Date: 06/20/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
That story of yours really cept me on the edge, and i was really sure for a moment that they both would die.
I am soo glad they didnīt!
Thist story was incredible! And i really think that you should make an other one! you are really good at this!
Date: 06/20/08 11:26 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, man. When I saw that this was the final chapter..and how the last one ended I was like "OH MY GOD NO BILL" but then you made it okay and now I'm like weeee happy endings! :D
Date: 06/20/08 11:23 am Title: Chapter 12
*cries*
I love you
Date: 06/20/08 05:35 am Title: Chapter 12
o.o This serioulsy kept me on the edge!!
This is one of the bests stories i've ever read!!
Date: 06/20/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 12
omg , this story... it was totally amazing! i loved it, i loooved it
Date: 06/20/08 03:12 am Title: Chapter 12
I can't believe that it's finally over!
I've proper loved it!
I think a sequel would be perfect, even just a one-shot, just to make it even more amazing!
I need to find the words to tell you how amazing this was, but I cant, I'm late for school, so If I read this again, and there is a good chance I will, or I see you in the schrei box, even though I'm never in, I'll tell you there.
Just have to say I loved it.
Date: 06/20/08 02:55 am Title: Chapter 12
This story was amazingggg. Perfect ending :] you should deff make a sequel
Date: 06/20/08 12:29 am Title: Chapter 12
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I was shocked it ended so soon though. I thought there was lots more story to tell to be honest, but it's not my story and you did a wonderful job.
I call bullshit with Tom though. I don't believe him when he told Bill he wasn't going to jump. I think Tom hoped Bill did love him--but he still had that doubt because Tom has his issues.
I think that if it came out that Bill honestly didn't love him? He would have jumped. I could be interpreting things completely wrong though, so please let me know if you could? Pretty please?
Another great story from you, lovie. I am highly anticipating what's next from you. You always manage to draw me in. :D How do you feel about vampires and TH? LOL!
Anyway, two thumbs up--and a foot! A whole foot with decorative nail polish.
Author's Response: ooh I like nail polish :3 And as for Tom's mentality, well dear, I couldn't really tell you, it's supposed to be each reader's duty to pull their own conclusions and assume whatever makes them happy. That's the beauty of speculating :) rnrnPS: here's a secret: I think he would've jumped too. shhh dont tell!
Date: 06/19/08 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh God, im tipsy and crying... im pathetic
love the bantering at the end, the whole chapter was heartwrenching...
i love this fic so much.
Thank you ShibuyaInn, for another masterpiece.
and I'm looking forward to reading news fics from you.
Much love.
Date: 06/19/08 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
GOD This chapter just killed me!!!!!!!!
Soo beautiful, man. God!
Love you 4ever!!
Date: 06/19/08 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. It makes sense though. This was really really good. If it's not in my favorites alread it's going to be. I'm supprised Tom knew Bill wanted to kill him. I don't know why though. I really liked the ending. Good job.
Date: 06/19/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
That was AMAZING!!
i never knew it would end like this but...WOW!!
that was ssooo good =)
Date: 06/19/08 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
cool story so far...
Date: 06/19/08 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww, that was a good ending.
At some parts I was close to crying.
Date: 06/19/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT~ :)
Shoooo cute at the end ;_;
Man, I actually thought they'd both jump and it'd end that way. :
Date: 06/19/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
o_O
That was just breathtaking.
It kept getting more and more intense.
And the end was just amazing.
Thank you so much for this story.
Date: 06/16/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 11
I sense a twist coming... and I like it
Date: 06/16/08 07:08 am Title: Chapter 11
oh! *_* you really have to type some more, this is so great! ( don't kill him Bill! :o )