Date: 09/23/15 05:43 pm Title: Submit.
It was nice where's the sequel.
Date: 05/22/12 12:40 pm Title: Submit.
i lol'd so hard at Bill's dick being the empire state building!
this was really good! a nice tease, too!
I like seeing Tom being dominant. oohhh.
Author's Response: Tom's is a coconut, Bill's is the empire state building ;)!
Date: 05/21/12 07:15 pm Title: Submit.
oh my god! this was so good...but too short, I want more!
Author's Response: If you knew me and my writing, you'd know that if it was any longer this would just go downhill! I lose motivation quickly, you see. I'm glad you liked it though, and I hope you look out for more kinky one-shots coming soon ;).
Date: 05/18/12 04:30 pm Title: Submit.
Apparently you were teasing us now :). But we like it just like Bill does.
Nice smut. Some little details hit right on my spot, made this deliciously naughty. Also, I liked the way you brought up Tom's problem to fully surrender to the role because he didn't actually want to hurt BIll, not like that. I wouldn't have minded to read this till the end, but since you decided to tease us... ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! I'm sorry for being such a tease ;).
Date: 05/16/12 11:29 pm Title: Submit.
oh and such a good tease it was....evil little witch. *mock glowers* Good job
Author's Response: Sorry. Maybe you'll get more...Consider this just foreplay ;) Thanks!
Date: 05/16/12 10:55 pm Title: Submit.
this is really good more please
Author's Response: Thank you! I will definitely think about writing more but I'm not quite sure.
Date: 05/16/12 10:02 pm Title: Submit.
nice story
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!