Date: 07/14/12 03:46 am Title: Cherished by the wisest men
where he could feel the faint outline of his rubs > Ah, I think that's supposed to be "ribs"
Woot! Hehe, yeah, that's a pretty crazy story to tell Andi. Especially that's he's "going steady" (*wink*) with the owner.
I wish this had been one or two chaps longer, but this was an adorable gem of a story :)
Date: 07/14/12 03:13 am Title: Cherished by the wisest men
Hehe awsome
Date: 07/08/12 05:12 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
more and more and more! I like it, Bill is a cute and Tom is sweet, a delicious chocolate will be born there :DD
Date: 07/06/12 11:57 am Title: Little surprises around every corner
One of the best plays on Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory I've read yet! (:
MORE PLEASE! :D
10/10
*****
Date: 07/05/12 02:30 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
Oh no - and oh YES for the love blossoming here. Although Tom is confidently, almost cockily sometimes leading Bill deeper into infatuation, he seems pretty lost in Bill... and he appears to be 100 percent genuinely caring for Bill. I found myself panting aloud on the train while I read how they almost kissed, and had to disguise it with a few loud coughs. :D
Date: 07/05/12 03:33 am Title: What you imagine sometimes comes true
This sounds like such a fun story. Love the beginning. It's killing me I have to wait until tomorrow to read more.
Date: 07/04/12 11:03 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter~
Date: 07/04/12 10:26 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
Lions and tigers and bears, oh my!~
Date: 07/04/12 04:58 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
dun dun DUUUNNNN!
i want them to kiss!!! like...really want them to kiss!
Date: 07/04/12 03:11 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
OH NO! Geez, there's a cliffhanger for you!
I'm starting to think this entire elaborate set-up was the Mating Sequence of Bill Kaulitz, and it's been wildly successful! Tom can complete his musical score, it's clearly meant to be.
Was also starting to side-eye Jost, so I hope he means no harm. But for Jorg, I know he could bring the harm!
I'm wildly curious to see how you're going to wrap everything up in one last chapter. GOOD LUCK AND DON'T MAKE US WAIT SO LONG.
Date: 07/04/12 02:39 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
Oh nooo... Jorg *angry face* how dare he show up like that when he knows Bill is running the tour today!...wait a minute...I'll bet Jost is spying for Jorg, that's the only way I can see that what he told Tom would make sense!
Gaaawwwd, I can't understand why Elliot isn't interested in this candy factory, it faaar more interesting than a normal one, so if he had no interest in seeing a candy factory, why did he and his mom go? Unless Nathalie is the spy...I'm definitely feeling like there's a spy.
Oh heeey, you're from the chicago area? Cool. I live near Notre Dame down in indiana. Cool. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to see the last chapter! Even if I am going to be sad to see it end...*sad. Face*
Date: 07/04/12 01:41 pm Title: Little surprises around every corner
Dun dun dun
Date: 07/04/12 06:16 am Title: Little surprises around every corner
Oh no indeed D:
Also, I can't get enough of the magicalness of this story :D The elevator, the changing lemonade... eeeee!
Date: 07/02/12 05:02 am Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
This is a really wonderful story! I had my doubts, but it's so colourful and full of life, you can't just not fall in love! I am amazed by this world you've created, it's bright, and vivid, and happy, and I'm eager to find out more about Bill and his family and how he found himself running the factory alone. Why doesn't he come out?
It'd be nice to have some kind of a higher rating, cuz I'd love some cute, sweet smut when things progress enough, but this is entirely up to you. Bill is adorable btw, absolutely love his sweetness and ignorance.
Date: 06/27/12 05:47 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
Wow, Tom... flying! This is majestic, all of it, amazing and fantastic and super.
Date: 06/26/12 10:41 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
Marvelous update, loving every word of this!
Date: 06/24/12 10:22 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
I'm so in love with this story, and the way that Bill and Tom interact with each other :)
Date: 06/24/12 09:45 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
THAT'S RIGHT, TOM! DON'T YOU LET THAT PRECIOUS TREASURE DRIFT AWAY! YOU GRAB IT AND STUFF IT IN YOUR MOUTH AND KEEP IT INSIDE YOU FOREVER!
Oh, and you might want to enjoy the bubble too, while you're at it. :3 :3 :3
Carry on courting, boys! I for one look forward to seeing how you'll lose the rest of the excess baggage and find yourselves in the bliss of privacy! :D
Date: 06/24/12 08:41 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
Jost is giving me the willies with all that picture-taking. One would think photography is not allowed in here >:/
Lol, I wonder if the bubbles' effects allow directed flight, or just hovering semi-helplessly like in the original movie.
Also, a technical something I've really been noticing throughout this fic: Why all the page separators? In this case they don't indicate scene changes... It makes the text a little difficult to take in because I keep expecting a short time lapse between.
Date: 06/24/12 05:19 pm Title: The maker of music, the dreamer of dreams
aaaaaah! flight bubbles, and they're actually allowed to try them :) ahhh, i so want tom and bill to be left alone~ bill's so adorableeeee