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Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 05:59 pm Title: Sometimes Daddy Likes to Play Too

I know if I was Tom in real life I would be all,"WHAT THE HELL BILL?!?!!!??!?!" lol XD But as for fic!Tom probably "...*eyebrow twitch*..." Then again what the heck do I know? XD

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 02:24 pm Title: Sometimes Daddy Likes to Play Too

This is so funny. I love how you give the dogs such character...and Scotty is the leader and tries to protect Bill just as Tom does. Bill trying to take a good pic of his junk was so funny. He's crazy, though, to take the chance and send it to Bushido, no good can come of it. Great chapter.

Reviewer: TasteMeineLipRing Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 09:17 am Title: Sometimes Daddy Likes to Play Too

*screaming of delight* 

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 07:22 am Title: Sometimes Daddy Likes to Play Too

nice chapter~
i cant wait for the next chapter!
an i cant wait to see what tom thinks about bills pic!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/12 01:55 am Title: Billy's Little Willy

LOL idk wtf i just read, but i liked it. tally ho~

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/12 07:35 pm Title: That Tiny Pink Hole of Yours

Bahaha! This day had to come: Bill posting pics of his junk to Bushido. :D

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/12 07:11 pm Title: Whining is Bill's Job

Haha, Bushido... Oh man, this will be good. :D

But I can so rtelate to Tom's problem. As non-native speaker I find it sometimes so frustrating that I can't seem to get fluent,. no matter how much I use English when communicating. Also the lack of wide enough vocabulary makes it hard to bring out all the tones to speech. It sucks, really.
I wish the boys good luck - with English and the pubes. :)

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/12 06:23 pm Title: Sinking Ship

No, you're not the only one. :D
LOL'ing and snickering through the chapter. This is so Kaulitz. :D

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/12 06:15 pm Title: Billy's Little Willy

Haha, poor twins! And I tell you, I never thought that I'd be reading about Bill's pubes one day, but apparently I am? :D
It actually really sucks to try to exåress yourself on a foreign language, so I feel you there, Tom...

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/12 05:01 am Title: That Tiny Pink Hole of Yours

nice chapter!!
i chant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: coolandfresh Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 11:07 pm Title: That Tiny Pink Hole of Yours

Awesome! I would love to see bill's junk

Author's Response: I could write more sonnets than Shakespeare just about Bill's beautiful junk. But that's the kind of stuff that would turn me into a crazy cat lady.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 10:05 pm Title: That Tiny Pink Hole of Yours

omg, i bow to your unique brand of humor! i laughed through this entire chapter!

Reviewer: JelloidOrange Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 03:35 am Title: Whining is Bill's Job

Never thought I'd be begging someone to update a story centered around Bill's pubes but...please hurry up, this is my new favorite. I love your writing style so much, gahhhhh.

Author's Response: If it helps, I never thought I'd be writing a story centered around Bill's pubes... or writing anything for that matter. Like I said, I have about zero confidence as a writer so that really means the world to me to hear that you're loving this so much! I hope I can keep it up :)

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 01:50 am Title: Whining is Bill's Job

Yup *nods head* I really do like this story! Even though this is kinda of a crack/humor fic, it is well written, I really don't see any mistakes. I also like how you add real life things into the fic, such as the VIP call and app :D

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! It's so easy to add in aspects of real life into the story because, in my own twisted mental reality, this is their real life.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/12 11:26 pm Title: Whining is Bill's Job

It really says something about poor, dear Bill that he doesn't have the mental capacity to remember "911."

Maybe they can watch the food network and listen to all the beautiful English, and learn how to cook on top of it. But the food network won't help Bill's particular problem.

I'm looking forward to the call from Bushido? This can go so many ways, haha!

Author's Response: Bill's just not so good with numbers, even if those numbers are the difference between life and death in some cases. I definitely like the idea of Tom trying to watch foodnetwork and kill two birds with one stone! That'd be so cute :3 I've actually already written the next chapter with the call from Bushido, and I'm hoping I didn't make it awful.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/12 09:19 pm Title: Whining is Bill's Job

thank you for this valuable insight into scotty's brain

Author's Response: I think there's an extreme lack of the dogs as actual characters on the site. And by that, I mean I haven't come across any, personally. But I figure if Bill and Tom can treat them like real people, then so can I.

Reviewer: spiralsfalling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/12 11:14 pm Title: Sinking Ship

Bushido???!!!!! XD Poor Bill, even Bushido's ignoring him now, lol.

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/12 10:44 pm Title: Sinking Ship

LOL Pubes, I giggled, you turned me into a 12 yr old girl
more please

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/12 10:37 pm Title: Sinking Ship

Poor Tom! And I see Bill didn't hurt himself. He was just wracked with indecision! So many possibilities with his pubes, and the poor billy baby can't think to hard about them all or he'll exhaust himself!

Such a fun read.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/12 10:33 pm Title: Billy's Little Willy

Tom's Tomglish be scaring the ladies away! That is so hilarious! I do hope Bill hasn't hurt himself...

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