Date: 05/21/12 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3: Sharp
Just delete any reviews you don't like, honey, they're not that helpful if they make you feel bad. Just carry on writing what makes you happy. There's far worse stuff on this site than a 20 year old dating a 14 year old. Good on you trying to stop the cutting. My daughter managed to break the habit and hasn't done it for over a year now. Just take one day at a time and please ask for help if you need it. Therapy did my girl the world of good.
Date: 05/21/12 07:05 am Title: Chapter 3: Sharp
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05/20/12 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sharp
-__- I'm just going to get this off now... I was trying to be nice and read the story happily without posting a comment, but now... The hell..
First of all horrible grammar.... Search for a beta-reader for yourself and save us all from reading horrible grammar and posting such "horrible" reviews... But you see these people actually care about you and want to read stories that have wonderful grammar... I'm not sure on how the hell it was even accepted.
I have bad grammar yes, but I take my time with a story and then send it off to be beta-read in which I have myself a personal one, I'm really happy with my beta reader.
I think it's really gross and creepy you have a HAVE a fourteen year old and a twenty year old DATING! It's sick! I mean, for your mind to think its cute? I feel sorry for your mind, filled with such ILLEGAL stuff.. Yuck!
I'm sorry, but I'm not now... You need to learn to take people comments to HELP you into considertion. Not get all mad and complain about someone leaving a BAD review... But these people and MYSELF are trying to help you from looking stupid on here at THF. Don't even bother replying to this, JUST save youself the time and the time of mine...
Also if you are cutting, tell your mom and get some professional help.
Date: 05/15/12 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't think I can handle much more of the badly-written melodrama. The twins are interesting, still so many questions, yet you wrote idk how long about Gustav fawning over his underage gf's overdeveloped boobs- and u repeated yourself until I felt humiliated for your sake. Sorry for the bad review I guess. I felt the first chapter had much more promise as a one-shot. You just really confused me cuz your story is tagged Completed:Yes. Please fix that if u plan to add more chapters to this story. I would like to see some realistic turmoil between the twins and an answer to why they slept together, cuz it seems so far that it was out of the blue. Ok? :)
Author's Response: Please don't give me such negative comments. I am just writing a story on how I see it. If you don't like it, then please don't read it. I'm not a very good writer, and people don't need to rub it into my face. I don't know why it says the story is tagged as completed, because I still have more chapters to write. I really don't appreciate your comments, so please only give me positive feedback.
Date: 05/14/12 05:02 pm Title: Chapter One: Memories
What the heck did I just read?...
Author's Response: If you don't like it, then don't read it. It's pretty simple. I'm not a good writer, and people don't need to rub it into my face.
Date: 05/14/12 02:52 pm Title: Chapter One: Memories
This wasn't on how I thought it was going to be... I thought that Tom was going to make Bill spit out of what was bothering him and stuff. But it was good.
Date: 05/14/12 12:03 pm Title: Chapter One: Memories
Hmm, interesting story. I feel like I just read a random middle chapter in a long chaptered fic, and it's kind of cool imagining the background context of this story. Like, Gustav w his girl, or why Tom was so drunk, if the twins had ever messed around before a bit, why Bill agreed so quick, why Tom asked to begin with. So many questions. I guess I would have liked if a few more of them had been answered, cuz you kind of sucked me into a story but didn't tell me why the odd events had happened. So cool to read tho. I hope you'll write more twincest. This one had good tension between your characters. Well done. :)
Date: 05/14/12 01:32 am Title: Chapter One: Memories
nice story