Date: 08/03/12 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
hmmm. I wonder what Bill is dreaming about.
Author's Response: i'm guessing...wet, soapy tom!
Date: 08/03/12 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! This chapter was so fluffy and adorable :) I loved the fact that Tom was kissing Bill while Natalie was on the phone. And pillowtop mattresses really are the best thing ever invented. I wish I had a Bill blanket though :(
Author's Response: such naughty boys!
Date: 08/03/12 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Happy Birthday! And cute chapter! XD
Author's Response: thanks and thanks!
Date: 08/03/12 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
That's riiight! Glucklich Geburtstag! Cute little filler. Poor Geo, walking in on that. But really, it couldda been worse, am I right?
I just picture Bill rolling around on that mattress like a kitten, when he was talking about pillow tops bwing mans greatest invention. And then poor sleepy cuddly Bill had to lose his Tom pillow later. So sad. Tom should've taken a day off. But maybe later.
Somehow I'm really dreading the Bill and Nathalie meeting. Are my worries founded or not?
Wonderful work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: oh i'm sure nat will be totally fine about it all! *shifty eyes* and can't you just picture bill being all adorable?
Date: 08/03/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
cute
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 08/03/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
sweet chapter :)
cant wait for moooooore :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 07/30/12 09:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow! Tom is totally a self righteous bastard! As if he's innocent! Thanks though. Your writing is very good.
Author's Response: no, he's not totally innocent. but there's a huge difference between him making out with bill and natalie screwing some other guy. thanks for reading!
Date: 07/29/12 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Happy birthday!!!!!!!!! l love this chapter. The argument was awesome.
Author's Response: glad you said that, cuz i think i wrote that argument 2 or 3 times before i was really happy with it. so thanks!
Date: 07/29/12 11:35 am Title: Chapter 12
wow...i'm glad to see she's gone though...and now they can move on...and what's to say she won't cheat on the other guy? she was married to tom and did it...any way...it's sweet that they'll wait...
Author's Response: or she could find a whole other way to screw up the guy's life. who knows?
Date: 07/29/12 08:41 am Title: Chapter 12
oh no just 3 chappies!? Tell me youll write a one-shot sequel to this at least! O:
Author's Response: nope, sorry. no plans for a sequel.
Date: 07/29/12 01:56 am Title: Chapter 12
yeeeeey
Author's Response: *cheers*
Date: 07/29/12 01:13 am Title: Chapter 12
I can only say...I love this story so so much!
Thanks for the update :)
Hurry up Friday and get here lol
Author's Response: thanks so much! and i'm anxious for friday too, but for a totally different reason.
Date: 07/29/12 01:09 am Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I sort of felt bad for Natalie for a while, but I don't anymore XD I'm happy they can finally really be together, and I can't wait till Friday for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: yeah! screw natalie! *shakes fist*
Date: 07/29/12 01:05 am Title: Chapter 11
Nope, didnt see that coming!!!!
Author's Response: glad to hear it! thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
gah!
that last bit <3
omgggg so loving this!
unf unf you better write the sex scene i can't waaaiiittt hnnng <3
(and happy early birthdayyyy!)
xx
Author's Response: actually the sex scene is already written. has been for a while. and thanks!
Date: 07/28/12 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Advanced Happy Birthday to You!!!
Yeah Natalie's gone and not guiltless!!! They can finally be together!!!
Author's Response: *dances* yaaay!
Date: 07/28/12 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
excellent
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 07/28/12 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm gonna wait too x3 and great update =)
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 07/28/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
Can't get mad at Natalie, don't even know why since I didn't even like her that much at first...
But yeah great chapter and only three of them really, wish you will start another story if you have the time, you are a really good author and I'll always appreciate a story of yours ;)
Author's Response: actually my next story is already done. i plan to start posting it once this one is done. thanks for the kind words!
Date: 07/28/12 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wait a minute, your birthday is the 3rd of August? Your name doesn't happen to be Allyse, right? I have a friend, Allyse, her birthday is the 3rd too. And there is someone floating around this site that lives/ used to live in my area, and I can't remember if it was you or not. Do you currently or have you ever lived in the Mishawaka/South Bend area?...sorry if that was a little weird, creepy, and stalkerish...but hey, we're bothe Leos, that's kinda cool. My b-day is the 10th.
Ahh, achtzehn, jaja ich vergisst.
So...what? Had they not shown up to catch her in the act what would she have done with Bill? Left him? Expected hom to follow her later, after she abandoned him?
I definitely get the feeling that Nat had a moment of suspicion about them there. And I hope it doesn't come around to bite anyone in the ass
You know, not that I respect adultery in any way, but its the least they could to to not bring them into your home and sleep with another person IN YOUR MARRIAGE BED! That's just low, and completely unforgivable in my opinion. And nothing Tom did even compares to adultery at all. Fighting over money is normal, especially if your trying to spend money you don't have, and y'know sometimes people go through bouts of not wanting sex.
I am certainly proud of Bill for wanting to wait until the divorce is final, even if he didn't, now would not be the appropriate time *nodnod*
Wonderful chapter! I look forward to more!
Author's Response: sorry, name's ellen, not allyse. but cool that we're both leos. happy early birthday!