Date: 07/02/12 06:43 am Title: I'm glad you found the one you were looking for...
Aww, I love that they made up immediately, it's great that they are so infatuated and the misunderstanding was wiped away. Bill is so drunk, poor man I feel sorry for him come morning. They are so hot for each other, I think the project will work perfectly. :D
Author's Response: Yes, I couldn't leave them just hanging like that... I'm so happy about your comment :) Bill will have to survive his hangover somehow ^^ And the Project has not even started yet but I'm sure it's goin to be interesting ^^
Date: 07/02/12 01:51 am Title: I'm glad you found the one you were looking for...
Drunk bill is awsome lol
Author's Response: hahahah... Drunk Bill always makes me smile xD Thank You for the comment it means a lot :)
Date: 07/02/12 01:07 am Title: I'm glad you found the one you were looking for...
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You :) The next one will be up in few hours I hope :)
Date: 07/02/12 12:34 am Title: I'm glad you found the one you were looking for...
Hahah Poor Tom, getting blamed for Bill's inability to find his keys! I'm glad Bill was straight forward enough to tell Tom *ndi totally did that on purpose. Fantastic chappie! Can't wait for next week!
Author's Response: Aw... Thank You so much :) Yes, Tom is definitely having a fun time with drunk Bill ^^rnI hope you'll enjoy the next one too :D kiss
Date: 06/28/12 08:33 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You very much for your comment :) The next one is up, so I hope you'll enjoy it too :)
Date: 06/25/12 02:54 am Title: Sweet jealousy...
You know I oficially hate Andi right now...LOL.
I love that you have Nancy,Claudia,Liz and Gia in the story :)So fun :D
Looking forward to next Friday....don´t forget :D
Author's Response: aww.. Thank You Ninna, I didn't make it on friday as you know I was on the road for the weekend. But I hope you'll enjoy the next one as well :D
Date: 06/24/12 03:46 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
I love how cute Bill and Tom are together, Bill is really not bitchy to Tom, is he. Quite the opposite. Well, trouble indeed in the end - ouch. I'm crossing my fingers it works out well soon.
Author's Response: Thank You very much for your comment. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter :) Well Bill I guess is just a bit confused around Tom :) I hope you'll like the next chapter :)
Date: 06/24/12 04:22 am Title: Sweet jealousy...
yay! New chapter! I really liked it!
Haha. Andi that bitch! He ruined everything! Saw it coming though
Author's Response: Hahaha xD Thank You. well Andi is just jealous, bet a lot of us would do that :)
Date: 06/23/12 11:54 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
Oh Andi *facepalm*... fantastic chapter. Sorry I don't have much more to say tonight but I am practically dead on my feet. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You so so much :) I'm glad you enjoy the story it's so amazing for me to hear that :) rnI hope you'll like this weeks chapter also. And a BIG Thank You for the comment!
Date: 06/23/12 05:58 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
O.o can we throw andi out the window now please?
Author's Response: Hahahahah xD I liked your comment! Thank You so much. I know Andi is really jealous in this chapter.. well and it's definitely not the last time he's acting that way :)
Date: 06/23/12 01:57 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
Poor Andi. I feel bad for him :( Great chapter tho. Can't wait for another.
Author's Response: Thanx :) Well Andi is on love... and it's always hard to watch your crush kissing someone else... but don't worry ^^ He'll be fine !
Date: 06/23/12 01:09 pm Title: Sweet jealousy...
after what andreas did, i don't like him. i think if Tom would have told Bill the "news" by himself, Bill would react differently. well, i think they will do something with it and everything will be ok again.
can't wait for next chapter...weekend come faster :)
Author's Response: I just saw that I somehow missed few reviews to comment on, so here I am :) rnI am happy you like it and I hope you are still on board. I'd love to hear from you again :) Well Andi is actually a nice person, he's just jealous :D *kisses*
Date: 06/16/12 06:05 am Title: The Night Of Your Life...
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You so much :) Next Friday I'll be back with more :)
Date: 06/15/12 09:44 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
OMG......Amazing.....
Author's Response: hahaha.. Thank You :*
Date: 06/15/12 09:14 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
will be waiting impatiently for more
Author's Response: That's so nice of you to say :) And THANK YOU so much for the comment :* I hope you'll like what's yet to come
Date: 06/15/12 08:46 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
omg this is amazing! hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I update every Friday, so I hope I see you soon :D
Date: 06/15/12 06:43 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
this was amazing. they made a move and...omg, i'm out of words. can't wait to read another "episode" iihhihihi
Author's Response: I'm very happy you liked it ;) see you next week and Thank You very much for the comment it means a lot xD
Date: 06/15/12 06:19 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
Ooh la la xD Love it!
Author's Response: Thank You ;)
Date: 06/15/12 05:52 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
This was a very nice chapter I can't wait to see more! As a little bit of concrit, pay attention to where you put in details and where you leave them out. Like in this chapter, we didn't really need to know what the DJ looked like, but it would have been nice to know how Tom smelt to Bill when they were making out at the end. Afterall we know Bill smells like lavendar and lime (interesting combo btw)
Again, I really like this story so far, and I apologise if I seem overly critical, I just took a writing class and we learnt how to edit eachothers work....its kinda stuck with me how to critique
Author's Response: Thank You very much for your words !! This really means a lot and I totally understand your point. I just wanted to describe her because she's a RL friend I put in the story and it was importand for me. It may not be importand for the reader and I know this but this was just a -must have- :) I appreciate the critique very much :D and I am happy you like the story.. see you next week hopefully! :)
Date: 06/15/12 05:40 pm Title: The Night Of Your Life...
This was HOT Anna!!!!
Can´t wait for more :)
Author's Response: hahaha Ninna I knew you'd like it :P :) Love ya :*