Date: 09/15/13 01:41 am Title: Coffee Stains
I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING!
Date: 03/23/13 01:58 am Title: Coffee Stains
Poor Bill. This story reminded me songs "Dogs unleashed" and "Attention".
I hope this Bill will be strong enough to build his life outside of Tom.
Date: 06/30/12 12:36 pm Title: Coffee Stains
uuh, so sad and realistic written story. really like it, even if it was so depressing. poor Bill. unfortunately such things happens. I was hoping he will leave Tom finally.
hope to read something new from you soon!
Date: 06/05/12 07:21 pm Title: Coffee Stains
Damnit, Tom. Why does he need to be such a jerk? I know, he means good, but really, why doesn't he realize?
I feel sorry for Bill and even more so, because not a single girl should ever come between them. It's not only in words, it's also in actions.
This was really frustrating (damn Tom), but nice story. :)
Date: 06/02/12 10:02 am Title: Coffee Stains
That was absolutely great! I can feel Bill's pain, my poor boy ;___;
And Tom acted ridiculously! Bill should have punched him in that georgeous face of his. Hard. Or in the balls. So they couldn't fuck, because it surely seemed that was the thing he wanted from Bill the most, at least that's the impression I got. ADSGFHGJHLKH Oh God, I'm really frustrated now, bad Tom. XD
Date: 06/01/12 07:52 pm Title: Coffee Stains
Bill is so much better than this! I was so happy when he was going to get into the car then stupid ass tom had to ruin it! D:
10/10
*****
Author's Response: Love can be unfair. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 06/01/12 04:48 pm Title: Coffee Stains
I could have screamed with frustration. Poor Bill:-(
Date: 06/01/12 04:29 pm Title: Coffee Stains
Tom is the worst in this fic. Poor Bill. I hope that one day he realizes he's had enough and just leaves.
This was lovely! Very well-written and chock full of emotion and pain. I felt like I was at the end of my rope with Tom, and I wasn't even in the story -- I'm just the reader!
Author's Response: I was slightly concerned that I wouldn't get the frustration across quite as much as I was hoping for. Glad to see I did. Haha. Thanks for reading.
Date: 06/01/12 03:31 pm Title: Coffee Stains
awh, poor billa ;____;
Date: 06/01/12 01:31 pm Title: Coffee Stains
*sniff* i don't like when bill is sad. and i especially don't like when tom is the one making him sad!
Date: 06/01/12 10:45 am Title: Coffee Stains
Wonderful imagery and detail in this! My heart just hurt for Bill and I think the last word was perfect. I feel like this is a story that will stay with me for a while.
I would like to respectfully say that I wish you'd been more careful with apostrophes in the contractions. Leaving them out can be distracting and pull the reader right out of the story, and this story definitely deserves the reader's full attention. Thank you so much for posting it. :)
Author's Response: Great to hear from such a talented writer. Thanks for the review and helpful critique. I appreciate that. :) I'll be sure to fix that up ASAP and pay better attention. This fic was from heart and it means a lot to hear great words.
Date: 06/01/12 10:08 am Title: Coffee Stains
Aww, poor Bill. He's so sad. I like this, it was written well. But it makes me so sad, poor little guy. He deserves Tom's lovin.
Date: 06/01/12 09:43 am Title: Coffee Stains
Ouch. It is totally realistic and I feel so sorry for Bill.. I wish he could just leave Tom,although that will be hard. Bill deserves better. God you totally nailed the bittersweet and I am at a loss of words because my heart is totally aching for Bill. *sob* Will there be a sequel? I seriously want Tom's ass to be kicked!
Author's Response: As far as I know; no. No sequel. This was actually written based off of very true events and well.. the rest hasn't happened yet. Who knows though, eh? :)
Date: 06/01/12 09:29 am Title: Coffee Stains
Tom is being terrible to Bill, and Bill should "leave" him I guess (how do you leave your twin when he's also your workmate etc.?)... Still I find their love so bittersweet and I totally trust Tom when he says he loves Bill more than anyone. I guess I'm pathetic too! I admit I would love a sequel where Tom comes back to be Bill's entirely... Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm glad somebody sees that. Tom certainly does love Bill! Thanks for your time and perception. :)
Date: 06/01/12 09:01 am Title: Coffee Stains
I sure don't like the Tom in this story. Poor Bill. I could feel his sadness and anger. Bittersweet but awesome story. :)