Date: 10/07/12 12:56 pm Title: Reflections
Love how this started. Straight to the point. And the line "a hand so sexy, it could only belong to his twin" - priceless. Your writing is so effortlessly smooth, humorous without trying, sexy but not lewd (somehow), cute and sweet without being cloying. You've got a confident voice and an obvious talent. And a perverted mind that has a twisted innocence behind it in your stories. I strive to write sex scenes that sound this smooth and natural. Hope you plan to keep writing! Oh, and did you read 'The Day Georg started Acting Weird' yet?
Author's Response: I still can't get over the fact that you like my writing. It's just unfathomable to imagine considering how perfect your writing is to me. So for you to say that mine is smooth, humorous, and sexy is like O_O Thank you!! It was funny cause these last few chapters I've struggled with the balance of keeping Bill in his "total virgin" mindset but making him all ready for sexy times as well, and I asked my friend for some input and she reminded me, "Well, you're a total innocent virgin, but you're still a huge pervert... go for that!" So I did. I definitely plan to keep writing. The whole time I was gone I was thinking, "Mizu's gonna kill me cause I promised I'd finish this story!" And I haven't gotten a chance to read it yet, but it's on my list of stories to read when my Chinese homework is somehow magically done. I swear they just keep making up new Chinese characters just to confuse me and make me feel illiterate.
Date: 10/07/12 09:22 am Title: Reflections
Hahah oh you tease xD!! Hope Bill have some sexy plans in mind
Great chapter!!! Gosh really Hot picture asdglhfdh they in the bathroom with the mirror*----* oh G!!!!!
Thank you so much for share with us!!
Hope everything goes perfect for you this week!! ^^
Author's Response: I'm itching to write/post the next chapter! I've been waiting to write what's coming up next for months and I finally figured out a way to work it into the story so I'm excited :) I'm glad you enjoyed the picture of them in front of the picture, I'm quite a fan of sexual encounters in front of mirrors ;) Thank you for the well-wishes!
Date: 10/07/12 01:28 am Title: Billy's Little Willy
Aweee. As soon as I read your reply it made me smile so big, I never get replies! Thank you too c: Muffins is my name for everything :3 Yayy. You have to write more, it's so sexy hexy! I'm currently juggling between three fics right now, but I keep finding myself coming back to this one c:
I hope you post soon because it's just so goddamn brilliant. Thanks for the good read
Author's Response: Awww! I'm so glad my reply meant so much :D Muffins is just a wonderful name. It makes me think of that old YouTube video...
Date: 10/06/12 01:00 am Title: New Habits
i am glad that it has been updated!
i cant wait for the neext chapter!
Date: 10/05/12 11:21 pm Title: New Habits
Oh mein gott. Sexy hexy! By the way, you have the best name in the world
Author's Response: Thank you so much, but I have to disagree. YOUR name is the best. I love muffins! It sounds like a cat's name :3 I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 10/05/12 11:16 pm Title: New Habits
YAY! Tom will be a good teacher and Bill will be a good student. :3 This story has parts that are so adorable, like the fruity pebbles on the face part, the 13.47 minutes, and the "ware." Wae u so cute.
Bill jerking off on the bed was hot! I'm surprised Tom didn't let Bill keep going... But Tom (and you) likely have better things in mind. :)
Don't be hard on yourself about writing! You're exceptionally busy (and exceptionally exceptional and awesome too, if you ask me).
Author's Response: I'm just gonna start misusing where/wear/ware on purpose just for you :P Except, if I try to use them wrongly on purpose, then I'll probably start using them properly... maybe I'm onto something here. I like that you pretend like I haven't already told you what I have planned for these horny twins :P And thank you. I need to remind myself that I named myself shitpisscatfuck for a reason.
Date: 10/05/12 08:37 pm Title: New Habits
wow......i can't wait for more now
Author's Response: Working on the next chapter already. I'm appalled by how long it took me to update this. I don't ever want to do that again.
Date: 10/05/12 04:15 pm Title: New Habits
Your writing is so good, can't get enough of it. Funny, entertaining, hot, clever, inventive - a magical mix!
More please:-) Greetings to China.
Author's Response: Aww you're so sweet! Part of why I didn't update for so long is I kept trying to start this chapter and it didn't come out right... I finally just had to say fuck it and push it out, so I'm glad you enjoyed my magical writing :D And greetings FROM China! <3
Date: 10/05/12 12:21 pm Title: New Habits
damn right bill kaulitz doesn't just throw on some clothes! silly tomi.
so glad you updated! i was thinking about this story just the other day. so glad you're back!
Author's Response: I thought it might be hard to maintain the balance between "total virgin" Bill and "fabulous diva" Bill but they seem to just work out together... So yeah, he doesn't just throw on clothes, he just sits at home naked while other people do the hard work for him ;) I'm so happy you were thinking of my story!! You flatter me.
Date: 10/05/12 09:50 am Title: New Habits
Ah, Tom's a spoilsport. Bill was really getting into jerking off. Don't think I'd mind coming home to a sight like that either!!!!Interesting lesson Tom's about to teach his little brother. I'm so happy you updated; I love this story.
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom shouldn't have interrupted, but Bill needs to learn to share ;) Tom has something much better planned for his brother.
Date: 08/24/12 05:00 pm Title: Swallowing
Tibet is cool!
And oh yes, Bill, it is quite normal to swallow. Though I'm not sure if it's so normal for the tywins. XD
Dreaded pubes give me nightmares, yack.
And it was so sweet, the way Bill thought of Tom and how he'd done everything with Tom. Such a good big brother he is! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm grossing everyone out with the thought of dreaded pubes. Tom still has a few tricks up his sleeve to convince Bill he made the right decision ;)
Date: 08/24/12 04:51 pm Title: Double Rainbow
Eep! I'm late!
Anyway, I agree that Bill has his things quite well sorted out. And damn, I would have LOVCED to be in his position there! Hotness, OMG! Really sweet and calming...
Date: 08/24/12 03:55 am Title: Swallowing
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 08/22/12 05:34 pm Title: Swallowing
oh gosh just sexy hexy awesome!! i love it!!! thank you so much for keep sharing with us your fic hope everything goes perfect with your travel!!! i will be dying for another chapter!!!
thank you thank you so much!!!
Author's Response: Yay! You loved it! Luckily, I think I finally finished outlining the rest of the chapters for this story. There's still quite a few to come before I'm finished, but at least I'm back on track for knowing the direction of where this is going. So hopefully, that means more frequent updates >_<
Date: 08/22/12 05:04 pm Title: Swallowing
Sounds like you're having an amazing time on your travels. And still managing to put out an incredible chapter. I just love sex-in-the-shower scenes and this one was so sweet and hot. Can't wait for the great moment though, when Bill loses his virginity to his twin.
Author's Response: :D I'm glad I was able to make it sweet and hot at the same time. It's always the best combination.
Date: 08/21/12 09:39 pm Title: Swallowing
oh, wow...i'm speechless :)
Author's Response: I hope it's a good kind of speechless ;)
Date: 08/21/12 07:27 pm Title: Swallowing
okay, how a conversation about dreaded pubes can be sexy i will never know, but you have pulled it off well, my friend!
one little thing though. at the end you have tom saying "i have NO much to teach you."
okay, go see the world and i'll stop pestering you. ta ta!
Author's Response: When I pictured dreaded pubes I somehow imagined the image of Captain Jack Sparrow's beard... even though those are braids, right? Idk, but either way it's gross. And thank you so much for pointing out the typo! I'll fix it right now.
Date: 08/21/12 07:19 pm Title: Swallowing
oh hell! i'd forgotten you were traveling! well, whatever the motivation, glad you updated! gonna go read the new chapter now!
Date: 08/03/12 12:57 pm Title: Double Rainbow
Dear Lord just fckin awesome!!!! it could have been a beautiful end but gosh thank you so much you are making more chapters i just love your fic so much!!!!i laugh a lot and oh gosh really sexy hexy hot lksdaldad.
dont want to think what could happen. everything your amazing imagination brings out would be perfect :D!!!!
thank you so much for share your fic it is really really awesome
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review was so enthusiastic!! I love it :D I definitely still have some more ideas for the twins and Scotty...
Date: 08/03/12 12:14 pm Title: Double Rainbow
Lol aaaaaaw, sexy kissy :) Scotty needs to be educated somehow...