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Reviewer: Hattie0620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/13 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome To Los Angeles

hey layla :3

Reviewer: Layla TokioVanity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/13 09:29 am Title: Chapter 15

NEVER LEAVE US AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! Hi Hattie. Ok, first off you just forget to post to this story?!?!?! HOW DO YOU FORGET A STORY!!!! It's not like whoops I forgot to make my bed or some shit, you forgot a STORY! You left us all hanging and I am personally offended. Since when does May 21 count as Christmas? Christmas present my ass. Since my birthday was the 18th I'll count it as a late birthday present but your forgetful ass isn't off the hook yet. If you ever leave us again we will find you. And we will kill you. Or we could just chain you to a laptop and occasionally feed you skittles and red bull. As for the chapter it was super sexual. I like that. I can also relate to Amber on this one. You don't wet a bitch's hair. Just no. That candy coated hell. Update soon and don't forget or me and my fanfic buddies will hunt your ass down. (I'm not really on to talk though seeing as I haven't updated my stories in months..... We both have some shit to work on) jolly good show. Get back to work. I will be watching and I WILL be reading. I've got my eyes on you.
-LTV

Reviewer: Hattie0620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/13 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 15

you came back :,) i missed you :3 don't ever leave again

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. I promise it'll never happen again <3

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/12 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 14: Big Secret

aaaaawwww it is so nice that Tom And Amber are getting along so well and she was able to tell Tom her secrect , but u missed the end part(for us). wat is the secret, LOL? Please update soon .hope Trent got wat comes to him , bastard !!!

Author's Response: I'm trying to build the suspense up but don't worry, the secret will be reveal soon. Sometime in the next chapter or chapter 16 :)

Reviewer: blackrainbow00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 13: "I'm full of surprises Tomi,"

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO ROMANTIC AT THE END!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVEEEDD the fight scene. And i cant wait to see what happens with sarah.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I loved the fight scene as well. And we'll fnd out what happens with Sara in chapter 14 ;P rn

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/12 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 13: "I'm full of surprises Tomi,"

great 2 chapters , loved it !!! . wat kind of secret does she have ? please update soon , lov this story .

Author's Response: Thank you and you'll have to see what it is :) I'll be revealing it in the net couple of chapters :) I will soon. I might update tomorrow, if I'm not busy :)

Reviewer: conner Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Welcome To Los Angeles

you have too update more live the story :) cant wait to read more of it :)

Author's Response: I just updated :) TWO CHAPTERS!!!!!! An early christmas present :) hehe

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 02:12 am Title: Chapter 11: A Blast From The Past

cant wait for mooooooore :)

Author's Response: I just posted TWO CHAPTERS :D hehe An early christmas for all my readers :) rnrn

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 12:23 am Title: Chapter 11: A Blast From The Past

aaaaaaawwww wat a sweet date , Tom acted so like a gentleman . it was so nice . wat a beatuiful evening . CLIFFHANGER , oh no wat is going to happen . and wat does he want . wat happened with them . please update soon . sorry u r having writer-block . sometimes i get that with my crafts and takes some time to get around it . good luck .

Author's Response: Well, I wanted people and Amber to see that Tom wasn't all 'I'm a slut bro. I'm gonna screw everything on two legs' and I wanted Amber to be in for a suprise. I'm really pleased how this chapter turned out. Thank you so much for your review <3 :)

Reviewer: blackrainbow00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 11: A Blast From The Past

WAT!!!!!!!U HAVE TO UPDATE SOON I MUST KNOW WAT HAPPENS!!!!!

Author's Response: Haha. Your review made me laugh. Thank you :) I will hopefully have chapter 12 up tonight :)

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/12 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 10: What the fuck just happened?

oooooohh she is excited to have a date with Tom thats great . wonder wat happened in germany , please update soon .

Author's Response: I'll hopefully have the next chapter up by Wednesday. I'm having a little bit of writer's block >:'(

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/12 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 9: Have To Get Rid Of This Bitch

tom jealous again , he is fed up with his girlfriend . now he has to get rid of her and try to get Amber , before she does something stupid . hope she isn`t 2 much trouble with Keegan .

Author's Response: Well, we'll be seeing a bit more of Keegan shortly but I'm also bringing in a new character. Amber's ex-boyfriend. So we'll see what happens :)

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/12 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: Mr. Know It All

wow Tom is jealous , that is good . maybe he will do wat his mom said . but wat will he do to convince her he is a one woman man .

Author's Response: Oooh, you'll have to wait and see ;)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/12 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: Have To Get Rid Of This Bitch

I hope Amber doesn't get herself into a mess just for the sake of playing games. I agree, Tom really does need to get rid of his chick :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, it'll all sort itself out soon. hahaha lol :)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/12 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 8: Mr. Know It All

How I missed this chapter is beyond me lol. I thought I was caught up! On to the next :)

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for reading. It really means a lot :)

Reviewer: Fanatik Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/12 09:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Have To Get Rid Of This Bitch

very goood cha[ter :)
cant wait for moooore :)
the moy in the picture was a hottie :D XD
update sooooon :) pleeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have the next chapter up soon, hopefully. I sort of have writer's block which totally sucks :/ lol

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: Music Performances & The Most Agonizing Twenty Minutes With He-Who-Will-Not-Be-Named!"

Tom seemed a bit offended lol. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I was aiming for that lol. I'm gonna have them like hating each other for a couple more chapters, then have the fun really begin lol :D

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: Music Performances & The Most Agonizing Twenty Minutes With He-Who-Will-Not-Be-Named!"

oh lov this story so far , it`s great . please update soon .

Author's Response: I'm in the middle of writing chapter 8 and I should have it up by tomorrow afternoon :) I might even post chapter 9 ;D hehe

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 6: "I plan to make your life a living misery!"

oooooooohhhhh Tom and Amber r at each other throats hahahaha , lov it . lov it on it`s way hahahahaha

Author's Response: I'm gonna have them at each others throats for a couple more chapters then the fun really starts ;D hehe

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: First Day Of School & Tom's Skanky Whore

ooooooooooooooooowwwwwwww Amber and the trash talk , go girl .lol

Author's Response: I think it's the best thing I've come up since starting this series hahaha

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