Date: 07/05/12 09:07 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
Sweet chapter. I really like Kevin's pov :) Rebecca needs to get a life.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked that little snippet about Kevin. Guys at his age are so sweet and their shy behavoir is cute. Rebecca really does need to get over herself. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/05/12 08:12 am Title: Scary Question
I hope the last two won't ruin christmas. And I really like Simone.
What horror! Izzy is dating at that age?!
Author's Response:
Rebecca and Bill's mom could be a problem for the holiday. Simone is interesting for me to write in this one. It's just a cute little crush nothing to worry about.
Date: 07/04/12 11:42 pm Title: Scary Question
I love everything about this story...i can't wait to meet andi... I'm a little worried about Rebecca, and Bill's mom... I'll be patiently waiting for the next update...
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. Andi is a bit different to write but he's lot's of fun. Rebecca and Bill's mom are characters that I dread in the story but I also knwo they have to be there. Next update should be on Friday.
Date: 07/04/12 10:13 pm Title: Scary Question
Lol god, *wipes mirthy tears away* I do so love child logic...
Hmm... I'm really hoping Simone doesn't end up being a problem....but somehow I think she will be...and I definitely forsee Bill's madre being an issue, and I am quite anxious to meet her in person, cuz I'll bet she's just a real 'delight'.
I'm very excited to see hoe Andi interects with everyone! This was a fantastic chapter, and I can't wait to see more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I was hoping someone would comment on Isaac's little freak-out. I loved it and it was fun to write. I remember my older brother got a gf when I was about Isaac's age and I was so scared that he was going to have to move out and live with her.
rnSimone is different for me to write but I wanted to make her a little hesitant to accept Bill just because she sees the problems he could cause for her grandchildren. I am not sure where I will take her involvement in this story but I know we will be seeing her in the future. Bill's mom is one I am hesitaing on introducing because I really don't want her to be around but I know that if I don't things won't make sense.
rnAndi is always fun to write so him being around will be fun. I am glad you like this chapter an updating on Friday looks more and more plausible. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/04/12 07:40 pm Title: Scary Question
i really like it
Author's Response:
I am glad. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/04/12 04:05 pm Title: Scary Question
Aaaaw, Zac's soo adorable :')
Good chapter!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked him. I liked writing that section too. I am glad you like the chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/02/12 09:01 pm Title: An Unexpected Visitor
aw, lovely chapter. But Rebecca, that hoe D:
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I know everyone seems to find Rebecca horrible. I am glad the point is coming across.
Date: 07/02/12 04:35 pm Title: An Unexpected Visitor
Evil bitch Rebecca. What is wrong with this ho? *she asks rhetorically*
Hmm...well, I'm not sure about how the legal issue with her taking the kids would fall, seeing as she has lost visitation for reckelssness (and her own dad supported it) but...well, if she told Bill's agency and he got fired what would then be his incentive to stop seeing Tom? After all it isn't like he planned to nake nannying his lifelong profession.
Awwwwwwww Izzy's got a boyfriend, Izzy's got a boooyfriiiiend. Lol that bit was sooooooo sweet and cute.
Fantastic chapter! I hope everything ends up working out.
Author's Response:
She is evil and I have no idea what is wrong with her. She doesn't really have any ammunition besides the fact that homosexuality is frowned upon by many people and some court systems have a problem with two males raising children whether or not those children are the biological child of one of the men. I also think threatening Bill's job is just a way to get him to stop seeing Tom now but has no real basis in the long term. This is a very interesting story to write and there a few things I haven't introduced yet. I wanted to add some realism to the story so I thought cute little crushes at 6 would do the trick. It came out cuter then I expected. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/02/12 10:50 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
rebecca is such a coniving bitch...she needs to get over herself...and so what if bill gets fired? if he's in a relationship with tom and he's happy, that's all that matters...i'm thrilled that izzy's ok...and her crush gave her a card...that's awesome...bill's going to the party with tom so yay for that...
as far as your love life, just remember, your ex's are ex's for a reason...and who knows where it can go with a new crush...
Author's Response:
I hate Rebecca sometimes but she is fun to write just because while I could never be this way you can see why she can trick people the way she does. She may be a bitch and evil but she's smart. I do have a hard time writing all them in this way but I feel like it feels more real this way. I was glad when my story allowed Izzy to be ok as well. I wanted Kevin to be really sweet and sort of bashful about his crush on Izzy. I also wanted to add a segment about Tom taking Bill to a party with all his coworkers and partners.
rnMy love life sucks but I am working on figuring it out. Thanks for the advice.
Date: 07/02/12 09:57 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
Rebecca's a dumb idiot for not realizing that even if she got Bill fired, Tom could just hire him independently. Or not hire him... but make him a more permanent part of their family ;)
Author's Response:
I am glad someone saw that alternative route. Still hang around and see what happens.
Date: 07/02/12 08:27 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
Unless gay marriage is against the law where Bill and Tom live, they don't really have a problem with custody there. And Bill already said he was not worried about his job so... sucks for Rebecca...hehe.
No Izzy! You're too young to have a relationship! I don't want you to end up like Thesbe.
Author's Response:
People don't always think were emotions are involved and it doesn't really matter what the law says. If a judge thinks the relationship could in any way harm the children they would be forced to remove them from the situation. With Rebecca's past though no juge in his right mind would give her custody. And I doubt Bill would be too concerned about losing his job. I am not sure why you are convince that Izzy would turn out like Thisbe the doomed lover. That just doesn't strike me as the instant picture that hits with a 6 year old having a crush.
Date: 07/02/12 12:12 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
So cute...the tiny almost couple good luck with your exes and icwudt cinema bizarre XD
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it and I thought we needed a cute chapter. I wanted to add a little reference to CB since it was there music I was listening to when I wrote this. They are magical.
Date: 07/02/12 12:09 am Title: An Unexpected Visitor
omg, that was so sweet..they are so sweet :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. It was just a bit of a filler chapter and some fluff since the topics have been a little heavy lately.
Date: 06/30/12 11:58 pm Title: A Lack of Air
Oh dear lord. I hope that those kids not only get expelled, but Tom insists in pressing charges on Jerry!
Holy spumoni that was some smexy stuff! Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see the next! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response:
I hope that ends up happening too but we shall see. I am glad you liked the sexy time between Bill and Tom. I wanted it to be real and I wanted it to be hot. Next chaptre will be up Monday. Thanks for the review and for reading my stories.
Date: 06/30/12 02:07 pm Title: A Lack of Air
I hope Izzy's ok!!! I want to hear more about her crush on Kevin hahaha
Author's Response:
Me too. the crush with Kevin will definitely be making an encore appearance.
Date: 06/30/12 11:44 am Title: A Lack of Air
So... today I decided to be a lover 'cause I really love this chapter! omfg I love this story so much, I really cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response:
Well, I am glad you decided to be a lover. I hope you will continue to read and love this story. The next chapter will be up Monday with no doubt.
Date: 06/30/12 08:59 am Title: A Lack of Air
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm so sad I hope she's OK :(.
...:(
I wanted to comment, on how cute the whole Bill with a girlfriend because he had the 64 pack of crayons was but now I'm just sad and scared. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Yeah I had a hard time writing this chapter but it can't be hearts, roses and happiness all the time. I liked that segment too because I had a boyfriend that I would kiss on the playgorund because he had the 64 pack of crayons with the sharpener. It was the coolest thing in the world. I was in love with his crayons not him. We shall see what happens with Izzy. Thanks for the comments. They make me smile.
Date: 06/30/12 08:36 am Title: At School
lol @ pet the review monster. That's cute. *pets it lovingly*
"You smell like daddy's cologne!" Seriously made me laugh out loud.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like that phrase it is just something I read somewhere and it kind of stuck. It enjoys the lovely petting it is getting. I am glad that the daddy's colonge thing made people laugh it was supposed to. Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 06/30/12 08:11 am Title: Happiness and Sadness
The kids are perfectly written. I think they're sweet, and yet they still act like kids. The way you've written them is balanced and realistic.
I feel the same way about Rebecca as Tom does, I think lol.
I like how you're writing Bill and Tom too - their interest in each other is also realistic. Not over-the-top. They seem to be interested but not like automatically in love with one another.
I will keep the other questions in mind as I'm reading the story.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like the kids. I wanted to make sure they acted like real kids while still being well-mannered. I also wanted to show that Bill was a good influence by adding a balance of rules while still letting them grow a little wild like kids should. Tom and Rebecca are an interesting dynamc to write. I mean they are parents together even if they hate each other. Bill and Tom are fun to write. I wanted to make sure they fell in love in a real manner not just falling into it. Those kinds of stories always felt so fake to me. I hope you will continue reading and reviewing.
Date: 06/29/12 10:05 pm Title: A Lack of Air
I hope those bullies get what they deserve after what they've done with Izzy! I have a soft spot for her because we have the same name. except my name is spelled Yza.
Author's Response:
I hope I can figure out a way. I am glad you like Izzy and it is so cool that you two have the same name even if they're spelled differently. I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Thanks for the review.