Date: 06/07/08 04:20 am Title: Chapter 10
This is just Fucking GREAT!! I like how you use Bill in this...like SO real!!YOu really make me feel like i'm in there! *bows you*
Date: 06/07/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh my *fans self*
I feel so sad for Bill... he's in love with tom but is still clinging to the hopes that Jorg would love him in the end.
I just hope he'll make the right decision ...
*now i sit and wait for the next chapter*
Date: 06/03/08 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
i really love this chapter, you are such an amazing writer and this chapter is particularly amazingly written. Many *hugs* for you! i always look for updates on this story, i love it, and for some weird reason in various bits it keeps making me cry or feel like i want to cry, if that makes any sense at all.
anyway, i really look forward to the next update. its very eagerly anticipated!!
lots of love x
x
Date: 06/02/08 08:00 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/02/08 07:46 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG keep writing, this story is so... attaching? its addictive!! i love the concept!
Date: 06/01/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
*does a happy dance* yay i love bill...he's soo good in this chapter
Date: 06/01/08 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Just wow. I really love this story and I'm impressed with how you are able to weave the visuals so well regarding your characters and the setting. I literally was salivating for this next part and was so happy when you updated.
However, as I read there's something that is slowly beginning to worry me. I know this story is from Bill's POV so it relies heavily on lots of his inner thoughts and demons. But...I'm starting to miss interaction between him and Tom. There really hasn't been a lot lately--you know, dialogue and all--and I hope you mean to explore that more in the future. Especially when Tom is not drunk. I'm really growing curious as to what makes Tom tick as he is still a mystery to us in this story, so I'm hoping him talking to Bill might shed a lot of light on that.
Don't get me wrong. Your descriptions of their actions is superb. The reader is getting a lot of their feelings that way, but I don't know. I still long for actual present interaction of the verbal kind. *shrugs* I guess it's a preference.
Anyhow, I am humbly your servant and I await more of this with baited breath. And donuts. And other tempting sweets. *nods*
Author's Response: I really hate to disapoint you, but there might not be much dialogue in the next chapter either... :( The boys will be too busy doing um...other stuff :)
Date: 06/01/08 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just read it all, and it was so great to see Bill start to open up his heart to Tom in this chapter *__* It was such a sweet scene, looks like he's finally shrugging off all the mental conditioning at last!
Screw Jorg, what a manipulative cold-hearted bastard!!
Date: 06/01/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
TOM IS ALIIIIIIVEEEE. I love you again
Date: 06/01/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh my god I love this fics.
im sorry I didnt review for all the past chapters but I just read it all right now
and gosh this fic is so good.
I cant wait till the next chap
Date: 06/01/08 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
omg, i love this story. i love how you write and yeah... it's amazing
Date: 06/01/08 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
oooohhh....WOW!!
that was EXCELLENT!!
what is Bill going to do now??!!
Date: 06/01/08 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tomi, please wake up! And please comfort Bill. He needs you so much right now.
I'm so glad you made Bill go back! I was honestly preparing myself to get ready to start hating Bill and it was horrible. Now I don't have to hate him! I'm so happy
Date: 06/01/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
i'm so glad you updated this, i love it
Date: 06/01/08 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
Im glad he decided to go back to Tom. There's more of a possibility now that he really cares more than he's think he's capable of!
Jorg is such an ass! ugggghhh!
Now I'm scared for the two.
It's so sad Bill has to suffer
Date: 06/01/08 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
:O... Omg.. I cant believe Bill actually nearly left Tom!
Oh, and i also cant belive her hung up on Jorg!
Update sooon pleaseee!
Date: 06/01/08 11:53 am Title: Chapter 9
Update soon! I want to see what happens when Tom wakes up! I'm so glad Bill's realizing the truth about Jorg! He never loved him. He should have known that. And Tom does. He might have trouble showing it but he does. I don't want bill to feel so alone anymore. Update soon.
Date: 06/01/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Not that he had been a long-time sufferer of hypothermia, but on the inside, he was bent double, shivering alone, blue with cold. This vision was Tom’s constant mental state. He was alone.
I really like that line. :)
And naked Bill and Tom :D
Jorg makes me mad eghaogag;aegh;aeg.
Date: 06/01/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 9
è_é I swear, sometimes I'd really like to kill Jorg with my own hands. He can't treat Bill like that, jeez! He just wants some love!
And Bill and Tom... naked... together under the covers in front of the fireplace... Adorable!
Thanks for the wonderful update, still waiting for more =)
Oh, can I ask you something that has absolutely nothing to do with the fic? XD Would you mind beta-ing another fic of mine?? *_* When I'm done writing it...-_-
Kiss
Fedy
Author's Response: lulz sure no problem. Just send it along and I'll look at it when I have a free moment :)
Date: 06/01/08 11:09 am Title: Chapter 9
Damn, Jorg might send someone after him! He's gonna need backup.
It would be soo hot if Tom woke up with Bill on top of him *signs*