Date: 07/22/12 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
A-freaking-dorable per usual. Thank you for writing and posting!
Date: 05/30/12 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my GOD the awkwardness!!! *hysterical laughter* It was killing me!! This was adorable, and sweet, and Tom was totes right, there is no truly good excuse....by god if this was your writing drunk, then I may as well just throw in the damn towel right now, cuz I doubt I will ever be this good sober.
Date: 05/30/12 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, this was so sweet! I really needed something like this tonight. Thank you. :)
We don't have that kind of debate club culture in school in my country, but you made iot sound very natural and I really had fun time reading this. As always, your way to write was easily flowing, smooth and light. You make your characters very likable, you know. This little tingling of a crush is really what I needed, when I've been basically wanting to bunch the twins in the face today. :D
Very cute, made me feel much better again. :)
Date: 05/30/12 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a wonderful story with an equally wonderful moral. I am so grateful to live in a country that allows gay marriage. The world needs to see the situation like Bill and Tom do and just let people be themselves to do what they feel. I loved this and can't stop smiling. :)
Date: 05/29/12 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
haha drunk or not, this was great!
Date: 05/29/12 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
this was adorable!!!
Date: 05/28/12 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this was fabulously cute!!! Your characters are amazing. They make great realistic teenagers and they have great chemistry together. I just loved this. It was soooooo cute. I love one-shots like this. It was so enjoyable to read. Your write beautifully. :)
Oh, and if you ever wanted to expand this into a two-shot, I would love to read that too. :)
Date: 05/28/12 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
SEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL!!!!!!
Date: 05/28/12 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Pffft! Can I debate the pros to staying in the bathroom and making out? The cons of ending this too soon? Or maybe the pros of writing a sequel? LOL *snuggles*
Date: 05/28/12 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
All I can say is GET DRUNK MORE OFTEN!
I love how sweet Bill was to poor Tom from the begining. And only Bill could still sound as though he's being sweet when talking about crushing you, lol.
Adorable read!
Date: 05/27/12 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this! shy teenage flirting is full of awesome!
Date: 05/27/12 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
My dog's name is Lucas and he's the biggest dork ever so.
I loved how nervous Tom was. This captured the teenage awkwardness perfectly! Not only is debate hard, but any sort of coherent speech in the presence of someone really hot is pretty much a no go. Tom's index cards were hilarious, and him conceding the argument was the best thing ever!
I also liked the topic of their debate! There aren't strong arguments for the negative side at all. You go, Bill! You're like, really awesome even when you write drunk, because you made a better argument through Bill than I would ever be able put together. :)
Date: 05/27/12 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
amazing, as soon as i saw your name on it i knew it would be though ^^, great work
Date: 05/27/12 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such an incredible story! I absolutely loved it :D
And it makes me want to get a little bit drunk just to see how well I'd be able to write haha
Date: 05/27/12 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
ah, i so have this (yelled) conversation with my mom every week...me taking Bill's part and her being a bigot. :/
Date: 05/27/12 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. I'd love to see the next chapter.
Date: 05/27/12 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, if this is what you write when drunk, I'd almost encourage you to get wasted more often!! I absolutely loved it!! :D
Date: 05/27/12 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. i like it :) they both were really sweet hehe even with and after the topic :) i hope there will be something more between them :) and i can't wait for another part :)
Date: 05/27/12 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww kawaii!
More pleaseee! :D
10/10
*****
Date: 05/27/12 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1
A new story from you equal a good read every time and this one was no exception. It was funny and adorable, I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing this with us =D