laughing at that one. and that image is strangely adorable. i didn't know mice could fart, but i guess after all that cheese...
and I love the creation of the word "Thugnificent"
I can totally relate to Tom geeking out over Bill. And I love that Bill's in the closet... about being a dork. I'm a firm believer that if people don't have a secret dork life hidden away from society (or even better, out in the open), then they're boring and superficial.
Anyways, I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more of Bill and Tom! And part of me is hoping Andreas keeps hitting on Gustav hahaha
Author's Response: Hahah Thank you! Amazing review first of all, and i'm dying over your name <3. I was thinking of Fex XD And that was something my aunt always says. She's got alot of them. My favorite is "it's hotter than piss on a pepper can." Thugnificent comes from a cartoon rapper on the show "The Boondocks" but I call Tom that all the time. And I think the same! I was a closet dork fr a while. Not anymore XDrnThank you so much for reading! More to come soon!
Date: 07/08/12 10:11 am Title: Chapter One:A Wednesday Just Like Any Other
One of the best sories I read in awhile. But be warned, I´m one of the crazy fans because I´m for team Bryce and not Bill. Bryce earned Toms love. Bill was just there looking good like every day.
Tom, Georg and Bryce need a serious conversation to clear things out. I really hope that bryce whants to stay toms boyfriend after everything that happened. (They Love each other, so it have to be!)
Their father has also to come back, they need him badly!
Author's Response: Hahah thank you XD Maybe, maybe and maybe XD
Date: 07/06/12 11:20 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
Waitwaitwait...did you ever explain that Jorg was a sstep parent before? I mean...like they had two other daddies first...cuz Jamie seems to be kind of out of left field, but I've been doing a lot of catch up reading and mightve forgotten something.
Wow...sending out the Marines. Using your spouses connections while you're cheating every chance you get. Real classy. But, how'd they find him so quick? *affronted* are there tracking chups in those boys?! Also I loved Tom's response to the taking him home 'no thanks, id prefer canada, but we can swing by for my cat' it was fantastic.
I think its great that Tom is taking legal action against Trent. I just worry that it will be hard to prove he didn't know he was being recorded because he did, after all, have his webcam on. Or better(/worse) yet Trent might blame Bill as his defense seeing as it was Bill's computer it was done with.
Hmmm...what could Tom's plan entail? I definitely feel like this story is just getting to the good stuff. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Oh btw I liked the manip of Janie. Sehr gut.
Author's Response: XD Thank you! You ask the best questions! :3rn I didn't explain about Jorg before. I wanted to tell a bit of Tom's history. Hagen and Jamie adopted Georg and Tom when Tom was just a baby. ^_^ It does seem out of left field (*cough*because it is *cough*) And yes. Jorg is a skank, XD. All will be revealed soon! And thank you :3
Date: 07/06/12 09:11 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
Yeay another deviant! I'mm going to follow you then. I'm MystEryuNwanTed
Author's Response: Thank you very much!^_^ I will follow you too <3 And thank you for reading!
Date: 07/06/12 07:51 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
I literally squealed when I saw there was a new chapter. :) one of the best ones I've read, and I've read a lot :3
Author's Response: Eeep! Thank you so much! ^_^
Date: 07/06/12 06:36 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
This was such a lovely read. I am very glad Tom is getting back from that horrid experience, gaining strenght to do something about Trent. Interesting side story with the step dads and the missing father D: The kitten was so cute and when Georg started crying, I started crying too.
Author's Response: Awww!Thank you! Hopefully the next chapter will only make you cry a little bit.
Date: 07/06/12 02:49 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
Yay:) please, more xD
Author's Response: More soon! Hopefully by tomorrow! Or later today depending on where you live :3
Date: 07/06/12 12:40 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
you know, i just adore this story. no matter how gut wrenching it is or how much i want to kill trent or how much i want Bill and Tom to get together, i still adore it. and congrats on the many, many views!!! you deserve it. your writing is really good.
Author's Response: SQUEE XD Thank you <3xoxox
Date: 07/06/12 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seven: Hagen and Jamie
I wonder what Jorg has planned? And Tom with the kitten was too adorable. Also, badass Georg is so sexy xD
Author's Response: Yes yes XD And Jorg is going to get in big trouple >.o
