Date: 04/26/23 04:28 pm Title: The New Nanny
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! I'm glad Tom didn't pick on his crush Bill in HS =)
Date: 09/05/16 11:44 am Title: Epilogue
this was a good story!
i hope there is a sequel to this!
Author's Response:
There is, it's called A Different Kind of Proposal. It is a one shot but a sequel so I hope you enjoy it.
Date: 04/04/14 12:04 am Title: At School
Oooh, finally something is happening between Tom and Bill!
Date: 04/03/14 02:40 pm Title: Happiness and Sadness
Great story so far. It's very discriptive, and I like the characters.
Date: 08/15/12 12:32 pm Title: Epilogue
YAY! xD
*Happy Dance*
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it.
Date: 08/14/12 09:15 pm Title: A Clever Lie
I've always hated characters like Rebecca. I really actually wish death upon them ^-^
Horrible, worthless creatures they are.
Oooooh! What happens next!?
*Sprints to Next Chapter*
Author's Response:
Characters like Rebecca are definitely interesting to write but I do hate putting my characters through hell with characters like her. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 08/14/12 08:51 pm Title: A Few More Problems
Kill. Rebecca.
The bitch deserve Hell.
Author's Response:
No one likes Rebecca but she is useful for causing tension and problems.
Date: 08/14/12 02:34 pm Title: A Lack of Air
Okay, you said they six in previous chapters, and in this you said they were eleven. I am guessing this is just a mistake.
I hate the fact that poor Izzy and Zac are being bullied in such a way. It is actually really realistic. I was beaten to a pulp when I was in kindergarten by all the sixth grade boys- it was absolutely horrible.
I hope Isabella is okay :-(
Author's Response:
Yeah I have been made aware of that discrepancy a few times. If I ever get time I might go back and edit it. It was just a mistake. Thanks for pointing it out.
rnI was bullied in elementary school too so I wanted to show how cruel kids under the age of 13 really can be. I tried to make it as realistic as possible without going overboard.
Date: 08/13/12 10:19 pm Title: ...And so the Tension Starts
You need more comas- the sentences run on too long without any order.
And you misused a few words and misspelled others.
Other than that.... IT'S FRACKIN' AWESOME! x)
I really like this story♥
Author's Response:
I didn't have a beta for the first part of this story and I avoid commas. It's just habit at this point. I have a very big vocabulary and I use spell check so maybe your spelling and vocab are off because I checked that to make sure everything was right. I am glad you like despite the disagreement we have about grammar.
Date: 08/11/12 08:45 pm Title: Epilogue
*winks* your secrets safe with me ^_^
Author's Response:
Ok cause not even my beat knows yet. ;)
Date: 08/11/12 12:33 am Title: Epilogue
Nooo it's over!!! Thank you so much for a story I have looked forward to for weeks! The only thing I wish you would write is how Bill and Tom will get married.
Author's Response:
All good things must come to an end. I am glad you liked it so much that you would look forward to the updates. I don't know maybe a ouple of one-shots wiill fulfill your wish.
Date: 08/10/12 06:55 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my, you mentioned me! Thank you, it means so much! I've been enjoying to read and review this story really much! I just read these 2 last chapters and they were amazing as always! The ending was beautiful and i bet the little family will be happy together! I love the story to bits, you've done such a good job!! Lots of love xx
Author's Response:
You reviewed and reviewers get a special spot in the chapter notes because reviews help me get past writer's block and help me talk my muses into cooperating on Wednesday when all I want to do is sleep. I am glad you liked them. I worked hard to get the ending just right so I had to work hard to make sure it looked right too. I hope they will be. I am glad you like this story and you think that I have done a good job. Thanks.
Date: 08/10/12 06:12 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm so glad that everyone's finally happy... more power to em...i can't wait to start your next one... I'll be waiting patiently...
Author's Response:
I can never write a story wihout a happy ending. Next one should be up Monday. I hope you won't be waiting too patiently because that would mean you are not interested at all. *pouts* JK
Date: 08/10/12 04:35 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm sorry I got so bad at reviewing, but I did read every chapter and I loved this story! I really hope you have more work out soon! I love reading your stories, this one is probably now my favourite of them. I'm really sad to see it over, not only because you actually updated, but because the characters and plot were so good! Honestly great story and can't wait for more to come from you!
Author's Response:
No biggie. I am glad you liked the story. I will try my best but school starts up again for me soon so we'll see. I am glad you like reading my stories. I enjoy writing them. It keeps my attention occupied. I don't like reading stories were the author takes months to update so I try not to be one of them. I am glad my characters and plot are good. Dance Drama should be Monday.
Date: 08/10/12 02:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Holy jesus! Its over? Already? *wibbles* feel free to insert the Puss n Boots face there.
Wonderful chapter. I am so sad its over. I look forward to seeing what the Dance Drama end up being about.
Author's Response:
Sorry you're cute Puss n Boots face will not work. That's all she wrote. I'm going to tell you a secret though Shh *gestures for you to come closer and whispers* I will probably be writing a one-shot about them soon. Dance Drama chapter 1 should be up Monday. I have it finished and beta'd.
Date: 08/10/12 12:29 pm Title: Epilogue
and there is it...happy end :)
that's good to read that Bill's mom is better and their relationship is better as well :) and of course Bill & Tom - those two are just meant to be together and with kids too :)
Author's Response:
I have never been able to write a story without a happy ending so... yeah. I wanted Bill's mom to be a good guy in the end so she could make up for all the years that she destroyed Bill's life. I always think that Bill and Tom are meant to be together whether as just brothers or something more doesn't really matter. I think the kids are sweet and deserve a life full of happiness.
Date: 08/09/12 12:15 am Title: Rehabilitation
awwww i get the feeling to story is comming to an end?
Author's Response:
It is. One chapter left.
Date: 08/05/12 10:47 am Title: Rehabilitation
b29; :-)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it.
Date: 08/05/12 08:04 am Title: Rehabilitation
Yay! Bill's mom is trying to be nice!
I didn't see any error to what izzy said about the movie being funnier upside down.
Author's Response:
I was very happy when I wrote that. Izzy said the movie was funner upside down not funnier. One letter changed the sentence.
Date: 08/04/12 10:34 pm Title: Rehabilitation
*scritches review monster's ears*
Hmmm... where exactly is Janet getting the money for this super fancy rehab center? I don't blame Bil for wanting to escort her to rehab. He might not really KNOW why he wanted to, but I thinkits because his subconcious was telling him 'make sure she's really going and not just jerking you around again.' And that's perfectly reasonable, and understandable, i n my opinion. But I really hope she's honestly trying to turn it around.
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see more. Keep up the lovely work! And don't beat yourself up too much over the slightly longer wait. Life happens
Author's Response:
The review monster thanks you. I have no idea where Janet is getting the money but at least she is trying. I wanted to show Bill softening toward his mother a little as well as showing that he was still suspicous by having him driver her to the rehab center. I hope so too but we shall see where this character wants to go.
rnI am glad you liked and the story. I set deadlines for myself and get pset when I can't meet them so I do beat myself up a little when you have a wait like that. I move on but I don't like to fail and when I miss a posting date it feels like a failure. A small one but a failure nonetheless. Life does happen and I do realize that and the story will still be there the next day so no biggie. Thanks for feeding the review monster.