Date: 06/15/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
YOU LOVE YOUR TOMI!
Date: 06/15/08 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hmmm.. Very, very interesting. I find it weird that Tom would ask Bill to meet him so far from the house. After all, if he wanted privacy with Bill to talk, they could do so in one of their rooms. Then I figured he wanted alone time with Bill to make out...but he wouldn't do that in public.
So...I'm curious now. I wonder if Tom has somehow found out. After all, why did Wilson find Bill's phone on the plane? The same phone that Bill threw across the room in anger and should not have been on anyone's mind once the parents came home and found out what had happened to Tom. You know...once Simone realized Tom had hypothermia, her last thoughts would be about Bill's cell phone.
So I am just wondering how it got on the plane when Bill himself seemed to forget about it. I find that suspicious. I may be totally off base here, but that's my theory. That Tom knows something.
Date: 06/15/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
O.O
OMG! I can't wait!!
Date: 06/15/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 11
OMFG. I HATE YOU JORG WITH A PASSION OF A THOUSAND BURNING SUNS!! No, Tomi! What's going to happen?? OMFG. RESIST, BILL! Don't be so blind! LISTEN TO WILSON!
Date: 06/15/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that was confusing... and ironic! I want to know what will happen on the bridge.
About Jorg, I don't know if I hate him or not... I mean, I hate him for sure, but sometimes I even like him a little bit...
However, what I really like is your fic! ^^ Keep writing!
Date: 06/15/08 08:49 am Title: Chapter 11
update update , I need an update ...
pretty please ^__^
Date: 06/15/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 11
intense and a well graded action. i can't wait to read the bridge scene!
Date: 06/15/08 03:35 am Title: Chapter 11
O.O Sounds like there would be a whole lot of angst in the next chapter!
Date: 06/15/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh no!!! cruel part to stop!
Bill is so blinded by his love for Jorg :(
I wonder what Tom wants to talk about to Bill..
I always wondered if Tom already knows and he's just acting like he's not...
Gawd, you need to update soon or I'll go crazy XDDDDDD
love this much
Date: 06/15/08 01:24 am Title: Chapter 11
oh my god.
I just love this story
Date: 06/15/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11
I can't believe Bill fell for that! After all the love he gets from Simone and Gordon he still feels like he needs Jorg?! And he should know he's good at lying! I hate seeing Bill played like that! It's grustrating as hell. I want him to wake up and hate Jorg's guts! And if he pushes Tom off that bridge I am going to hunt you down! Don't you dare! Not in a million, billion years! And Update really really really soon!
Date: 06/09/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 10
omg! you're sooooo good! please, type some more ? (:
Date: 06/07/08 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ohemgee.
:D
pretty awesome chappy.
SMUT! -happydance-
Date: 06/07/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh sweet, merciful Jesus...
I love you, Shibuyainn. Seriously. *weeps*
Now I'm curious about the aftermath. And poor Tom. How is he going to react when he finds out the truth? Because it's got to come out--and it probably will right as Bill realizes he's in love with Tom. Will Tom flip out in anger and reveal Bill's true identity? Or will he crumble and break from the betrayal?
Will he dare Bill to kill him, screaming obscenities at his adopted brother?
Oh wow. That got just a bit melodramatic didn't it? Sorry. *bounces*
And what of Jorg? Bill hung up on him and turned off his phone. I can't see Jorg taking that lightly. I think now Tom--and Bill--are going to be in danger.
And so fucking hot. Hot! The only thing missing was Tom actually fucking Bill into the floor. But...good things come to those who wait, right? And it would have been way too soon. Got to tease us all a bit more, you cruel, cruel minx. LOL!
Great job. Now write more. :DDDD
Date: 06/07/08 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10
WARNING: heavy (ish sorta) kink ahead.
Dude,
sorta
I love the story, its well written,and the sorta heavy kink, as you classified it,Rocked.
I look foward to your update.
Much Love
Soda Brain
Date: 06/07/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh, Bill can's possibly be still thinking of killing Tom. He loves him. Obviously he's lying to himself when he thinks he doesn't. This chapter was great. How long was tom awake for? Was he suppriesed? Does he remember when he was drunk and bill said he didn't love him? Update soon.
Date: 06/07/08 06:30 am Title: Chapter 10
*____*
i wasnt expecting that and ...
OMG ...
Date: 06/07/08 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1
:D
*fans self*
^-^
When is Bill gonna realise how much he actually loves Tom? =__="