Date: 05/31/12 12:09 pm Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
it's directly sent to my favorite stories!
Author's Response: Thank u so much!
Date: 05/31/12 07:21 am Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
oh i love it love it
Author's Response: Oooh thank uuu! :D
Date: 05/30/12 02:25 am Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
I really like this chapter! :)
I'm very interested to see how Tom and Bill's relationship will progress throughout the story. As if I haven't read the manga already. XD
But anyway, keep writing! /cheers ^____^
P.S. I've already sent you an email. Please do check it out. :3
Author's Response: Thank u so much the support! Yes, I just saw ur email. Will give ya a reply :) Thanks again!
Date: 05/30/12 02:00 am Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
Great chapter!! I love it that Tom told Bill his name =)
Continue the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank u! :D
Date: 05/29/12 10:46 pm Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
The other fic is called Bulletproof, by TimeReaper... I knew i'd remember as soon as I stopped thinking about it. But okay, the style emerging is pretty different than it, just a couple key points are the same, underground prison, new kid in town, and shutcall wanting him, oh and psycho Andi (which hasn't really been confirmed in the other)
Wonderjgmnful chapter! I'm really liking the combo of italisized bits opf Bill telling/writing his story mixed with the actually seeing it happen. Wonderful work so far. I'm looking forward to the next update. I hope you aren't planning on a terribly long break!
Author's Response: Oh wow, I just checked out that fic and wow, I'm stunned myself lol. I read up some of the responses the author repiled on the reviews, it was inspired from the manga, Under Grand Hotel, too but not identicle storyline. So I think if I stick to the same plot as the manga I should be save. I'll be careful while writing it from now on. Thanks a lot for warning me about it! Ah yes, I'm trying to create a more dramatic atmosphere on Bill's aspect xD I'm glad u like it! It will be a short break (a week?) just busy on stuff and then I'll be back writing it. It won't be too long, I promise!
Date: 05/29/12 09:18 pm Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
going great.
Author's Response: Thanks u! ^^
Date: 05/29/12 08:07 pm Title: Lockdown II: Surrender
I went in search of the manga and fell in love >.< lol
So I do look forward to the updates.
Author's Response: Haha the manga is such a classic! Thank u! The next update might take slightly longer but won't be too long :)
Date: 05/27/12 10:13 pm Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
I can't remember its title, but this is very similar to another fic floating around here, so be veeery careful. So far you have Tom and Bill's position reversed and that's about it. I mean no offense or to imply anything untoward, I just wanted to give you a fair warning
This is pretty good so far! I llok forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Oh really? I know nothing about it...if u are able to recall the title do let me know. I'll check it out. Mine is based on a manga so hopefully it will be safe. Thanks a lot for telling me that :) will update it asap!
Date: 05/27/12 08:36 pm Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
This was interesting! Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Will update it within this week :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Will update it within this week :)
Date: 05/27/12 05:42 pm Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
Under Grand Hotel is a great manga - I'm so glad you're creating a fic based on it! I'm really enjoying the fic so far and I'm eagerly waiting for an update! :D
I'm actually pretty excited to read the rest of the story >.
Author's Response: It's one of my fav manga too! The plot is so inspiring, I can't help it to write a fic xD I'll be workin on the next chapter asap so hopefully it will be done within this week. I'm excited myself lolol
Date: 05/27/12 11:34 am Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
LOL Just finished reading! XD
Really like the manga. XP But me likey because it's Tom and Bill! /loves
I'll start tracking this now. :3
P.S. I've read your chapter end noted and it's written there! XD
P.P.S I guess I can be somewhat of a beta reader? XD
Author's Response: Yes, I'm a huge fan of UGH too! (actually I just finished the manga a few days ago lol) I can't help it, I just NEED to write a fic with the twins in it hahaha the story plot is amazing. That will be great! My email is ayu_jewel@hotmail.com we can contact thru there?
Date: 05/27/12 11:30 am Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
So, I haven't read the story yet but here I am, already reviewing. XD
Is this fic inspired by Mika Sadahiro's Under Grand Hotel? Because UGH is my most favorite manga of all time.
Well, off to read the story now!
Date: 05/27/12 11:13 am Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
I like the start of it!
Keep going!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be working on the next chapter soon :)
Date: 05/27/12 06:23 am Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
Wow great start! what an amazing plot u have here , Its gonna be a perfect story :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 05/26/12 11:59 pm Title: Lockdown I: Locked Up
interesting i like it so far one note however it needs to be beta'd for wrong word tense and some grammar. but keep going its really good
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm looking for a beta reader too so if u do know some please let me know? :)