Date: 03/21/13 11:27 am Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?
What. The. Fuck.
Date: 11/04/12 12:35 am Title: Twin Time
Wow, that was absolutely fucked up. The most uncomfortable thing I've ever read. I didn't really like it, but I applaud you for having the balls to tackle a subject like this. Some sick parents do indeed exploit their children like this.
Date: 07/14/12 06:21 pm Title: Twin Time
I liked reading this, but it was a very strange story. I'm still not sure I understand their family dynamic. I guess I'll just say I was intregued and curious about how this fic would play out and I'm glad I read it, confusing as it was as to why things were happening. Glad the twins have eachother in the end. Interesting story. Well done. :)
Author's Response: If I'm going to be completely honest, I didn't even really know how this story was going to end when I started writing it, so it kinda just worked its way along as I wrote it. I'm sorry if not everything was explained @_@
Date: 06/28/12 08:02 pm Title: Twin Time
nice story!
u should make a sequel to this!
Date: 06/26/12 12:16 am Title: Twin Time
Wonderful twin time. Why am I not surprised the parents were squicked by the boys? Wonderful ending.
Date: 06/12/12 10:42 am Title: Second Helpings
My throat is all tight and soar now...o think I really need some twin time to make up for this please? Wonderfully sick and twisted chapter! I can't wait to see the conclusion!
Date: 06/12/12 10:05 am Title: Second Helpings
I want more, bitte!more than just handjob >:D they are surely a weird family
Date: 06/12/12 07:00 am Title: Second Helpings
Why call a woman whose husband is not pleasing a whore ?? I don't like that kind of insult towards woman. Ur story is really twisted through well written I guess this must happen in some families unfortunately and it's worse that I thought. First I thought Bill was sold by his parents, but the dad just do as very pimp on earth do: make other work for him so he'll get the money.
Date: 06/11/12 05:19 am Title: The Cherry Pie
That's just disgusting !! How can parents act that way ? Sell their own kid for money and rob away his innoncence from him.
Date: 06/10/12 04:40 pm Title: The Cherry Pie
I'm sure reviews ARE sweeter than licking pie off Bill's little hand, that's just sour and sick in the head...now. licking pie off Bill's big skeleton tattooed hand...that's pretty damn sweet and would be hard to compete with...
Damn, one or two more chapters?! How ever will I contain my anger at the very idea!! Lol, just kidding. Can't wait to see more! Keep up the fab work!
Date: 06/10/12 08:08 am Title: The Cherry Pie
These are the most scary stories to read >.< It get to me because it's haunting reality.
Date: 06/10/12 06:21 am Title: The Cherry Pie
"This story good, would you mind if I beg you to update just a litter sooner?"
Author's Response: I don't mind at all! I need people to push me to update or else I'll just waste all my time floating around the interwebs doing nothing. With any lucky, the next (possibly last) part will be up tomorrow. Fingers crossed.
Date: 06/10/12 04:03 am Title: The Cherry Pie
Its so yummy x3 more plz '-'
Date: 06/10/12 03:56 am Title: The Cherry Pie
This is so wrong. How could Simone sacrifice her little boy's innocence for the sake of money and material goods? How could she and Gordon be prepared to watch? This whole chapter was so good, building up the tension and just knowing what's going to happen. It's given me a sick feeing in my stomach, but that's because you've written it so well. I need the next chapter now.
Author's Response: I think I had the most fun writing Simone's dialogue with Bill in the kitchen. I don't know why, but it was interesting to have her maintain the balance between hiding her emotions and telling Bill how much she loved him.
Date: 06/10/12 01:55 am Title: The Cherry Pie
Oh, and by the way, Simone is a wretched mother in this story and should be stoned to death!! I'd just like to add that.
Date: 06/10/12 01:52 am Title: The Cherry Pie
Oh, this is just too wrong!! I mean, it makes me feel bad reading it...No, that isn't right either...Oh Gawd damnit!! Just give me the next chapter so the angst demon is fed!!!
Author's Response: If it makes you feel any better, I feel kinda bad writing it, too. But that's the beauty of the internet. Next chapter should be up tomorrow or the next day :)
Date: 06/10/12 01:23 am Title: The Cherry Pie
awesomee , can`t wait for next chapter
Date: 06/06/12 05:08 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?
Enjoyed the way you wrote this. Is it wrong that I'm really looking forward to the next chapter even though I know what's going to happen to Bill?
Author's Response: I'd say no, but then again, you're asking the person who was sick enough to write this lol
Date: 06/06/12 01:46 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?
Okay, first of all, why does Bill get to stay and have dessert? I mean I get it, the forshadowing and everything is clear, but if I were in Tom's positioon that'd be my thought, y'know?
Okay, so. This is really fantastic. I did tear up a little at the impending loss of innocence. I look forward to seeing where you take this!
I must note, they appear to be acting more seven-ish that eleven-ish. Just something to keep in mind.
Author's Response: Yeah, I realized that. When I originally thought about it, I was going to have them be about 5 or 6 but then I didn't want little under aged bill to have an NC-17 situation with David. I haven't written the next part yet, so I'm not sure if it'll be considered NC-17 but I figured I was better off safe than sorry. And I agree, I'd be pissed too if I were Tom about not getting dessert but I guess he figures that if he doesn't have dessert than that just means more for bill.