Date: 11/15/12 12:47 am Title: Mr. Nice Guy...
First and foremost I want to say that I like the direction this is going. I think it has great potential, and could be a good fic. However I must point out that I think you need to proof read more. Two chapters in and I feel that the only word I have read is 'just.'
example: You JUST can’t help yourself flirt champ.” He JUST couldn’t stop laughing at Tom, who JUST sat there looking at Georg a bit lost.
Too much, that is three times in two sentences. I hate to say that its annoying, but its the only way to put it. Most of them, I think could be deleted. There is no need for that extra word in almost every sentence. I really want to be able to make it through this fic, but I don't know if I can read that word over and over.
I'm sorry if this seems like I am being rude, I really don't mean it to sound that way.
Author's Response: Hey :) No really, Thank You for ponting it out! I am not american or english so it's really good to know where I am making mistakes. I'll have to tell this to my beta reader as well who is also not a native english speaker. But we try our best and I hope it will be better in the future :)rnI take advices and criticism very serious and appreciate it very much! So Thank You again for it. And for taking the time to reading my blabber at all :DrnrnEvery review is important :DrnrnHave a great week, *kisses* and hope to see you again here :)
Date: 11/14/12 03:53 am Title: I like You...
A few problems with verb tenses in this chapter, just FYI.
Great chapter. Poor Bill. Going through what he did and seeing it happen is just horrific. Any one would be traumatized. I love how Tom handled it though and love the last paragraph. So well written. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yes I know... ;/ I know my english is not that good, and my dear Beta is not english as well but we're trying our best :) Thank You so much for the review again. It means so much <3 I hope my english skills will be enaught to exactly tell the story. I am happy you like it so far and I'll do my best to keep it interesting :D *kisses and hugs*
Date: 11/14/12 03:44 am Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
They are too cute! I love the awkwardness.
Author's Response: hahah :) Yes I know they seem to be a bit awkward sometimes but well.. they just have to get to know eachother :D Thank You again for the review <3 *kisses*
Date: 11/14/12 03:29 am Title: How a Baseball bat,breakfast and a Shower cause trouble...
Wow. Very hot but also very moving. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank You sweetie :) I am trying my best :DD
Date: 11/13/12 06:43 am Title: I like You...
awwww he had that moment!!!
Author's Response: AWWW... you are my 100 reviewer!!!! Thank You so so much <333 Yes.. this moment is so precious I am glad Tom feels it :) I'm posting this week another chapter and hope to see you back :) Have a great week *kisses*
Date: 11/13/12 03:54 am Title: This feels like falling in love...
I am loving this story so far. I am surprised it doesn't have more reviews. I'm sad I have to go to bed now but excited that I will have more to read tomorrow. =)
Author's Response: Thank You so much for your review :) I am so happy and thankfull for each and everyone. It has a great readcount so I just suppose not everyone takes the time to leave a comment. That's why I appreciate even more that you and other readers take the time to leave me your love and nice words <3rnrnI hope you'll have fun today while reading the rest of the story :) A new chaper will come by the end of the week <3 *kisses*
Date: 11/12/12 04:45 pm Title: I like You...
Of course they can´t control themselves around each other:)Awww....and Bill had flashbacks.....but then they said they like each other.That put a big smile on my face.Loved it as always Anna.Can´t wait for more:)
Author's Response: And I love to write for you and all my readers. It brings up a huge smile on my face when I read the reviews. Thank You so much Ninna <3
Date: 11/11/12 11:57 pm Title: I like You...
Loved this chapter and will be waiting for more!
Author's Response: That's so nice of you. Thank You so much :) I promise a new chapter will come up by the end of this week. *kisses and hugs*
Date: 11/11/12 04:40 pm Title: I like You...
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You sweetie ;) The next one will be up on Friday :D again a huge Thank You for your comment <3
Date: 11/11/12 10:22 am Title: I like You...
it was nice :) hopefully everything between them will work out and even with this little back up Bill had everything will be ok :)and the g's...i'm curious what geo had in mind hahah
Author's Response: Geo is one crazy dude :) I'm sure he and Gustav will make sure to have an eye on Bill and Tom :D Thank You so much for leaving a comment.means the world to me :) Bill is a very complex character.. it will go up and down for him.. but that's why Tom is in this story.. :)rn*kisses*
Date: 11/11/12 01:49 am Title: I like You...
AMAZING!!! I just love this story i really do and i cant wait to read Another chapter!
Author's Response: THANK YOU :)) the next chapter will be up on Friday. I promise :D A big hug and kiss to you for leaving me a review. Thank You so much :D *kisses and see you soon*
Date: 11/10/12 04:37 pm Title: I like You...
so sad but beautiful alsdjaksjda OMG so dramatic poor Bill
my heart hurts!!!!!!! oh gosh!!!! thanks to the lord Bill didnt freak out MORe when Tom said the i like you!!!! cause of your first notes i thought some was going to freak out and end everything aklsdjakld TuT hahahaha
Amazing chapter cant wait for the next one *---* thank you so much!!!!
Author's Response: Haha.. hello sweetie :) I don't want your heart to hurt :P Thank You for the review as always. It means so soooo much :D *hugs* It's going to be an interesting journey for Bill and of course for Tom as well. I am happy you like my writing style and enjoy the story :) It's really so motivating to write more <3 See you on Friday with a next chapter then :)
Date: 11/08/12 03:02 am Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You so much! It means a lot when my readers leave a comment :D I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well :D kisses
Date: 11/07/12 10:32 am Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
waaaaaaaaaa hello hello Again!!!!!!! kasjdlaksdj i was so happy when i saw you uploaded again !!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG
and i just have to re-read it all again hahahha so here i am!!!xD
so exciting and cute chapter!!!
the couch scene so hot and intense
damn Gs!!!!!!!! hahhahahah xD!!!!!!!
they staring at each other
so beautiful!!!!oh the love!!!!
at the final paragraph i was reading and thinking -no!! no not the last line please i want more - hahahhaha
your story makes me so happy and full of hope you have me wishing for something so beautiful like this happens in real life!!! hahahha
thank you so much for the chapter !! i will be waiting for that next one *----*
Author's Response: aww.. Thank You so much!!! I can assure you love like that really happens in real life and I wish you all the best in finding it! I am sure you will :D I am glad you liked the chapter I will really try to upload once a week, or maybe every second week so you wont have to wait long :) rnThe G's will have a lot of fun with the Boys :D KISSES AND HUGS
Date: 11/06/12 02:42 pm Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
Oeeeeh, I actually really like this story! It's cute and funny! I'm actually pretty curious about what type of pictures they are going to make for their project, so....
New chappie soon? :D
Author's Response: Thank You so much :) I just try my best so you'll all enjoy this story :)rnAnd new chaoter is up now. I hope you'll like it as well! They will start working on the project pretty soon ^^
Date: 11/05/12 12:56 pm Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
omg omg omg omg *_*
Author's Response: hahah well I hope this week will also have some OMG moments ;) Thank You for leaving a review it means a lot :D
Date: 11/05/12 08:08 am Title: Why Iron Man is better than The Hulk and other friendships...
I loved it as always Anna....just friends :)No way they´re gonna stay just friends.Not a chance :D
Author's Response: Thank You Ninna :D well, it looks like it's really hard for them to stay Friends :)
Date: 09/01/12 02:42 am Title: The Night Of Your Life...
Magical.
You wrote it so well...I almost wanted to be there. I think I almost was.
I only hope that when it Tom will tell him about the project, things will not go wrong.
And Im glad that I started to read this story when it already was 9 chapter long.
Very well done, so far.
Author's Response: I really loved your comment :) I guess that's what I wanted. for you guys to feel like right there on the dance floor with them :)rnI hope you will enjoy the next chapters as well. And Thank You for your comment a LOT! :3 kisses
Date: 08/30/12 11:45 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
OMG i love your Fic!!!!! i just found it this morning and couldnt stop till i had to go for some brunch hahah and yeah now finally i reach this chapter and OMG all the feelings askldmakda this two make me crazy with all the love, the cuteness >u<
OMG that really hot and sexy chapter i just have to love it is so perfect aklsdmasd cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!
thank you so much for share your story hugs and kisses *u*
Author's Response: awww.. Your comment made me so happy :) I know that feeling once I find a story I like I can't stop reading it! I am sorry it took me so long to update but I promise I'll try my best to stay in a 2-week period at least. Maybe even more often depends on my time ;)rnrnBig kisses and hugs to you and hope to see you again :)
Date: 08/29/12 10:25 pm Title: Whatever it is, he'll find out...
Wow that was something never expected them to change that fast.. But knowing Tom in this he will have Bill the way he likes LOL.. But poor Bill :( hopefully they can work it out together on the project :D great work can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thank You so much :) It took me a while but now I'm back and I really hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story!rn*kisses*