Date: 06/05/12 05:25 pm Title: Tonight - Part One
That was a bit nasty, but fit well to the scenarie of how twisted and sick the twins' minds were already. I like the idea that you bought also their relationship and complewx love into this and showed it not only as pure and uninfected, but vulnerable as well.
I guess the next chapter will give the poor girl an unfortunate destiny.
Date: 05/31/12 08:05 pm Title: Tonight - Part One
Whoa! That's just heartless. Is this their first victim?
Author's Response: No. No, it is not. It has been about a year or two since their last one, though. <3
Date: 05/29/12 02:54 pm Title: Rude Awakening
It's sad to see how they are so wrapped up in their own sick minds that6 those twisted actions have become their normal life instead of finding it something to truly cure. It's like they drift between fear to beast-like dominating thoughts during the everyday tasks. Interesting.
I'm not a huge fan of gore (at least not at the moment), but I'll definitely see how this is going on... :)
Author's Response: Take exactly what you've described, and add in something that they collectively DO care about...and there's your foreshadowing for the rest of the fic. XD
Date: 05/25/12 02:49 pm Title: Rude Awakening
Oh gore, how I wish you weren't necessary for fics like this...yet you are so...
This was a really amazing chapter. It totes lived up to the prolgues expectations...its kind of odd, isn't it, that they sleep in the same bed, half naked, but have never crossed that line?...you did a fanastic job blending the two different writing styles together, I never would've guessed it was an rpg thing.
Author's Response: Aw, but within the gore is some twinsmut ;D And it's very 'telling'. That's all I can say. *shifty eyes* And THANK you SO much! I was afraid the different writing styles would be easily decipherable and wouldn't mesh well, but yay! \o/
Date: 05/25/12 01:51 am Title: Rude Awakening
OMG!!! so dark!! i love it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D
Date: 05/24/12 04:56 pm Title: Rude Awakening
They are both...complete psychopaths ._. Well, Tom's a sociopath, but still XD They much have had a /horrible/ therapist o.o; Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I fucking love you *-*
Date: 05/20/12 11:19 am Title: Prologue
Oh... Damn. That was harsh. In a good way of course,. Stopping. I find the beginning very interesting and the set surely gives lot of possibilities. It is so twisted up and I feel sorry for the boys, worried of how they will end up to be. Interesting...
Author's Response: You're rightfully worried~
Date: 05/18/12 07:36 pm Title: Prologue
oh god, this is too good. Tom is so psychotic. i feel so bad for Bill, too. this is a really good first chapter, the first good story i've read in a while. i'm adding this to my faves and i cant wait to read the coming chapters. :-)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, hon. ^^ I've already got my lovely betas looking over the first actual chapter, and I plan to post it next Thursday. Hope it won't disappoint, lol
Date: 05/18/12 01:44 am Title: Prologue
OH DEAR GOD YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been looking for this fic for over a year now!! I'm such a big fan and was really sad when you deleted it. I'm like a kid in a candy store!! I'm happy your back :) I know what happens for the most part but I can't wait to read the end and how things play out for all of them. Eeeep!!!!! You so made my night. Thank you for being awesome.
Author's Response: You have NO idea how much you just made my night. I can't stop smiling, and had to read your review aloud to my roommate, lol. I honestly didn't think people cared that much for it the first time 'round, and so I eventually took it down when I got too frustrated with the rewrite. Apparently, I was wrong, because several people (my girlfriend included) said they LOVED this story when it was up, so.. now I feel kind of guilty for having abandoned it XD
I haven't really gone anywhere, I just haven't updated anything in a long while because I'm lazy, lack inspiration, dedication, and determination, so... yeah XD I've every intent on seeing this through to the end, though, so you're safe. ^^ Thank you SO much for you comments! *squishes*
Date: 05/17/12 04:43 pm Title: Prologue
This is a fabulous start. Keep up the awesome writing and I can't wait to read more. I feel sorry for Bill and Tom. Why did Bill kill the kitten? I guess because of the rage built up inside him over the horrible rape. Can't watit to find out what happens next!!
Author's Response: Pretty much, yeah. From his childlike perspective, it was like trying to place himself in his coach's mindset. Trying to see what was so 'fun' about hurting something or someone so 'innocent' and helpless against him. Morbid experimentation, as well as a way to release his anger over what was done to him, yes. Thank you for the AMAZING review!!
Date: 05/17/12 04:31 pm Title: Prologue
Tom's a sociopath O_O Holy crap, this is awesome. And terrifying, but totally, completely awesome, too. And I totally already forgot the summary, but I love the fic! ^_^ GO YOU!! E>
Author's Response: And I love you!! *flailclings* Your reviews make me so friggin' happy, lol. It's gonna get pretty gruesome in a few chapters, just so you're forewarned. I hope you can stick through it!
Date: 05/17/12 12:07 pm Title: Prologue
Poor Bill :( And poor kitty.
Author's Response: He's learning how to 'cope', lol. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/17/12 11:53 am Title: Prologue
Wow...pretty uhh...intense there. So sad they had to be apart/witness that. You've caught my attention. Waiting for more =)
Author's Response: It'll only get more and more intense. Next update should be in about a week's time. Glad you're enjoying it! *hugs*rn
Date: 05/17/12 10:29 am Title: Prologue
Oh Bill... it was just a kitty. It never would've hurt you...
This is...quite disturbing. I think I'm gonna like it. I can't wait to see more. I hope you don't give up on this again. And I certainly hope this gets better reception this time around. Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't plan on giving up on it this time. I'm already reworking the first chapter, and it goes through two betas before I post. I'm hopin it'll work this time, lol
And to my last reviewer; no, it was Bill that killed the kitten. That's what I get for responding first thing in the morning, lol. Thank you guys!
Date: 05/17/12 06:51 am Title: Prologue
Tom killed the kitten too? :O
great start ,I'll wait for more :3
Author's Response: Yeah, he did. =/ But yes, more to come, and thank you for your kind words! ^^