Date: 07/28/12 02:09 am Title: Chapter Two: Embarrassment, Humiliation, Mortification, Elation
Cute chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 07/28/12 01:50 am Title: Chapter One:A Wednesday Just Like Any Other
This is a great start! I'm excited to read the rest XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 07/28/12 12:41 am Title: Chapter Ten: Freckle #363
I just started reading this it's awesome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon!
Date: 07/27/12 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Freckle #363
Holy - *GASP* shocker much? Seriously, I kind of expected it, but certainly not right then! Omg I am so happy for them! Hopefully Jorg will get what's coming to him too, once Hagen is home. I also feel so bad for Bill, never having a family moment. *huggles him*
I thought the freckle stuff was hilarious, and cute. I would just like to know when he did this original counting cuz, believe you me, freckles tend to multiply with time. When I was a kid, I only had freckles across my nose, then they spread to under my eyes, amd eventually they were over my whole face and I am starting to notice them on my legs now too. But I love that he actually set out and counted them. And that he's actually got a 'happy trail' of freckles.
So...um... before you mentioned that Jorg locked the cat up in Tom's room when he ran away, and in this chapter you mentioned he had a cat door on his bedroom door...thought I'd point that out. Also, I was under the impression that savannah cats were specially bred, so if Tom wanted kittens, wouldn't he breed him with another savannah or something? And, Jamieks just a baby! Sje don't need to go having any litters for awhile yet!
Wonderful chapter! I was so happy to see an update! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Good points! I should specify :o The cat door can be closed so the cats can't get out. It's for when they have guests over. Otherwise the cats are free to do as they wish :3 And yes Savannah cats are specially bred, but sometimes they breed with house cats. Since the cats are contained most of the time Tom didn't have the heart to spay and neuter them. The declawing was enough to scar them. :< Tom is hoping for the future. Jamie is only a baby as you said XD.rnThank you for reading!
Date: 07/27/12 01:52 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
I like this chapter about speaking out about bullying. I have done public speaking assignment about it. My class told I did great about it. Your chapter make a lot sense everybody need to stop bullying. I'll look forward your next update. Great story by the way!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's a major problem that needs to stop now. I'm glad that you feel strongly about it too :3 More people need to. Thank you for reading!
Date: 07/27/12 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Freckle #363
Aaaaaw baby Tomi ;-; And Georg to the rescue!
Author's Response: Heehee yes :3 Big brother Geo!
Date: 07/27/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter Ten: Freckle #363
I did a happy dance knowing their father was getting home! Finally things are turning for the better!
Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad he's okay (I had just as much a clue as Tom and Georg ;D)
Date: 07/27/12 02:06 am Title: Chapter Ten: Freckle #363
You.
Author's Response: Me.
Date: 07/16/12 10:51 pm Title: Chapter One:A Wednesday Just Like Any Other
*snickers* I will choose to blame their bad tracking on the catnip *nodnod*...
That bastard! Kicking poor defenseless cats! Especially poor little Jamie!
Author's Response: AHAHA XD They might need an intervention. And yes. Mean mean man. XP He needs help.
Date: 07/16/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm absolutely in LOVEEEE with this story. Keep it up!
10/10
*****
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I will!
Date: 07/16/12 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
this SUCKED. omg, i have tears in my eyes. like, i can't even smile anymore. life has no meaning. omg.
duuuuude, i'm crying now. thanks Nex. you have officially made me cry.
you write so goooooooood D'X
Author's Response: LOL Thanks bby :* *hugs* omfg don't cryyyyy! The next chapter will be super happy!!
Date: 07/15/12 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
Holy Spumoni that was...freakish and intense. Y'know, the thing with Trent is actually really sad...how could his parents and/or his therapist not notice he had jumped off the deep end? Pretty stupid of him to add rape , kidnapping, and had everything went well probably murder, to his list of charges. Unless that was somehow part of his plan. No sane person would do that, he obviously suffered a psychotic break from reality *rolls eyes*
I do think Bill chose to hand over the papers in am improper manner and time...but what's done is done. I love that they love eachothe and that Bill stayed the night to comfort Tom
Fantastic chapter *cuddles* I know it must have been a hard one to write, you did a good job with it. I am a bit confused about the cats though... did they hear Trent? Or something else? Because they don't seem to have stalked and atttacked him very well... can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yeah :C He's a messed up kid. Hopefully he will get the help he needs ^__^ (this shit really does write itself) I did make myself tear up a bit ;_; *cuddles back* Thank you so much! The cats, being domesticated, do have some hunting sense but being so dippy they followed the scent of where he had been not where he was. When he attacked Tom they did try to help Tom, who was already knocked out. Trent may have kicked them and scared them off.
Date: 07/15/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
This was definitely not what I was expecting O_O but I always enjoy a good car chase!
Author's Response: LOL! I didnt expect it either XD Thank you for reading! :3
Date: 07/15/12 12:52 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
O wow! What an exciting chapter :) Even tho I hate seeing Tom get hurt in any way I was happy too see Trent in all his madness. I actully enjoyed seeing his obsession with Tom, telling him that he loves him and calling him his boyfriend. Idk...call me weird lol. Fantastic chapter :)
Author's Response: Lol it is exciting. Sweet in a psycho freak kind of way? o.O Thank you so much!
Date: 07/15/12 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
Aww so sad yet so cute!! Love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/15/12 11:42 am Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
OMG! Trent needs to be locked up FOR GOOD!!! That was fuckin crazy and creepy.
Author's Response: Hahah yes XD Thank you so much!
Date: 07/15/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter Nine: Escalated Reactions and More Sleepovers
*sobbing all over the place*
Author's Response: *hugs* Aww XD
Date: 07/13/12 02:18 am Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
The beginning definitely was sad. And aww Tomi and Billa so cute ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 07/11/12 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
that was the sweetest chapters and the saddest chapter all in one
Author's Response: Yes! Thank you! :3
Date: 07/11/12 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Shut Up and Say Something
So, I finally made time to read all of your chaps, and I am indeed tracking. Cool story, love how you put in the facts about bullying, very cool move, raise awareness. I swear, i'll keep reading if you keep writing. Deal? :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes! It's a deal ;D