Date: 07/13/12 05:20 pm Title: A Clever Lie
i think rebecca is a cunt...she should not be around those kids or anyone else...and bill has to realize that she's bad news...and if he's fired, why does he have to leave tom's house? now he's a free person and can do what he wants...
Author's Response:
Rebecca has definitely recieved a lot of hate and heat. We may be seeing a softer side soon. Keep quite about that. ;) The Nanny Inc people want to send in a new nanny so they don't want the old nanny hanging about. Now if Tom were to ask Bill to live with him in the capacity of a partner Nanny Inc would have no say in the manner.
Date: 07/13/12 04:08 pm Title: A Clever Lie
Bill definitely believed her too easily! Her story didn't even make sense! Bill was Tom's only nanny, except for Tanya! So when was he 'using' all of these nannies!? I hope Bill takes a few minutes to think things through, and realizes that blatant hole in her story. But I CAN understand why he let what she said get to him, its a stressful situation, and he HAS never actually spoken with her. But he's just gotta come to his senses.
I think Bill gave a beautiful speech, about the kids, and I am proud he told the truth to the Inc. It would've only ended badly. But I do think he should've warned them she would do this to any nanny they send over, true or not, because she's so desperate to have Tom back.
Wonderful chapter! I look forward to Monday! *does a double take* I can't believe I just said that...
Author's Response:
The other nannies were people he met at social functions is what I was trying to get across. They never worked directly for him just the agency in general. Bill has alwas been a little on the hateful side toward Rebecca but looking back on the story I realized he had never had a conversation with her. I wanted to show how cunning she really is but you might find there is some truth to her story. Tom and Bill sort of jumped together to without thinking about or really getting to know how the other changed over time.
rnI liked writing Bill's statement it was very personal to me because I work at a nursery and I have been working there for many years. I've known this one girl from birth to pre-k. Last week her mom lost a year long cutody battle and the little girl was shipped off to live with her abusive father, the mother was a lesbain. Bill was out of words and time. They would have thought whatever he said about Rebecca was hositlity and lies.
rnI can't believe you said that either but I know what you mean. I hope to post by Monday.
Date: 07/13/12 02:27 pm Title: A Clever Lie
why doesn't tom just stop using the service and hire bill personally?
Author's Response:
He hasn't had time yet. We will see what happens. Thanks for the review and the banner.
Date: 07/13/12 01:47 pm Title: A Clever Lie
oh my, my heart is aching, please update soon, oh my *sobs all over the place*
fucking Rebecca, stupid whore *dies*
Author's Response:
I am sorry this was such a hard chapter for you but after so much fluff I thought it was time too add the real problem to the works. Rebecca's behavior is definitely escalating for bad to psychotic. She needs to be medicated,
Date: 07/11/12 06:52 pm Title: A Few More Problems
Oh fuck Rebecca. She's a dumb whore. As for Bill's mom, she sounds like a drunken dumbass. I think Bill will pull through. And even if he does get fired, he can see Tom on weekends.
If the person he's employed with and his children don't have a problem with the relationship, the company should stay out of it.
More pleasssseee.
10/10
*****
Author's Response:
She is a bad person. Bill's mom is a bad character and I don't really want to write it. I think Bill will pull through too. The company is always involved in their employee's lives. The update will definitley be Friday. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/11/12 03:47 pm Title: A Few More Problems
I want to snap Rebecca like a twig right now. Ugh.
Lovely chapter btw!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like the story enough to want to kill my character. I am glad you like the chapter.
Date: 07/11/12 12:37 pm Title: A Few More Problems
I hope Rebecca goes down...and hard! I'm curious about how Bill will handle his mother.
Author's Response:
Rebecca is defintiely a bad person. Bill handling his mother is one subject I plan to broach soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/10/12 10:44 pm Title: A Few More Problems
*crosses fingers annd prays the judge thinks she's full of it* evil little bitch. 'Your religion' also more than likely said you weren't supposed to have premarital sex, get divorced, or eat shellfish, yet we know you did two of those, and barring allergies probably the third also. Oh and, most religoins say you are resposible for the house hold, includong RAISING YOUR KIDS...*mutters*stupidbitch*/end mutter*
Grilled cheese and tomato soup is one of my favorite lunches too!
Bill is a suit *shivers* sexy hexy. Can't blame Tom for his reaction.
Oh I just facepalmed when I heard Isabella. It really wasn't her fault but...yea. and I'm definitely über worried about mom now, though she still doesn't know where Bill's apartment is or where 'Tom' lives.
Oh, I felt terrible wanting some Andi Simone interaction because Sim seems so straight laced and mildy anti-homosexuality and Andi is such a...shall we say Character.
Great work! I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
I know most religions say that but I doubt that Rebecca did much research before coming up with this defense for her sudden change of heart. I am glad you hate her so much, she is definitely different for me to write.
rnI love grilled cheese and tomato soup especially for lunch on cold day a few days before and after Christmas.
rnBill in that photo shoot with the suit is one that just makes me shiver every time. I don't remember what photo shoot I just remember it is sexy.
rnIsabella's off-hand comments were hard for me to write. Bill's mom is a character that I don't want to write but I have to.
rnAndi and Simone would be fun to write more of which is what I am planning.
rnI am glad you like it. Update should be on Friday.
Date: 07/10/12 09:28 pm Title: A Performance
I understand that it's against company policy but why does all of this have to happen? Can't Bill just quit? Wouldn't that make more sense? Then there's nothing anyone can do...
Author's Response:
I don't think Bill wants to quit. He likes his job too. I think he would take the risk of being reassigned. Plus by quitting they are admitting they did something wrong. I don't think they should admit that.
Date: 07/07/12 09:43 am Title: A Performance
I would have liked the complain to have come up after christmas. Although I like of how you thought of a nice way to potentially save Bill.
Aw I liked Billa better.
Andi is exactly how I thought he would be and they're acting exactly how I envisioned them to act.
Yeah Bill's mom is worry. But a worry I hope comes after he sorts out the whole job ordeal.
Author's Response:
Me too but it was the right moment for the story. What do you mean a nice way to save Bill?
rnI generally like Billa better but I like my beta too.
rnI liked writing Andi. I also liked how they interact.
rnBill's mom is something I dread. I hope it'll come up when it's a good time.
Date: 07/07/12 07:54 am Title: A Performance
I went to visit the egg a few times, though the overall and unique views still say zero :(.
Aww at Bill's little comment about not wanting to wriggle out of Andi's grasp.
I am relieved that Rebecca complained so that at least now I don't have to worry that she will do it. I'm sad that it means Bill might be fired, but I know that he has the option to find a solution that works for him. From the way you talked about his relationship with Nanny Inc in the beginning, it sounded like he would probably be fired anyway lol because he has more of a heart than the company seems to be comfortable with. Idk. I guess I would feel more worried for him if I weren't pretty much exactly like him in that regard. I'm kind of a rebel so I respect him for following his heart regardless of what the rules are.
I do like how Bill and Andi interact and yes Andi is how I thought he would be. I am a little worried about Bill's mom, especially if she's going to come in contact with the children. That worries me a lot.
I hope you enjoyed your Independence Day too!
Author's Response:
I am not sure what's up with my egg. I think the site is down right now. Thanks for trying though that means a lot. I liked Bill's little comments about being trapped by Andi.
rnI thought many people would be more worried then relieved butt it seems exactly the opposite. Bill being fired is definitely something I want to avoid but the story will take me where it wants to go. That is part of this, Bill will be able to find a solution that he likes. Yeah he has alot of heart and it seems like it is more then the company likes. I am the same way. I tend to follow my heart not the rules.
rnI like writing Andi and Bill. They are fun. Andi is always a fun character for me to write. Bill's mom is a character I dread writing but I think she will come up eventually. Having her around the children is not something I plan.
rnThanks I did.
Date: 07/06/12 10:56 pm Title: A Performance
I really don't like the nickname Billy. I personally don't think it should have been changed based on your beta not liking it. But the story was good except for that. I hope Billa doesn't get fired! And I hope Rebecca gets beat up or thrown in a crazy house or something!
10/10
*****
Author's Response:
I am sorry you don't like Billy as a nickname. It wasn't chnaged solely on my beta, it was based on the fact that she has done alot for me and I respect her opinion. I wanted to make it easier on her and the nickname doesn't matter much to me. The content should be more important. I am glad you still like the story. We shall see what happens with Bill's job. I don't think that will happen to Rebecca unfortunately. Thanks for the review and I hope you can enjoy the story even with the nickname Billy in it.
Date: 07/06/12 10:31 pm Title: A Performance
Andi was everything I imagined he would be. And I found it positively delightful! If I do say so myself, I would love to see a little Andi interaction with Tom's mom...is that terrible of me? *snickers*
I'm both relieved that Bitchecca has submitted her complaint and anxious about how the review will go. And with Bill's history at the company, I think the woman on the phonne was being generous about re-assigning him again.
This was a really great chapter! I look forward to monday's update!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked Andi. He was fun to write and Bill's reaction to him was fun to write. I think Andi interacting with Tom's mom will come in time. Why would that make you terrible?
rnRebecca's complaint had to come in play right in time. I want to build up the tension you know make everything kind of build up at once. The bullies trial, Rebecca making her move, Andi visiting, the looming threat of Bill's mom and the holiday. I hope it's builds the strain just a bit. The woman on the phone was very generous with Bill.
rnI am glad you like the chapter and I will be updating on Monday if I can.
Date: 07/06/12 10:03 pm Title: A Performance
Thanks for changing the name from 'Billa' to 'Billy'. Like I said in one of my emails, I do think it's cute when the kids call him that, but not when Tom does lol Thank you for taking my opinion into consideration. It is your story and you didn't have to do that =] Thanks, though =D
Author's Response:
No biggie. I can live with the name and anyone who can't needs to get over it. You help me alot so the least I can do is change the name to your liking. Anything I can do to make it easier for you to enjoy and beta my story I am willing to do.
Date: 07/06/12 05:24 pm Title: A Performance
love the chapter! Want to strangle Rebecca tho!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I want to strangle Rebecca too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/06/12 04:05 pm Title: A Performance
I love the story so far, but things need to get steamy between Bill and Tom.....
Author's Response:
They already have but we'll see what happens. Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/06/12 03:34 pm Title: A Performance
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it.
Date: 07/06/12 09:48 am Title: Scary Question
Does going to visit your egg count as clicking it? The image didn't show up here *pout*. I am excited to meet Andi in person and I like that Simone just accepted it. I really like this story :3.
Author's Response:
Yes it does thank you. That sucks I'll have to figure out why. I am glad you want to meet Andi. Simone was fun to write. I am glad you like the story.
Date: 07/05/12 03:07 pm Title: Scary Question
oops, just read my review...god my phones keypad is too small. I meant "how Andi" not "hoe Andi" becasue as much as Andi seems to be quite ho-like..... I wouldnt want to see ho!Andi interact with Tom, or the kids.
Author's Response:
I know what you meant. I do that too on my computer. I type so fast that I miss a letter or put in the wrong letter and it screws everything up. My beta has quite a task distinguishing between my actual mistakes and intentional stuff. I think ho!Andi would be a bit much around the kids.
Date: 07/05/12 09:52 am Title: Scary Question
I like Andi and i'm glad that Simone is accepting the relationship. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Andi is interesting as is Simone. I am glad you like it.