Date: 06/29/12 07:53 pm Title: A Lack of Air
That was a good chapter. I can't believe a sixth grader did that to Izzy. Some asses must be kicked I tell you. Keep up the good work cause I really like this story
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I had a 6th grader that did this to me only I was in 2nd grade. He went through a trial in family court and was in juvie until he was 18. I am glas you like the story.
Date: 06/29/12 06:09 pm Title: A Lack of Air
Omgosh! I hope Izzy will be okay!
Author's Response:
We will see but you never know. Kids can be cruel. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/29/12 04:32 pm Title: A Lack of Air
More! Now! :D
10/10
*****
Author's Response:
More on Monday sorry but I will stand firm on that. Thanks for the rating and review. I am glad you like it.
Date: 06/29/12 02:35 pm Title: A Lack of Air
oh lord, poor izzy ;______; Love the new chapter!!
Author's Response:
I felt really bad about this and how I wrote it but I felt like it would be something that bullies would escalate to. I am glad you like it.
Date: 06/29/12 01:49 pm Title: A Lack of Air
Oooh, this is getting interesting! Although, just 1 little thing: in this chapter, you put up there that the kids are eleven, but through the story and part of this chapter too, you've said they're 6 and in kindergarten O.o Here: "They exchanged hot kisses back and forth as they kept as quiet as they could, trying to remember the two inquisitive eleven year olds in their rooms, only a floor above them."
Author's Response:
You're right I have inconsistencies in my story. Thanks for pointing this out. I didn't realize that. I will fix that right as soon as I finish replying. I am glad you like the story and noticed my mistake. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/29/12 01:08 pm Title: The New Nanny
Aw, i like it, as usual :x :x :x but I want angst anyway :((( can you put some angst into this. bcause i think angst can prove love and makes it poignant xDD
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and we're not to the angsty part yet. It is coming and I promise you it'll be bad. I have a sick tendency to torment my characters. I think angst will cement their relationship and definitely add that bittersweet taste to the story and relationship that we all love. Thanks for the review and the suggestion.
Date: 06/26/12 12:52 am Title: A Late Night Chat
God those two I love them
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it.
Date: 06/25/12 06:54 pm Title: A Late Night Chat
ooh, love this fic, update sooooon!
Author's Response:
I am glad you love it. I will update soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/25/12 09:15 am Title: A Late Night Chat
I liked the chapter. There was a sufficient problem that was smartly resolved. It's a realistic solution. Normally people turn that simple chat misunderstanding in to a ballistic problem. But in real life it could be solved as simply as this. I like all the relationships they're progressing nicely. And that Tom no longer finds Rebecca attractive is a great sign that he truly has feelings for Bill.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I don't like how some people turn simple conversations into major all out catfights so I made it just a simple conversation. I am glad you like all the relationships. Rebecca is one of those characters that progressed without my concious consent. She is interesting to write since I'm not this way in life and I don't know anyone like this.
Date: 06/25/12 07:27 am Title: A Late Night Chat
awwww, it's so sweet ~~~ I love the story more and more xDDDD waiting for ur update :x :x
Author's Response:
I am glad you think its sweet and I will update soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/25/12 12:49 am Title: A Late Night Chat
*looks around bewildered* I...tracked this last Friday...yet I managed to miss chapter six...curiouser and curiouser.
Oh Tom, *facepalm* rookie mistake leaving the ex alone anywhere in you house. Let alone a jealous one alone with your computer than happens to have an open convo w/ your current nanny/date. *sighs* idiot.
Oh my goodness! The date was fantastic! Why on earth would Tom order relatively poor uncultured Bill cow brain or intestine or whatever the hell it was?! He could've stuck with something relatively simple, like rouladen, or schnitzle, or sauerbraten. But I loved how it was an awkward first date, not an overly romantisized one.
Wonderful two chapters! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Chapter 6 was posted on Monday so idk. The tracking feature is fluky sometimes it's doesnt work.
rnI know Tom pulled a silly move leaving his ex alone with the computer that his date was speaking to him on. Of course Rebecca is going to snoop and be a complete bich about things. Boys *shakes head*
rnI enjoyed writing that but I didn't do any research on it before hand. I just remember going to a German resturant when I was little and the guy over in the next table saying he never thought cow intestines would be so good. I couldn't ouch my food even though I was pretty sure it was chicken. Tom ordering that for Bill on a first date was the most epic thing I could think of. I wanted to show not all dates are perfect and first ones are generally awkward.
rnI am glad you liked it and I will update soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/25/12 12:47 am Title: A Late Night Chat
I love the relationships between everyone... I'm glad that Rebecca didn't destroy it like she thought she did...
Author's Response:
I am glad you like all the relationships and Rebecca is obtuse sometimes. Of course Bill and Tom are going to talk if Tom thinks he's getting stood up. Geez. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/25/12 12:34 am Title: A Date
Lets see...i like the idea of the kids being as close as they are... even though this date was a disaster, that doesn't mean it won't eventually go right...i think Rebecca not being around will result in happier children...
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked that. I wanted to make the date realistic which means they aren't always perfect. I think less Rebecca will also result in happier children.
Date: 06/24/12 10:02 pm Title: A Late Night Chat
I vote for sexy time! Lol. I'm relieved that Tom got to the bottom of the trouble Rebecca made :)
Author's Response:
I seem to be getting a lot of votes for sexy time but swe shall see. I'm relieved too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06/24/12 09:29 pm Title: A Late Night Chat
SEXY TIME NOW! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I'l try my best.
Date: 06/24/12 08:32 pm Title: A Late Night Chat
this is really good and Im all for the sexy chapter (sSSSSS)
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and I think there might be sexy time in the next chapter but we shall see.
Date: 06/23/12 09:50 pm Title: A Date
You know, I hardly leave a comment, but this is the first story in a while which actually capture my mind. It's kinda realistic, Bill's not a bitch or a stupid brat and and I can see a scenario around the relationship between B&T. I'm tired about 40 chapters of laughs, sloppy kisses and fairytales. This one doesn't bore me to death, good job!
Author's Response:
I hardly leave comments too that's just because I can never really think of anything to say even if I really like a story although I am getting better at it. I don;t like the stories were they are all fluff either. I like realism and in real life dates don't always go perfect. They go awry or we screw up because we try to hard. I like making it real building up the relationship and keeping perspective. Not just kissing, laughing and happy ever after because that's not how life works and I write from life. Thanks for the review I am glad you liked it.
Date: 06/20/12 09:08 pm Title: A Date
asfhjbjdbgvcjh AAAA YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB AGAIN!!!!! I Love the story!!! Please update!!! I love the process and the moments they two are together and the kids also, but, uhm, a little bit worry about that Rebecca character :-SS She does not seem too smart, but can be a bitch smt, oh no, already is..........
one more word, thank you and update PLEASE!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so much. I will update as often as I can manage.I like the process and the moments they share. The kids are fun to write and a little different for me. I have a little brother so we'll see sibling rivarly moments soon. I worry about Rebecca too but cheaters never prosper.
Date: 06/20/12 12:58 pm Title: A Date
Great so far, go and enjoy life, its just fan fiction, its for fun, love life first then write. Huggs
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. I enjoy writing and this is one of the few ways I manage to stay sane when my world begins spiraling. It's the one thing, the one world I can control. I do mantain a very delicate balance between my social life and the life I spend on the computer. I never blow off friends to spend a night on the computer so don't worry. It's just summer's not as relaxing as I thought it would be.
Date: 06/20/12 09:50 am Title: A Date
take your time in writing. Good literature takes time. Bill and Andi should get together sometime, not just talk through the phone. Bill and Tom's date was a nice realistic change to the typical perfect first date point of view. I think less Rebecca is better. They have enough problems right now without her.
Author's Response:
Yeah it does but I also enjoy writing of any kind so I generally do it to keep myself entertained when I am not running around liek a chicken with my head cut off. Good reading does take time which is why I never force a story, the story has to write itself or it's not worth reading. I was thinking of having Andi visit when things settle down a bit of course but it's a very vague notion at this point. I didn't want them to have the clique perfect date. I wanted it to be a bit raw and real. I left Rebecca intenionally but we haven't seen the last of her. Thanks for the review.