Date: 05/10/08 04:47 am Title: Chapter 7
bill is such a meanie pants! D= *crosses arms and stamps foot*
make him be nice to tomi! =O
Date: 05/09/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
AAH! I want Bill to love Tom, not just want to kill him.. :P
But I have a little hope that Bill will fall, and fall hard for Tom.. :D
Update soon please!!? :D
Date: 05/09/08 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Does he love tom? Even a little? How can he still want to kill tom after 12 years? He must have changed in a loving environment w/ no JOrg around. Update sooner?
Date: 04/27/08 07:07 am Title: Chapter 6
wow... I mean, this was.. wow... :O
More!? :D:D
Date: 04/24/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 6
more more more! :)
Date: 04/23/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE THIS STORY soo intense
please keep writing
Date: 04/23/08 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
NO NO NO NO NO
when does bill finally stop hating tom???
update soon please!
Date: 04/23/08 08:04 am Title: Chapter 6
YAY! Tom was totally cute *melts* what a shame Bill can't see it... he is so blind! And this all because of Jorg... uhhh i hate him so much more now...!
Although I want to know what he wants Bill to do. Knife, poison, accident...?
Hmm... if they were older maybe too intense orgasm? XD
update soon, please!
Author's Response: I'm liking that orgasm idea...
Date: 04/23/08 01:29 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG, it's starting! I can't wait to see what happens next! *bounces up and down* Update soon, ok?
Date: 04/22/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG Tom is effin' cute!!!
i love imagining that scene over and over again.
Oh man, plan is put to action already :S
update soon onegaishimasu
Date: 04/21/08 11:34 am Title: Chapter 5
omg, you have to type some more! i looooooove this
Date: 04/20/08 06:24 am Title: Chapter 5
I've got a dreaaaam xD. In this dream I was Bill from your story and I told Tom and his parents that I'm murder but I don't want to kill Tom. They were happy xD. And suddenly I was in my school but I had to go somewhere outside [it was winter] and I got lost. So I screamed "Tomiiiiii! Help meeeee" but nobody came ;( the end
I want new chapter!!
Author's Response: lol really? That's AWESOME. I have the power to hack minds...loves it :D
Date: 04/19/08 09:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Noooes Bill, don't do iiiiit ! Good chapter, I like the red hair dye thingy :)
Date: 04/14/08 06:40 am Title: Chapter 5
I hope it's not too late to leave a review ^^
First of all I want to make my compliments, you're my favorite writer here, without any doubt! I just love the way you write and make feelings REAL in such a simple way. I can feel Bill's emotion like they're alive, it's amazing... Just as amazing is this story =] I hope you'll post soon the new chapter, I'm looking forward it!
Date: 04/13/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 5
*sniff* stupid jorg. stupid stupid jorg.
Date: 04/13/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter 5
I've never read story like this.
I hate Jorg for fucking up Bill's life. I would kill him with my bare hands if I could. I hope that Bill will realize that Tom is not going to be a murder and Jorg was just washing his brain.
When I finished reading the 5th chapter, i started singing chorus of papa roach - anxiety. This song suits this chapter xD.
Update soon, i am waiting!
Date: 04/12/08 10:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful chapter! Bill slowly falling for Tom... it's pure love
Date: 04/12/08 12:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Very intriguing, my dear. I love how slowly Bill is falling for Tom against his will. It will be interesting to see just how much he will continue to force himself to follow through with killing Tom throughout the years, while also falling more and more in love with him. Right now it's that innocent puppy love...but when it manifests and grows deeper and more passionate, that's when the real complications are going to start huh?
Jorg was better off telling Bill to do it now as they are younger. The longer he waits the more difficult it's going to be for Bill.
Sorry, I can't help speculating on stories. That means I'm totally hooked.
Write more!!!! :D
Date: 04/11/08 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh I love this storyy! Update soon :D
Date: 04/11/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i love this story so much. its not describable with words. i can't wait for the next chapter! :D