Date: 05/17/12 12:59 pm Title: Isn't It Silly?
This was so sad, touching. I wish there would be something, someone to save them both, but apparen tly there isn't. It's really tragic to see your love to fade away. Sad, but good little story... Made me want to hug them. :)
Date: 05/15/12 12:42 am Title: Isn't It Silly?
Heartbreaking yet beautiful. Please write more!
Date: 05/14/12 01:44 am Title: Isn't It Silly?
aww this was sad!
Date: 05/13/12 09:28 pm Title: Isn't It Silly?
You should elaborate on this one for sure. I mean, it was beautiful and heart wrenching and so well-written, but somehow, seems so unfininished. I absolutely loved it, though it's a one-shot and I usually don't read them, but this one kind of struck me and I had to sneak a peak. I felt so sorry for both of them, especially Tom because Bill didn't know who he was. As he was going through all the little things he knew about Bill, I almost started crying. It takes a good writer to bring out those kind of emotions in people, so yes, you should definitely keep writing, whether fanfiction or other!! Great work!!
Date: 05/13/12 06:22 pm Title: Isn't It Silly?
IŽd loved it even more if his memory came back. But this was good too.
Date: 05/13/12 06:01 pm Title: Isn't It Silly?
It was cute.