Date: 07/02/12 10:02 pm Title: True Love's First Kiss
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/02/12 09:25 pm Title: True Love's First Kiss
aaawww! such a sweet little kiss!
Date: 07/02/12 05:22 pm Title: True Love's First Kiss
hahahahaha why is this so similar to snow white, sleeping beauty, etc? Kiss from the handsome prince awakens the slumbering beauty. I don't blame you, Tom. I don't think I could resist that sight either.
Sorry to hear about your power going out :( *hearts. I'm glad Bill's finally awake. I hope Scotty can cheer up now (I wish I could pet this doggy so bad because the way you've written him makes him so adorable and just so deserving of all the love, cuddles and...more love in the world lol)
Author's Response: As I was sitting there writing this, I thought to myself, "You know what this story needs? Disney-inspired cheesiness." The image of Scotty I was picturing for this was the picture that was posted to the app recently of the dogs cuddling.
Date: 07/02/12 03:29 pm Title: True Love's First Kiss
I'm just imagining you in the book store writing and posting this to the site. So happy that you found a way to update though and hope your leccy is back on soon. Have a friend in Baltimore and hers is out too. So, Tomi kissed his naked baby brother while Bill was sleeping. So good. Loved the whole build up to the kiss with Tom cleaning Bill up(and not being grossed out that Bill was covered in cum)and then admiring his naked form until he just had to kiss him. Wonder what Scotty's going to make of that. And I wonder what Bill will think of those pressies (especially the dozens of of condoms and the pills!) LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I had to sit in the children's section of the bookstore while writing this, and small children were trying to ask me what I was doing and I was like "aaaaah must not corrupt innocence" which is where I think the Disney-esque kiss came from. Now I'm sitting in the public library, with creepy ass people looking over my shoulder. I'm trying to figure out what Bill's reaction to all his presents will be.
Date: 07/02/12 03:13 pm Title: True Love's First Kiss
Oh scheisse. Tomi's B-U-S-T-E-D!!! Bring on the twincest and grooming Billa's "downstairs!!!"
Author's Response: Only in this fandom is that the natural progression of things: woke up to your twin brother kissing you? Ask him to help you groom your pubes. Or maybe that's just this story....
Date: 06/30/12 01:01 am Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Scotty's logic makes a lot of sense. It is adorable how worried he is. Lawl, Bill passed out.
Tom's logic is also pretty solid. 19 packs of condoms are indeed less offensive than 20. Is Tom going to return home to find Scotty sniffing worriedly at a naked unconscious Bill? :O
Author's Response: Scotty's still trying to decide how to break the news to Tom about his poor, dear brother. He's hoping that Tom won't exile him to the backyard again.
Date: 06/29/12 07:33 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Scotty makes this fic absolutely the best. Poor doggie! :D
And poor Tom! Being so worried of his brother getting... pregnant? Tom takes his job seriously, I see.
I'm curious to see how things will go on when Tom finds "dead" Bill on a couch. :)
Author's Response: Bill's so innocent that Tom never even thought about the fact that Bill could get a girl pregnant. Instead, his mind immediately jumped to the conclusion that he had to protect Bill from pregnancy.
Date: 06/28/12 07:29 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/26/12 10:35 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Buying 19 packages instaed of 20 to make Bill look less like a whore? :-DDD That line almost killed me! And bying a morning after pill for Bill was priceless too. You imagination is amazing.
I love how you integrated Scotty to the plot. His mental processes are highly entertaining and funny like hell. Bill turning to dog scared that poor dog soul indeed. Furless Bill in heat is a picture to behold:-)
Author's Response: I wish I could witness Bill going into heat :(
Date: 06/26/12 10:09 pm Title: Billy's Little Willy
Oh my god Scotty is hilarious! I can't wait till Tom get home and see Bill all naked passed out:-D And morning after pills! Seriously? Haha and I can't stop laughing about the twenty packs condom. Bill now has his lifetime of condom supply (which I doubt he'd ever get to use, hehe) Bring on the NC17! yay
Date: 06/26/12 08:41 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
LOL My God! XD Toms part of the story just made me laugh out loud. 20 packs of condoms and putting 1 back to make it less insulting, then having the other guy thinking that his brother is a whore by how many condoms he has XDDD Tom is such a good older brother, discussing birth control pills. *breaks into laughter again* Awesome!
Author's Response: I really wanted Tom to go into like super-overprotective-older-brother mode. I've also been reading a lot of mpreg recently so I figured Tom couldn't take any risks, you know?
Date: 06/26/12 08:29 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Okay, I laughed so hard I almost fell off my bed, which is at least three feet off the ground. That would hurt more than having my stomach hurt from all the laughing I've done from this.
Author's Response: I feel bad enough for making Bill pass out from cumming. I'll feel even worse if you hurt yourself from laughing! But I guess all the pleasure is worth the pain.
Date: 06/26/12 07:58 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Haha i love how Tom put one box back lmao like it makes a difference!! Hilarious
Author's Response: Tom's thought process was like this: buy ALL the condoms! But then he had to remember self-control.
Date: 06/26/12 07:50 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
This chapter is a wicked yes. I have nothing else witty to say. Fucking awesome job.
Author's Response: Your review has made my day.
Date: 06/26/12 07:13 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
*snort* bill's in heat! *falls off chair*
Author's Response: He's a horny little boy :3
Date: 06/26/12 05:31 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
Lmfaooo ! I love it ! More please !
Date: 06/26/12 05:01 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
This was such a funny chapter. I adore Scotty's POV and Tom in the drugstore was just hilarious. And I think you've worked things out so well with the way the twins are starting to be aware of their attraction to each other. I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: This makes me so happy! I'm so excited that I've been able to make people laugh, and even more excited that you don't think that the pacing is awkward. When I wrote about both the twins starting to realize their feelings for one another, it just all seemed so awkward to me.
Date: 06/26/12 04:49 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
I do like the story, and it's pretty amusing, but the dog having his own POV kind of ruins it for me
8/10
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Date: 06/26/12 02:20 pm Title: Scotty Doesn't Know
*dies from the perfection of this chapter's title, bursting into song*
I can see the resemblance between Tom and Scotty. They seem to experience a similar thought progression. Thought 1 + Thought 2 = Illogical Thought 3. It's a totally adorable trait for the both of them, though I must say it's cuter on Scotty because doggies are so cute! Not that Tomis aren't so cute...
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens when Scotty tries to tell Tom that Bill has died from his attempt to turn into a dog. :D.
Author's Response: Silly Tom and Scotty, always jumping to irrational conclusions. I'm glad you liked the chapter title. I've been waiting to use that since I started writing this.
Date: 06/25/12 06:24 pm Title: Tom Gets Out So Bill Can Get Off
Clueless Bill is just so cute! And it makes the whole thing so hot in a weird way. I knew Tom was the key to his first orgasm and hopefully Tom will help him getr many more orgasms in the future...