Date: 03/18/08 08:27 am Title: Chapter 3 A girls tongue
This CHAPTER was love! This story is actually great, not that I ever doubted it but now I'm confirmed!! I really really am looking forward to your next little chappie :D Update as soon as you can! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much *grins like mad* :D
Date: 03/18/08 03:39 am Title: Chapter 3 A girls tongue
Okay, I emailed it! Can you let me know when you get it please!
♥
Author's Response: Emma I'm seriously squeeling here...that is a brilliant idea...I never thought of using that game before we have it over here too...*grinns big* I'm gonna go do some writing now ;) thanks by the way
Date: 03/18/08 03:17 am Title: Chapter 3 A girls tongue
I am always so happy when I see an update from you ^_^ And this was no disappointment!!
I actually liked that Tom got a taste of his own medicine in this chapter. But I'm glad that Bill didn't do anything with Amanda.
Can't wait for more of this, it's one of my favourite stories I'm reading at the moment ♥
PS:- Are you still doing the 'games series' Only I have a suggestion for something I'd like to see you do! (I could leave a review or email you?)
Author's Response: ooooh please e-mail me cus I've kinda gone out of ideas here...firelucy@gmail.com...you know honey you treat me way too good (but I'm not gonna complain) I always love seing your name on the reviews :)
Date: 03/14/08 11:25 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
Oh no! But Tom will change his mind...right? They will end up together! (I'm full of hope :D )
Update soon again!! :)
Author's Response: haha you'll just have to wait and see I guess ;) thanks
Date: 03/12/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 2 Burning
thats a really cool idea!! but im confused about the being whole thing!! please explain!! good though!!
Author's Response: ok so when the twins were younger they could do everything together and that was what made them whole, but when they became older it was no longer accepted that they shared everything so they became seperate and two pieces of one soul...bill thinks the only way for them to be whole again is to share everything and so that is what he tries to do when he kisses tomi...that make any sense ???
Date: 03/12/08 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 2 Burning
me : *blinks*...wow...
bill : yeah..wow..
tom : you kissed me?! *looks at bill*
bill : uhm...yeah?
tom : cool, why?
me : ^-^'
bill : *shrugs* no clue she made me *points at you*
you : ^.^ hi! *waves*
me : hi *waves back*
tom : you made him kiss me?
you : duh! *high fives me*
bill :'tomi..their insane fangirls!'
tom : 'i know billa just don't make any unexpected movements'
you and me : *plotting plans to kidnap the twins*
me : he pushed him awwaaayyyyy, tomi doesn't want to be whole.. *cries in your arms* :'( so very sad, and poor poor bill *snifs*
gah! i want a connection like that too!!! i would win like..every game! *grins*
you're a question mark ? and i'm an exclamation mark ! we fit! how fun! *giggles* now all we need is a full stop. and a quotation mark " and we're complete!!
now, see here missy if you don't continue i'll never ever and never (i really mean never!) give you any of my cookies again...ever!! and you can forget about the special twinpluchies i'm making for you! *crosses arms* and if those threats don't explain it --> *yells* DON'T YOU DARE TO STOP!!!
did the message come through? *tilts head*
oh luce?! *sings*
*lures you into my mansion*
*shoves you into the very spacious basement the size of a footballstadium*
*flicks on light to reveal it's filled to the brim with cookies*
*locks the door and whistles innocently as i walk away*
Author's Response: COOKIE you make me laugh so freaking hard...*goes white* no more cookies *hyperventilates* WHAT *can't breath* I...I... *faints* ok that is reason enough for me to wright another one you seriously don't have to cut the cookies cus then I'll...I'll...oh cookie I'll die if you do :( I have to go and be creative now and come up with another chapter...actually I think I'll do it in your basement...much nicer ;)
Date: 03/12/08 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 Burning
This is really good!! Be nice and update more!! please? *puppy eyes*
I just love how they're connected!! *faints*
And let's make Tom pay for not wanting Bill!!
kisses and huggles for you!!!
you just made my day!!
Author's Response: oh you and I think alike darling, he will pay believe me *rubbs hands* ok sorry bout that...thank you so much for review means the world to me !!!
Date: 03/12/08 11:53 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
Oooooooooohmigoooooooosh! Exciting! Fantasy rules ;P
Please continue? (A)
Author's Response: will do ;)
Date: 03/12/08 11:11 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
“King and a queen.”
Bill moved further and peeked over at Georg’s cards. “Two tens and a…knight.”
THAT LITTLE CHEATER!!!
poor Georg is gonna lose all of his money in a few seconds!!
bill, thats not right!
...2 seconds later:
(laughs like there is no temorrow) AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAAH GEORG IS FUCKED! AHAHAHAHAH!
Tom’s touch was sending a burn through his veins that lit a fire in him as well. He couldn’t ever remember feeling so much pain and pleasure at the same time before.
gosh....I was hearing 'heavy on my heart' by Anastacia when I read this... HOLY GOD..I swear I could see this like a movie! so intense..so magic...!
*dies*
Bill was slightly scared, slowly he felt something run through him. He knew what was coming, they were becoming one again.
me: O.O .... k-ka-KAWAII!!!!!!!!!! *girly squeal*
and..the ending..that...F_U_C_K_E_R!!!! x (
Me: GET HIM TO ME! GET HIM TO ME!!! TOOOOOOOOOOM!
Tom: >=/ what?
Me: -_-* dont 'what' me!
Tom: *rolls eyes*
Me: are you ready?
Tom: for what? -.-'
Me: SPANKING TIME! *flaming eyes*
Tom: *girly scream*
ohh honey!!!! a chap for meeee!!! *spins around*
I have something for u too, but you have to check your mail first. lol
and I'll warn you once more. dont get scared by the mail's size.
lol
loveeeee, your daughter
Andy
Author's Response: aaaaaaaaaaaaa Tom just did a girly scream HILARIOUS *falls over laughing* I'm gonna go check my e-mail now :) and yes Georg is fucked (he always is)
Date: 03/12/08 10:54 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
I love this so much! I love the idea of them being telepathic and the connection they have (or had?). I felt so sorry for Bill at the end of the chapter. Can't wait for more ♥
Author's Response: ah the connection will still be there and it will cause a lot of...situations *grinns evily* (I seem to do that a lot) thank's for reviewing you're always so good to me :)
Date: 03/12/08 10:10 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
arghh this is one weird kind of sweetness o.o
Author's Response: hihi thanks ;)
Date: 03/12/08 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2 Burning
Ooh, I'm glad to see you continued this! And I'd be glad to see all go well and lovely with the twins, so you definetely have me hooked!
Author's Response: haha...go well and lovely...arn't you funny :) no just kidding with you thanks for reviewing
Date: 03/09/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
and sorry for pointing u my bazzoka mommy *puppy teary eyes* forgive me? *sob*
Author's Response: only if you let me borrow it cus I'm killing people in the fic "analyzed" *grinns evily*
Date: 03/09/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
lol
poor you! xD
I know what is to try being quiet at those times. I get that a lot! xD
I already spread the news to my best friend. she is a fanfiction-addict and I told her about ur story. she's probably reading it right now lol
Author's Response: that is so cool of you...what's your friends name ???
Date: 03/09/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
Continue, definetely, I'm intriqued!
Author's Response: thanksies :)
Date: 03/09/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
Should I continue or is this too stupid ???
WHAAAAAAAAAATT??????????
STUPID?!?!?! THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!! THIS MORE THAN BRILLIANT! THIS IS AMIRACLE OF THE HISTORY OF FANFICTION!
THIS IS .... UNBELIEVEBLE!
god...you have to see my face right now. this is my favorite story right NOW. and its only the first chapter!
girl..you're gonna kill me someday!
this is soooo GREAT DAMMIT!!!
the twin thing! OMG!!
how did you..?! oh SHIT!!!! THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!
“BILL.”
“What?”
“God you have got to eat something, you’re starving.
I was like: .........*silence*....... O.O
inside my mind: wtf..?
3 min. later: .........OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHSHITOHSHITOHSHIT!!!!!
“Tomiiiii.”
“What?”
holy god... they can...oh shit...
they realy can..OH SHIT
*dies*
This twin thing was killing him.
somewhere in heaven:
me: =_= .... then you should be in my shoes.
god.... this is....*tries to breath*...the BEST STORY I EVER -... and I repeat... E_V_E_R READ ...
...If you dont continue this thing .... *slowly pulls out a bazzoka* ... and make it the best story in this site... *grabs the bazzoka completely* ...I'll haunt you down... and kick your ass... *shoots to the air*
...
and you best do it... cause I dont have courage to kick your ass... lol
Im just begging you: CONTINUE... or else...you know ^_^ *hides the bazzoka*
Author's Response: ANDY what the hell are you doing threatening me with the bazzoka huh ??? you know I would continue any story for you simply because it's...well you ! you have me blushing from head to toe and my stomach hurts really badly now becase I had to stay quiet cus my mom's trying to sleep and I can tell you that's not very easy when I'm reading your review, believe me !!! so happy you liked it see you soon *kisses and huggs*
Date: 03/09/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
Yay! Continue definitely, I'm really lookin forward to see how this story turns out! I'm exceited! xD
Author's Response: thanksies, means a lot to me :)
Date: 03/09/08 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
Interesting!!
i would love to read more.
this is so weird but in a good and awesome way :D
Author's Response: I know...it's wierd *hids behind hands* but I've had the plot bunny for a while so...glad you like it :)
Date: 03/09/08 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 What we remember
haha, that sounds hot XD.
Author's Response: naughty you ;)