Date: 08/29/12 02:06 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
Fantastic xD
Author's Response: aww.... thank you!!! I hope you won't kill me for waiting that long for a new update :) *kisses*
Date: 08/29/12 12:49 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
There's just something about the writing style that I don't like...I know the plot is good but the story just isn't doing it for me. I wish you the best of luck with it, though!
Author's Response: Thank You for your comment :) I know, not everyone likes my detailed blabber.. I tend to repeat myself and I talk like a waterfall about every little thing.. that's why the plot is goin forward very slowly. And.. I'm not american nor english so my english skills aren't perfect but I try :) But thank you for stopping by and sharing your opinion I appreciate it. *kisses*
Date: 08/29/12 11:57 am Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
Awwww.... one of my fav chapters :)
They can´t keep their hands off each other.
And I don´t think they will be able to during their project either.
Love it!:)
Author's Response: I am so glad you love it Ninna ! And I promise I'll be more strickt on myself and post more often ;)
Date: 08/28/12 09:15 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You for your comment ;) The next one is online so I hope you'll enjoy it ;)
Date: 08/28/12 05:30 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
I did indeed enjoy this week's chapter! How could I not? We got a kiss filled walk through the park, they had 'the talk', and we saw Tom's apartment and pictures! Oh, and the Gs are coming to discuss the project! *excited bouncing*
Wonder ful update. I was deliriously happy ro see it. I feel so bad for Bill and just want to cuddle him. It must be so horrible hearing the subject is soul mates when that was the last thing he heard from his twin *worried pout* I hope he doesn't bottle that in too long...
Author's Response: Hello My Dear :) I am extreamly sorry It took me so long to update. I will try to be more "professional about it" and post more regulary but my work sheadule is really tight lately and I'm super busy.. rnWell anyways. As always I looked forward to your comment and I am so happy you liked it. Bill will have to work on his issues but I'm sure Tom will be there to help him out ;) rnI'm leaving you with this weeks chapter with the G's :D *kisses*
Date: 08/28/12 01:44 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
nice :) maybe that project wouldn't be that hard and hopefully Bill will open up to Tom about some things.
Author's Response: I hope this new chapter will clear some things out ;) At least when it comes to their "project-friendhsip" :) Thank You a lot for your comment. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as well :D
Date: 08/19/12 07:20 pm Title: How strawberries break the silence
wow Andi needs to chill out and be happy for Tom to finally have found someone he likes a lot :D can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank You :) Andi will have a hard time accepting Tom is not HIS.. but let's wait and see what happens! *hugs* thank you a lot for leaving a response :D
Date: 08/18/12 05:11 am Title: How strawberries break the silence
I loved it as always Anna :)
Keep the chapters coming.....
Author's Response: Thank You Ninna :) I hope you'll like the next one as well :D
Date: 08/17/12 09:27 pm Title: How strawberries break the silence
Great chapie hope to read the next one soon ;)
Author's Response: Thank You :) The next one is up, so I hope you'll like it ! *kisses* and again, thank you so much for leaving a comment :D
Date: 08/17/12 01:40 pm Title: How strawberries break the silence
I'm sad for Andi :( But i'm hoping Bill and Tom can find a way to balance out the project and their feelings. Can't wait to find out how that all goes.
Author's Response: Well Andi will have a hard time.. but.. let's wait and see what happens next :) Thank You a lot for your comments! *hugs* I hope you'll like the next chapter as well
Date: 08/17/12 01:21 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
Fantastic sex scene! I'm happy they finally did it. The sexual tension was almost too much for me =)
Author's Response: Hahaha Thank You so Much :D *kisses*
Date: 08/16/12 10:57 pm Title: How strawberries break the silence
Mmm strawbwrries and yogurt with buttered toast...sounds so tasty right now. Wonderful chapter. I'm so glad the morning after was so smooth, and their getting along so well. Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to see the next chapter
Author's Response: I somehow forgot to respond to few reviews, so here I am.. Thank You again so much for your review <3 It means a loooot xD I am really moved and touched when you say It was fantastic, cause I really feel there's nothing special in my writing..and I make lots of mistakes. But I am happy so many girls like it anyways :)
Date: 08/16/12 01:49 am Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
I hope you had an amazing time in Italy!! :D and I loved this chapter!! I read it with wide eyes all the way ;) you definitely have a great writing talent! keep up the great work!! :D
*hugs*
Author's Response: Thank You so much! OMG that made me even blush, it's unbelieveable you guys like it :) I never thought I could pull it of though if not for my Beta Lizard :) I'm so glad you like it and I hope you'll read the next chapters as well :) *hugs*
Date: 07/31/12 02:34 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
I wonder what will happen next..hmmm
Author's Response: I'll upload the next chapter soon :) I hope you'll like it :D
Date: 07/28/12 02:05 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
*wibbles* B-but it was so good. *pippy eyes* do we really really have to wait two more weeks?
For a minute there, I was seriously thinking Bill would leave the apartment to go get breakfast, and they would either completely miss eachother, or they would run into eacother wherever they went for food. But the baseball bat thing was so much awesomer, because it wasn't expected, and it was realistic. My mom taught me to keep baseball bats, or other similar objects, in strategic places throughout the house in case of emergency, so I really like that you put that in, especially instead of a gun.
The sex scene was so tender, and romantic, with just the right touch of frantic. It was very well written.. a little much on the prep department for my tastes, but that might just be my current mood too, so don't put too much stock in that.
I'm very curious about their discussion about how things are going to work for the project. I really hope it doesn't take them tooo long to realize that the project will go better with them following their feelings instead of trying to keep it professional. I wouldn't normally advocate that, but this project is a little different what with it being about soul mates and all.
Ok, I don't know how you upload chapters, but I've only ever had success putting it in the text box myself. If that's how you do it, in order to put italics in you just have to go to the text you want in italics and in front of it you type in < > with an I in the middle and then at the end you do the same thing, except you put and /I between them.
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see more keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Hi :)rnI am sooo happy you liked that chapter! I know what you mean, the baseball bat thing is something I'd totally do if someone would brake in. So I just thought it's going to fit. I'm so thankfull for your comments ! Love seeing them it gives me so much motivation to write (which I am currently doin atm) rnYou will see the "soulmate" part of the exam will fit :D at least I hope so
Date: 07/28/12 03:30 am Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
I love the sexy times Anna ;)
I hope things wont get awkward now and that they figure out a way to both be lovers and working partners.
Looking forward to the next chapter as always :)
Author's Response: Thank You Ninna :) I really am thankful that you comment and like the story *hugs*
Date: 07/28/12 01:16 am Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
Omg! I luv this story... They have to stay together.....
Author's Response: Thank You so much for your comment :D well.. I'll do my best :)
Date: 07/27/12 07:55 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
love the chapter! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I hope you'll like the next chapters as well, Thank You very much for your comment :)))
Date: 07/27/12 04:15 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next one is up today :) Thank You for teh nice words :)
Date: 07/27/12 03:53 pm Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
that was amazing. they are amazing and maybe that project would be that bad for them. maybe they would become more closer...i can't wait for next :)
Author's Response: Thank You so much for your comment :D I hope so too, let's cross our fingers that the project will turn out fine ;)