Date: 07/11/12 12:40 pm Title: The keys
Aww, that's really cute of Andi... and the twins were embarrassed... cute, cute.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!!! I'm so glad that you actually read this... I mean... I really like to write, but I'm at the beginning and... yeah, I wouldn't mind if you criticized my story. I always want to hear the truth than something that the readers thought it would make me happy. So... you can tell me if something was wrong or if you didn't like it (if you want, of course, I don't want to pressure you.) :) And... if you liked it, then, you made me really really happy!!
Date: 05/17/12 01:39 am Title: The keys
I have to disagree w/ people under me. It wasn't good story, okay plot was good and if to try harder, work harder it will be okay ;) You have to write, write, write and write b/c that one is so artificial and awkward. Try to think how would you be feeling on the Andreas shoes, when your mum asking you abt sth to eat and whatever you are so politican w/ her.
I don't read it to the end, I just can't but some years hard work and you will be very good :) keep trying!
Author's Response: Thank you for your sincerity! Really, I'm very grateful because you told me what you thought. What you said to me is really going to help me in the future. I'll never stop writing and I promise that I'll try harder. I don't want to complain, but for me it's the beginning, so I hope that some years of hard work would make me way better than I am right now. Thank you again for your review!!!! :)
Date: 05/16/12 08:51 am Title: The keys
I imagine Andreas was pretty shocked when he saw the twins. I'm surprised he didn't join in. Good story. :)
Author's Response: :)) Yeah, that's a funny idea; Andreas joining in :) But I've always read stories which had Bill and Tom in the main pairing, so... I just wrote it like that. Anyway, thank you!!! :)
Date: 05/16/12 04:09 am Title: The keys
nice story!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)