Date: 05/25/08 02:38 am Title: Chapter 8
OH no, no no. Bill! What the fuck are you doing?!!!
Shibuyainn, what the fuck are you doing? Augggggh! Oh God, write more!
*rocks in corner and whimpers*
Date: 05/25/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 8
You can't leave it there!!!....:O
Date: 05/25/08 01:25 am Title: Chapter 8
wah? I'm like...completely lost. Was there a "character death" warning? :S
Date: 05/25/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 8
...
You're joking, right?
Date: 05/25/08 12:38 am Title: Chapter 8
So is he dead? Or are you going to make him miracuously survive? Because the story info doesn't mention anything about character death
Date: 05/25/08 12:29 am Title: Chapter 8
NO!!! Make him go back! Please! Make him realize he can't kill tom! Please! Make him realize! Update soon.
Date: 05/24/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. :)
I'll be waiting for updates!
Haha, for some reason, I picture Jorg with Jost's face and Georg's muscle bod. :|
It's quite awkward.
Date: 05/21/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
God, whyyyyy???? Is Wilson still around?
OMG, i hope noone heard bill say that. Aw, poor Bill. He is like the perfect example of someone suffering the Stockholm syndrome. GOD, jorg is such a bitch!!
I can't wait for more.
Date: 05/20/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 7
update soon! i really like your story
Date: 05/20/08 08:28 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear Lord. I've been very lax in reviewing this story, so please forgive me.
This story has broken my brain. LOL. I've been thinking about this one lately and I can't stop wondering what will happen. I love speculating you see. :)
I've been wondering when Bill will realize he actually loves Tom. It's the little things you know? Like him letting Tom hold him while he sleeps or when he got so terrified when Tom didn't show up that one night to crawl into bed with him. Even in this recent chapter with Tom all drunk in his room. Bill panicked when Tom started sobbing. If you hated him, Bill, you wouldn't give a shit why he was crying.
Bill holds onto his "hate" because he doesn't know anything else. He was never taught love by Jorg. It's a foreign emotion to him so he doesn't recognize it when he does feel it. Surely by now, living with Tom and his parents for so long, should have made Bill get hugely attached to them. Yet, he can't let go of Jorg--the one who doesn't give a shit about him at all. I wonder what Bill actually thinks is going to happen if he executes this plan properly? Does he expect to run back into Jorg's arms and all will be well? Does he expect Jorg will want his son back then? Give him some of the money? I highly doubt Jorg will want anything to do with Bill after he carries out his sick plan and I worry greatly for Bill if he ever realizes this.
Of course, this being a Tom/Bill fic, we know he won't end up killing Tom for real. I think he will try. Possibly many times or just once, I don't know what you have planned. What I am wondering about is will Tom find out or will remain oblvious to Bill's constant inner struggle?
I can see Tom being completely shattered if he realized that Bill has been planted all along to kill him. Tom is deeply in love with Bill, even though he has problems showing him since he's emotionally stunted. I keep imagining Bill with this knife, see? And after a failed attempt to kill Tom, Tom just stares at Bill, eyes pooling with tears, and just kneels down in front of Bill and begs him to end his life. Because Bill has destroyed Tom with that epiphany. OR, Tom begs him to do it because he just wants Bill to be happy and go back to Jorg. Because he wants Bill to be free of Tom if that's what Bill longs for. Because he loves Bill that much.
See what you've done to my brain? Deep, disturbing and angsty scenarios are just playing out constantly in my head. Gah! Gah!
LMAO. I wouldn't change it for the world. I usually love your stuff, and this is no exception. I am just waiting with anticipation to see just when the dam actually breaks and Bill figures out he actually loves Tom. Will that comfort him or drive him over the edge further? Will Tom stop drinking and make another move on Bill? He did so once when they were younger, so I wonder if he'll get the courage to kiss Bill again. Or more, since I assume there will be smut with your rating! Possibly angry, hot smut? I keep imagining Bill trying to off Tom and they end up fighting brutally in the rain--!--and somehow it ends with Tom fucking Bill into the ground while Bill claws at his back and tries to fight his emotions.
Oh God. I'm going to stop rambling before I destroy us both.
Can you tell I love this story?
Write! For the love of God, write more and update. :DDDD
Author's Response: Man, I wish everyone reviewed the way you do. I love how you analyzed everything...it kinda gives me the sentiment that people are actually paying attention to my angsty word babbling(Who knew? :D)I'm eccstatic that you love the story so much and take the time to go into so much detail. The next chapter's gonna be for you, hun.
Date: 05/17/08 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
moooooorrreee D: omg, this is so good
Date: 05/14/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love this to bloody death.
Date: 05/12/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
Go on!!! I'm dying here!
Date: 05/11/08 06:30 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was amazing. I absolutely love this story! Keep writing!!
Date: 05/11/08 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7
And here I thought Bill was giving in to his feelings... :( But he will, I know he will! XD
Finally they're 17!^^
Oh, I'm reading Have a Little Faith in Italian on our community! XD Man, I loved that fic so much the first time I read it! It'll be wonderful to read it again in my first language =)
Author's Response: ahaha man that's so cool. And weird. But cool-weird. So you'll be my spy, okay? Let me know if any italians bashes my story and I'll wack them with a wooden spoon XD.
Date: 05/10/08 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, but he lovesTomi. He just hasn't realized yet, due to his "hate-Tomi-training" when he lived with Jorg. Ugh.
Date: 05/10/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 7
type some more please ? :D
Date: 05/10/08 10:05 am Title: Chapter 7
Amazing chapter weeee xD
Keeps getting better and better.
*hugs*
Date: 05/10/08 08:29 am Title: Chapter 7
i feel sorry for tom. Being rich can be so damn lonely..
oohhh bill
this is really great one!
hope you update soon